This is an update just to see if anyone wants to critique some works of mine.
So,I found an editor about 4 weeks ago,and he agreed to teach me and help me out.He has been giving me these assignments of diffrent genres and such.
For example the first one was,
The topic was a 2-paged story to start branching out from my original story...
to get me to test my limits with different genre's...
Ill post more if someone comments :)
- Bringing this thread back -As I have finished my first 5 pages,though I have about 10 as of now....
For those who are really literate.Please let me know any mistakes or anything that I can do to make this better,and anything I can refrence from.My goal is for a Light Novel.
Im using this guide as a reference as for the length of chapters and such : http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Light-Novel
First Chapter (beta) -
You are doing well. I am curious though what made you pick that name?
Hanako = Flower. You must support a flower for it to blossom. If you choose not to care for it,then it will surely die. It was just a name at first,but then i started to think about how it might integrate into the story and came up with something along those lines.
Kinda like Bleach,how it kinda sounds like a name,but has a different meaning to the writer.
Also quick thing; Hanako means little flower.
That makes the meaning even deeper :P
So,I see that there are still many people looking at this thread and will continue too.I come here very seldomly now,but if I ever have questions or if people start to ask questions and critique my somewhat finished chapte,then we can surely keep this thread going :P
If you wish to read my hard and heart felt first chapter,you may find it here:
Again I thank all who have helped me and supported me with getting me at least this far. I have much more to go,whether I finish in a year,or 10 years,it will be a story the world will not forget,and I hope that everyone who reads it thinks forward to the idea too,thanks. :)