Demon's Critique Collection

Thank you both, got that noted down. Now for some stuff:-

Asura;
http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...yre1/Asura.png

Finished sketch;
http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...alProfile2.png

WIP;
http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...72208FC800.jpg

Lovin that spitfire!

On Eternal: Her shoulders look stiff, I think you should loving the far one. Also, the inner sides of both of her thighs curve oddly.

Eternal: ditto on the thigh thing ^ thigh muscles curve like that,yes, but there is fatty tissue that bulges underneath it.
http://kalaalog.com/wp-content/uploa...n-study-02.png
her ribs appear slightly to wide on (our) left side, the curve of the rip should meet with the shoulder. Her upper arm needs to be a little longer and her waist a little lower. Her face looks awesome though, and the spitfire looks brilliant :)

Asura: his torso is too long, the general rule of thumb is three heads from the top of the head to the groin. you can lengthen this to threee and a half, but make sure to compensate by making the shoulders a little wider. On shoulders, they do need to be a little wider to have correct proportion in relation to the hips, but the muscle structure looks great :) I love the wrap/scarf thing, you've gotten the folds spot on, well done :D (couldn't have done it better myself :P)

@JJ - Jah, I messed up pretty bad all over on that piece, I need to do a leg study

@WRA - I would agree with the legs, I messed up pretty bad on them but personally I think the proportions are ok, I wasn't going for strict Loomis anatomy. Ehm, and on Asura his crotch does come around where you suggest, it's just obscured by the scarves :L also yeah I'll keep an eye out for the shoulder widths. Thanks, it would appear I can sort of draw other stuff now, I just wish my characters would look less crap lol

Thanks both of you.

I will just shove this head sketch here as well;

SPOILER! :

http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/...9CB1B31F74.jpg

Love the teeth and that nose!!! Trying a new style?

Yeah kind of, just trying out different stuff I guess, gonna try out some anime realism head sketches later as well :) can't be bothered working on bodies no more xD

I really like your recent stuff!

Thank you very much Cloudy ^_^ still nowhere near as awesome as you though :P

MASTER Asura! :3

style for this is awesome :3 nose may need a little more study but this is already good.
hehehe you really like this guy :3

Ooooo. I like the scary looking dude, especially the eyes.

All I have to say is ditto to the nose comment. And maybe his ear... it bugs me for some reason, I just can't place why. :3