Teh neogenstru art(critiques greatly appreciated)

[neogenstru]

Some old OLD drawings, more to come later on today though

Yes I actually drew this
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p379/zgenstru/Heheheh_by_genstru-1.jpg
...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p379/zgenstru/Stuff/Uh___by_genstru.jpg

This one was quite easy
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p379/zgenstru/yugi.jpg

Toguro not so much
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p379/zgenstru/001-1.jpg

[Rio]

The pictures aren't showing. Pssst... make sure the URL ends in an image file format (i.e. jpg, gif, png, etc).

[neogenstru]

Hmm I'll re upload em again this time on my scanner that I finally got working.

EDIT: now we're in business!


http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/neogenstru-fai-135_500.jpg?t=4dfce3310220b

http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/neogenstru-cool-guy-2_500.jpg?t=4dfce3aa48be5

[neogenstru]

A monkey like charecter Sheng-li
http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/neogenstru-sheng-li_500.jpg?t=4e00e83c1b84a

Some vampire dude, might use him in later works
http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/neogenstru-vampire-2_500.jpg?t=4e00e8c58d647

[Fenn]

Whether you are going for a cartoon or realistic style, I would suggest practicing your anatomy. Draw the basic outline, shapes, or flow of your drawings with light marks and build the details on after. Creativity and motivation certainly aren't issues so you are on the right track!

[neogenstru]

Good point I noticed my drawings are a lot neater when I outline the pose I want and then add on. Gotta start doing that more often.
And thanks I owe most of my motivation to drawing this year from reading manga like One Piece, Gantz, and Berserk so much lol.

A dude with a pipe, he's supposed to be this starved scavenger like charecter
http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/neogenstru-dude-with-a-pipe_500.jpg?t=4e04e5a355b0b

Spirit form
http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/neogenstru-spirit-form_500.jpg?t=4e04e5f955f8b

[Leannah]

You're on the right track dude, everyone has to learn the basics don't worry. I'm learning the basics myself and it's HARD but I got the motivation too. Motivation is POWER you will get better and better. :)
You made me want to draw Yami Yugi again—I drew him a loooong time ago.