Lookin' for crits, she's sitting, not on anything in particular at the moment though.
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Lookin' for crits, she's sitting, not on anything in particular at the moment though.
http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/3026/54788291.png
I love how clean your lines are, and you do a good job at adding thickness where necessary.
I have bit of qualm with the toes, they are a little bit too thin, I think, and a little too finger like (if that makes sense.) Also, the left leg (her right, our left) is turned a bit awkard. Looks a uncomfortable. The right foot (her left, our right) is a little off, too, though I can't explain it. I think it's a little too big (wide...I can't describe this well. Epic fail on my part.)
I love the design. Her clothes are well done, with appropriate wrinkles, and proportions are good. One question, since I can't make the picture larger: does she have something in her mouth? I can't tell without getting a closer look.
I like her hair, as well. Overall, this is really good :)
Thanks for the heads up, I made some adjustments to the feet, unfortunately they don't amount to much in the final illo.
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The rest of these are for a draw everyday challenge.
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your style is oh so interesting, love the clean lines. The last one reminds me alot of graffiti stuff which makes me love it.
Thank ya! Graffiti stuff is something I'm working on.
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That design on the jacket is cool
I love the clean lining and facial expressions.
Hayashida: I cheated to make it.
Pwhit: Thanks!
Feel free to Crit you guys.
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Cool stuff Sparky-J! You've definitely got some great line art as everyone has pretty much mentioned already. Regarding your latest image above.... all I can say is that his chest looks lopsided - like the one side on the right looks a little too low.
Thanks Rio! I was in a dark place on that day and only drew that guy because it's February and I have to draw something everyday. The only thing I like on him is his gunch face, so I'm rework his whole thing.
A character I've been mulling around on for a while, he has a world and everything. Dudes a treasure hunter/monster killer/titty inspector.
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