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06-09-2011, 05:05 PM
Hello guys..My name is LordSyafiq from Malaysia and I'm new and also an oldtimer in Old MT here... so, I hope we can know each other better well...hehehehe..Ahem!! Well let's look at the recent arts...here goes...:-

Greetings everyone,

Hope everyone alright back there and i pray to the Almighty to bless each one of you all Aminn...*prays*

I have return yet again after a period of silence and as you've predicted, not new but 2 month old recently artwork and scan it for everyone to see what I do in my secret drawings these days X33

Finalized penciling design of Force Commander Romanov and one of the Main Secret Drawing Project which I silently draws to complete the overall process. So, I'll exposed the penciling version of it and hopefully it can gives everyone an insight on what I do these days...

OK, let's move on... I use 2H, H and HB pencil to perform on the B5 size paper. Took 2 days without decent sleep and manage to complete it... This is the full version of his armored sarcophagus where he was assassinated, confined in and become the Commander. (like a Dreadnought in Warhammer 40K - Dawn of War) I used 2 songs that is Command & Conquer Red Alert The First one - Hell March and Kagamine Rin - Kokoro (Vocaloid) which suitable for the drawing.

I noticed he's like a Golem or a Dwarf style by the looks of it and way heavies (heavy)....Well, already too late as I already colored and inked it secretly in 3 version... I'd say (to myself) a tough one to be taken down....O.o My apologies for my scanning quality....TTwTT

References that I used are listed here:-
1. Optimus Prime
2. Killzone 1, 2 and 3
3. Gundam Seed and Destiny.
4. Megaman X Command Mission
5. Dawn of War 2 Retribution.
6. Starcraft 2 - Wings of Liberty
7. Mecha Musume Designs.
8. Shogun 2 Total War
9. Gundam Astray Red Frame & Blue Frame.
10. Command & Conquer - Generals & Zero Hour

He appeared in my Secret Online Manga named Commander as the Main Character. The Main Character full name is Romanov Von Castillien, a Force Commander of the Liberty Faction, a small ragtag army who opposed the Imperial rule which have betrayed them and hunt them down across the Galaxy..

Several of my other arts:-

Other recent and old arts can be found here:-

Well I'll see you all laters, I'll upload the cast of characters that involved in the Manga sometime later. I gratefully thank you very much from everyone responses~~X33

06-10-2011, 12:17 AM
Shit's as pretty as ever mate.

I see the helghast reference and love that soldier.

06-10-2011, 03:44 AM
I gratefully thank you, dearest friend X33
Nah, still have along way to go here.. and my works are lazy-have fun and ordinary style comparing to Celestial Fox and CyphressDahlia...
Haha, Romanov? Yeah, he's the main character in a secret online manga that been developed since I'm MIA from MT....

06-10-2011, 05:30 AM
omg haiiiiirrrrr. okay u have a really cool style there.... those details, contrasts in shading and designs are just too epic...loved those tokyo girls :]

06-10-2011, 11:38 AM
Greetings and I gratefully thank you for the comments, dearest friend.
Haha, many loves the TokyoGirl and nah, still need to improved better in many areas...

06-10-2011, 02:26 PM
This might sound strange since i've recently joined here, but i know you! back when i had just got into reading manga, i was surfing the net and when i found MT, i got interested in the forums and i saw your thread in the artist alley. dude, your drawings were one of the main reasons the thought of drawing mangas came to my mind!! your art and your passion for manga is amazing..:cat_thumbsup:

06-10-2011, 06:17 PM
Greetings and whoa...You found me here, Boze after DA XDD
My passion and Otaku level are ordinary comparing to other whose way more awesomeness than mine... Just love to draw, lazily have fun expressing in drawing in my ways, nothing much XDD

06-10-2011, 07:36 PM
Gah, I love how you did the hair on the last one. <3

06-10-2011, 08:30 PM
Man, I need to get back to drawing again. These a freakin' amazing, man! Not like I doubted it, though! XD

06-11-2011, 04:13 AM
Hohoo~~ Foxy~~ Miss ya a lot with everyone.. Thank you fro dropping by *hugs*
Ohoo? Foxy loves that kind of hair eh? I shll return soon with that style soon X33

Welcome back and gratefully thank you very much for the comments..
Nah, still have things to improve, my skills are rusted... Many already awesome than me...

Here's more for everyone X33

Every details can be found in my DA. Please enjoys~~X33 And I dearly appreciate everyone responses *Bows*

06-11-2011, 09:38 PM
I'm delighted every time I see romanov.

