http://i849.photobucket.com/albums/a...ane/oldeye.png
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Pretty good although the shading could have been much better. im not exactly what you were going with this but the anatomy is pretty ok. THe coloring....what was the goal?
Really had no goal in mind, just practice, really.
Liebe, have you switched medium? Those last two sketches doesn't look like your usual photographed drawings
I'm uploading from gb, ja, is much better, lol.
Ok, because your lines have become even more broken up than they were before, maybe you should try that loosening up video that Toasty posted last week with your new medium (tablet?)
Along with what Rubisko said, try coloring and shading with a thick brush so that it's smoother.
You drew the eye quite a bit too symmetrical. I really suggest just comparing your drawing to this photo:
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/81/23...aeb7026ec9.jpg
Notice how on the upper eyelid, the highest curve is near the inner part of the eye, and on the lower part of the eye, the lowest curve is on the outer. You also seemed to draw 2 tear ducts on each corner of the eyes. I just explained that really bad so heres a drawing:
http://i.imgur.com/8NQEa.png
Loomis actually explains this in his book (:
But you're improving duane! keep it up