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Thanks both of you very much!
@Shadow: Yeah, I see the problem with the breast line now. Though, I believe the chin looks fine.
@Demon: Yes, I need to be more confident in my shading!
Tried to used a wideer range of colors in my shading, but when I saved it from the GB, the colors blended together:
http://www.mangatutorials.com/forum/...7&d=1348359145
Not my character design. The hood is gosh awful and the hand looks shaky.
For the hoody I would just use less clothing folds, for the cartoony style you were using the more folds added appears to make it more messy, what I notice artists do and something im trying to get used to is to indicate clothing folds using shading rather than using distinct black lines, I would recommend investing some time in that area, I bet that would help! :D again I think you could be a bit more confident with your skin shading, but I think you will have that in mind for your next sketch :)
Thanks! Next time I'll take it slower and try to paint the folds. Also, I had used darker shading, but when transferring it, the colors got really messed up.
My scanner decided to work, so here are some traditional, pencil sketches:
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And then, here's some coloring practice (nudity):
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BUNNIES! :bunny_heartdance:
draw more of those! lolz. :) we can have a bunny marathon!
The coloring practice looks really great. its good to see that you're fearless in exploring how to do skin. The skin you made looks healthy. :cat_thumbsup:
Haha, thanks! I'm glad the skin looks good!
I'll try drawing more bunnies, but no guarantee on how good they look :D
Here's an update on one of the painting practices. I redid the face:
http://www.mangatutorials.com/forum/...4&d=1348459393
Looking good on the newest piece. The only issue that really sticks out to me is her massive forehead. It looks like she's shaved her scalp. :X The face is looking nice though. :)
Thanks a lot! Yeah, the forehead is massive, I think my reference has a receding hairline, because that's how big it is in the photo :/ I'll shorten it up, though!
Jorjy you got some good stuff. I haven't seen your thread for some time...and you've made quite a progress. The new paintings look awesome. No real crits..sorry.
Thanks so much Gedeon! I really appreciate your comments :)
I'm sorry; I was being lazy and didn't use references on this pose, so I can't guarantee it's accurateness.
http://www.mangatutorials.com/forum/...1&d=1348887902
I think my only problems with it is the shape of the face is a litte weird and the arms don't have the best shape to them.