Angelborn - Newly revised
I started writing out the story that plagued my mind oh so much. You guys pointed out a lot of plot holes for me, so I took the time to fill them up. OR I completely redid the whole subject. Whichever came first. Anyway:
Chapter 1: http://zekester014.deviantart.com/#/d4le2ke
I don't upload my drawings anymore, but I'll get back on that soon. In short, the Story goes like this:
A guy named Zenaku Muraki meets an alien soldier named Ruisa Na`taguar when she crashes her fighter plane by the lake he was at. Through a series of events on earth, and the help of a small group of people known as the 'Scavengers', he is soon thrust into a universe of Shin`ka; Interplanetary guardians and keepers that will only reveal themselves to a planet that has matured enough to not turn to suspicions and prejudice. A new enemy has arisen from unknown territory and has waged war not only on the Shin`ka, but also on the planets themselves. In the shadows of battle, it is up to the two of them to find a lost Shin`ka, recruit new members to the organization, prepare the planets for interstellar war, and discover the origins of an enemy that shows no mercy. And this is only the beginning.
And that's the story in a nutshell. It's actually like a trilogy, with this being the first part. So, what do you think?