Last of the hard stuff,I promise :P
Ok,I now fully understand passive and active voices,Thanks for going into more detail :P
And Crap,Im still no where near as good as you guys are when it comes to formatting a sentence right... ~Sigh lol,Thanks though.
And I did what you said with Word,and yeah,you're right.Changing the comma fixed it.
And lastly is the Time/setting situation with the story,and from there Ill think ill be good toe edit alone and then I might come back when I feel its good enough to be seen by an editor or so,idk.
*UPDATE* 1/9/2013 ~ Been waiting to see if someone can help with the bolded area above,but to no avail have my question been answered,sadly.
Hopefully someone will :)
Also,about boarding schools,how do they work?
Would it be right to have a man be part of an organization that covers as a place where kids of "poverty" can stay like an orphanage but also go to school?
Like would this idea be reasonable,why or why not? Thanks :)