06-12-2011, 05:21 AM
I gratefully thank you and nah, Romanov still need a bit more modification as I see many errors also need to improvise some design as well...
I do not know when to come up with the Manga as I do have made it secretly...
BUT, I'll fulfill Outcast and everyone wish to see more, especially Romanov, please do scroll below although it is old:-
All the details can be found in my DA...*Bows*DOZO~~ and I gratefully thank you for any responses from everyone.

06-13-2011, 05:41 PM
I am glad to see you aren't dead! ^^

(Just so you know this is Kari)

And as always, you make me wish I had skill.

06-13-2011, 08:07 PM
Hikari @ Anna:-
Hikari?! Whoa, a coincidence of fate to meet dearest again here...
Err, haha, many are better than mine actually and I just do what I love to do...

06-13-2011, 09:28 PM
Well either way, your art is beautiful and mine is fail.

06-15-2011, 04:55 AM
Haha, dearest, I would say your art has improved regardless what your opinion is.. Each have success and failures and it's normal..
For me, in honest, you have success and failure in arts which shows its true characteristic and artistic of your arts itself.
Don't worry, each have a room for improvements and keep the interest strong and flowing (even when not drawings) to make it alive XDD

Some RL and arts for everyone X33, please enjoys~~ X33:-

06-16-2011, 09:12 PM
Hey there! Very beautiful artwork. Have you ever done any CGing? I'm surprised I don't see any. It'd be cool to see your stuff in color imo. Maybe we should bring back the color this line art thread.... :3

06-18-2011, 05:48 AM
I gratefully thank you, dearest friend X33
Nah, my works are ordinary-have fun-lazy at that point of course...
CG? *Look at left and right* You didn't see anything, my dearest friend~ *Madagascar Style and sneak away*

06-18-2011, 02:47 PM
Dang that's some crazy good neatness and creativity :D

06-18-2011, 06:50 PM
Greetings from Malaysia and it's an honor to meet ya X33
I gratefully thank you for your generous comment..
Nah, to be honest, just a lazy work and draw what I love to express...
Nothing special actually....

07-06-2011, 08:58 AM
This new artwork is a new character from Commander and Romanov second-in-command, Colonel Bismarck of the Tactical Heavies Squad... He more like Ironhide only he less talking and follow Romanov and his little sister Romina as their Bodyguard (Also since before Romanov was assassinated)...

To be honest he's like a combination of SWAT Team (Futuristic) Tarkus from Dawn of War 2, Killzone Helghast and Geara Dorga (Gundam)....I took the name Bismarck since I love History (Mostly WW2 Jerman) and saw the Battleship Bismarck, Jewel of The Kriegsmarin.. That's where it keep dormant inside me since I was 10 years old... And Colonel Bismarck just the same as the battleship style of strength and prowess in human armored suit form...

Actually he also been assassinated when protecting Romanov but barely alive.. and confined inside the armor sarcophagus... But this is only my first attempt sketch... Almost in half completion in new drawings...

There are many things can be improved and already been considered which I haven't yet expose it.. All in all, please be patient and please, enjoy what I upload for now...Usually I upload complete works... maybe my skills take sometime to turn into high gear...

This artwork was developed during 2010 when the illustration of Romanov and the cover was made. Then, comes the manga page which I always said in my deviation upload...

Yes, everyone can now on how the Manga goes and since I have a tablet.. It will be fully tone and colored. Maybe in Malaysian Comic Fiesta 2011 this December I will sell the Manga at our group booth....Still in discussion but I'll see what I can do...

As you have known, I take several references such as Megaman X Command Mission, Megaman Battle Network, Megaman Zero, Killzone ISA faction, Tiberium Wars (Kane's Nod Faction) and lots of others in my collections to make it...and combine in single drawings...

many believe it's hard to draw the details BUT I can only says, we'll see in Malaysian Comic Fiesta 2011... of course I'll upload it here as usual XDD

The one in the big panel is Colonel Bismarck younger brother, Sargeant Kritzmarck, Infantry Divison and hold the line when this battle took place before Romanov awakening from deep slumber (Like Gungrave Overdose). Haha, I'll leave to everyone judgement and opinions...

After all, too much mistakes and errors which I can see from this initial page sketch and secretly I have made several modifications to make it better.

Haha, yesh... This WIP is solely for MadmenLover45 on DA which I already finish and making final detailing as of now. She and everyone can now see the first sketch of it which everyone wondering, what will be the final outcome.....

I do know for those who love Bishonen and Bishoujo, this maybe will be their target or not.... nah, my artwork doesn't seem anything comparing to the others here...

I wish Happy (Belated) Birthday to my dearest friend, MadmenLover45 and she can now see her favourite drawing which she requested X33 Lucky her XDD

I gratefully thank you for all your faves, comments, supports and everything. I appreciate it dearly. I shall return soon with the completed ones after so long...

