I love this. . _ .
I think it's probably my favourite thing out of everything you have ever drawn. Also the shirt reminds me of the pale man. Very cool. ;D
I like the last one but the top background is fighting me. I like that he has those outlines like hes a 3D picture and it does kinda pull that off compared to the background and you can almost see him poping out against the background. It might be because you have the yellow women on the sides obscuring the background then suddenly nothing at the top except the words and it just seems too empty right there.
Tayla: actually thats what the shirt was inspired by haha! thankyaaaa :D
psy and clock: I see what you guys mean about the background. Luckily I still have the psd file so this weekend I'll try and fix it. Do you think I should kind of crop it at the top also to have less empty space?
you have a very unique style! so i cant really tell whats wrong since i have a very different style of drawing.though i can say that i love the shadings and the faces of your characters! :)
Toast y u so awesome? >:O
I can't even begin to comprehend where you get the inspiration to draw like this. Just so cool.
This is too dope! Man, I just love cool art. this is cool, from top to bottom!
Originally Posted by toast
thankyou guys!! I've been drawing a lot on paper lately, so updating this thread is really rare lol
but I made something, in which I'm not sure about the background
I hate backgrounds =_= critic plz
HMM MANG DIS IS TUFF
Well her outlines/shadow make her look 2-dimensional, but you drew 3-dimensional objects that shes leaning on.
Hmm.. I think her mask should be a bit more symmetrical.. would cause good contrast with the rest of her and make it pop a bit more :).. especially in comparison to how well the gun was done :3.. groovy stuff!
josh: yeah I see what you mean, the fact that her lineart is thicker than the stuff in the back makes her look quite unnatural.
ego: thanks bro! Yeah, I feel dumb for not taking more time on making sure her mask was symmetrical xD
I'm working on an actual finished piece, but for now, I'm going to dump some random GB stuff here. Uh, WARNING BOOBS: