you have a nice distinctive style, i like it! i think the shading maybe needs a little work, it looks a bit boxy and unnatural in some places where it could maybe blend a bit more....the face structure is quite good i think...well I'm only 15 i still have to learn lots myself :D but overall your stuff is good :)
thanks a bunch !! , yeh i thought that too. Il work on it :)
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