Greetings everyone,
Well, it's been a long time eh, I present here another Chiitan (DA) fatherly birthday artgift solely for her...

And yes, I'm trying a new techniques which still in development and trying to find the best recipe and ingredients for it... But, almost completed it as usual. I want everyone to see it's first impressions and views of it....

I don't know Chiitan-chan what will say about it though especially she is beside her lovely father..... For me, too may mistakes and errors as usual but already modified secretly.... Happy (Belated) birthday my dearest daughter and I shall post the completed version soon X33

I gratefully thank you for all your faves, comments, supports and everything. I appreciate it dearly. I shall return soon with the completed ones after so long...

07-06-2011, 07:39 PM
Magnificent! I humbly pay my respect mate! This is outstanding! Seeing your pics makes my blood boil from excitement really! It only makes me want to improve even more! ^^ how can you draw so many details, and still be able to draw the same character again?

07-06-2011, 07:48 PM
Oh yeaaaa I've been meaning to comment here but kept forgetting xD. Great stuff as usual man. As always you have that unique style of yours on lock.
The guys face in the bottom pic does look a bit odd to me for some reason but I can't put my finger on it...
Anyways, keep at it man, always have loved your work.

Really just wish you'd try coloring things a bit more haha.

07-07-2011, 04:17 AM
Greetings from Malaysia and I gratefully thank you for your generous words and comments, dearest friend X33 *Gentlemen Bows*

Nah, too epic credits you give me which I don't deserves it.. I'm just an ordinary-lazy and have fun Otaku Style.. Nothing special...
I used what people always used in everyday life, that is "Memorization techniques".. I research other drawings and store it inside my brain then merging the details of my own version to my drawings... I prefer to use "Combination Style" of American & Japanese artistic to make it stand out from others... I recognize my own trademarks of OC and that's how I can redraw them back in many ways.. Better than before.

I have a journal of tip in DA: http://lordsyafiqnaz.deviantart.com/
Hopefully it will helps Portogas and everyone X33 Please, enjoy and have fun X33

Greetings Gunzet and I gratefully thank you for your generous words and comments, dearest friend X33 *Gentlemen Bows*
It's been a while eh? Thanks for dropping by and glad you still love it...Nah, I prefer to call it lazy and ordinary...
I will upload the finished version, I just hope it fix everything...Coloring? Hehe, you and everyone shall know soon X33 Thank you very much~~X33

07-07-2011, 11:48 AM
hmm.... maybe i should use adobe illustrator more to have those types of linear art

07-08-2011, 04:21 AM
Greetings from Malaysia, Ramiel and it's an honor to meet you *Bows*
Yes, you can use Adobe Photoshop and Illustrator combined with a Tablet to maximize the lines OR going traditionally with G-Pen or Ballpoint pen. Each to their own methods.

07-10-2011, 07:45 PM
youre really good at drawin manga/anime. the work looks pro level to me. i cant see anything thats wrong

08-23-2011, 07:33 PM
Greetings from Malaysia, Kine and I gratefully thank you for your comments and kind words..
To be truthful, mine is ordinary comparing to many out there and here...and of course, lazy making it....

Peace Be Upon Everyone and Greetings~~

It's been a while.. I apologize for my absence these days and a bit busy with some issues and some drawing request also preparation for Malaysian Comic Fiesta 2011 this December where I'm making some products and my first comic debut at the convention...... Now, the artworks are piling up and I shall slowly upload it for everyone...

Here I presented one of my friend drawing request and yes, my skills way off now and rusted badly...Epic Failure I am of course...*Bows* Gomenasai if the works really worst... Maybe I'm not at my best performance these days..

Actually... This is Reah Rozenburgh, Sephiria (My OC Artgift xXTokyoGirlXx) little Imouto in ChapterMaster..Finally making her first appeared in my current skills... Gonna need some hard training back on track....

This is the Logo of my booth named Dark Frontier in Malaysian Comic Fiesta this December. Yes, it's Romanov emblem and it's first comic will be making a debut there. I shall update to everyone later on. I do apologize for long absence TTwTT...

Well, Please enjoys~~~
Domo Arigatou Gozaimasu~

08-24-2011, 01:00 PM
Good to see you haven't lost your touch Naz.
truth be told, i'm kinda jealous...

08-24-2011, 07:06 PM
Greetings Hell_Baron..
Eh, jealous? Haha, I not prefer jealousy BUT I more to motivations and inspirations to improve better. Jealousy will hinder your advances in arts as I did experience it numerous time..X33

Haven't lost my touch? Actually it already lost many and rusted...Need more hand-breaking routine practice back on...XDD I gratefully thank you for your generous words and comments *Bows*

08-24-2011, 07:38 PM
If it makes you feel any better you are now on my hit list! :D Awesome Pencil-art. Could i ask if you went to any art-classes?

