first very important your story will mainly depend on the events, and a group of loosers about how they will struggle, and the opposite force how they gonna stop this game mainly .
Abt the events yes it should be very very much conceptual, complexe and interesting. And thats where you should concentrate. Events made should be life worthy .
It seems that your concept will make your story complex.
Wishing you luck .
thanks for the comment sir it really helps.
Originally Posted by trilokcool3
I actually like this concept. The first part with the dog struck me as a little strange but the big picture appears to be very cliché and very unique at the same time. (Will post a longer critique momentarily.)
i like the idea, but it probably needs more refining. i think it would be good if you made it so only certain events were betable. other wise the game would be hard to regulate.
actually i already renovated the plot on how it works because its hard for me to think some on the spot events such as that dog thingy.i will put a referee or sumting and he's the one who will gave an idea on how the two ppls will fight and after i watch kaiji i will put more tense on this story like playing with dice too cards etc etc
all i need to do is to sharpen my drawing and some time to draw a manuscript