08-25-2011, 03:25 AM
Greetings from Malaysia, Gedeon *Bows*
I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and words. Nah, Just a normal routine for me to draw, nothing much.

I didn't take any art classes, BUT I teach my own Anime art class back in 2010. Now retired and making Freelance style arts... I mostly use my interest and inspirations from everyone to develop my arts over these years since 2005. Hope it helps X33

08-25-2011, 04:04 AM
Might I ask about your daily drawing process? (For example, references used; any specific material you like to focus on when you draw; routines you've picked up along the way?)

08-25-2011, 06:16 AM
Greetings Hamachi, glad to see you *Bows*

Hmm, it does requires a bit of explanation but I'll keep it brief.. I used all round materials and mostly Songs, Comiket Doujinshis, Artbooks and Illustration also my all time favourite, Games...Whether American, Japanese nor Korean, I'm all to it...

I would mostly focused on the lines as it is the giver of life in drawings, and balanced it with B/W also the anatomy compositions....It involves many things BUT what I usually aimed is the Souls and feelings of the drawings...:cat_huh::cat_huh: Heck, sometimes I don't think much and I just do all the way without realize it...Failures and Success is Life so don't be disappointing when it didn't goes your way..Even Pro have gone through this...

My routines is mostly in Patience and practicing solid basic arts (like lines, shading, B/W like in Art Class) also open minded yet keen to learn from everyone (Beginner's to Pro)...Mostly I just randomly do my works but each person has their own ways..No standards...

Mostly my tutorials is in my DA journal (please type "lordsyafiqnaz", you'll recognize it)...and hope it helps Hamachi and everyone. I gratefully thank you~ *Bows*

09-07-2011, 09:20 PM
Your robot is SO beautiful!
And the girl playing the violin is sooo cute.
I'm in love with your art.
Teach me xd

09-13-2011, 09:44 AM
Greetings Everyone and I Pray to the Almighty To Bless Everyone also to the World and MangaTutorials staff and forumers..*Bows and Prays*

Greetings from Malaysia, Leannah and it's an honor to meet you Gentlemen Bows*
Haha, I gratefully thank you for your generous words and comments, I shall strive better in future projects and drawings X33
In my DA (Please type "lordsyafiqnaz", at the journal I have readied some tutorials for everyone, thank you) have all the tips of drawings Leannah need X33
Hope to make a comeback with something different *Bows*

I apologize for the long delay and yet haven't submit anything for a while.... Here, I upload one of two new things I done..BUT there are many and still haven't finish celebrating Hari Raya..

Here, yes another Romanov cover Illustration that I was preparing for Malaysian Comic Fiesta 2011 this 17th and 18th December in KLCC and busy with many products that I shall be doing there...
Truthfully, there are many things I still need to be fixing while the comic have progressed BUT I haven't found the right recipe for the cover of the comic...Probably the angle which have many mistakes and proportions... I'll try my best to give it souls and feeling...

The link to Malaysian Comic Fiesta 2011 is here ------->www.forums.comicfiesta.org (http://www.forums.comicfiesta.org)

Here's the second one featuring Romanov (The Gas masked Man) Imouto (Japanese) means Little Sister which I haven't put her name yet...

Mostly I have done the lineart and yes, it's completed with coloring and will make the debut in Malaysian Comic Fiesta this December in KLCC....

Hmm, not much I can say about it BUT mostly Valkyria Chronicles, Gungrave, Starcraft, Red Alert and Dawn of War 2 have emerged from the drawings.... Speaking of Dawn of War, MUST HAVE THE GAME!!! FOE THE IMPERIUM~~!!

The info is here ----->http://asia.gamespot.com/pc/action/warhammer-40000-space-marine/index.html?tag=topten%3Ball%3B2 (http://asia.gamespot.com/pc/action/warhammer-40000-space-marine/index.html?tag=topten&#37;3Ball&#37;3B2)

I shall keep everyone updated about the Manga and there are many things I have researched and will be tested in here....I hope it will entertain many.

I gratefully thank you for everyone supports and responses X33 Take care everyone and I deeply apologize for my long absence X.x

10-23-2011, 11:03 PM
Greetings and Peace Be Upon Everyone,
Here's some new updates, please, enjoys~~:-

First of all I would like offer my deepest apologies to DivineDesires on DA for making her fanart of Anfang real late... And also Congratulations, your wish have come true.. I didn't ask anything in return BUT I'm gratefully thank you by her permission to draw and learn her characters also polishing my techniques to improves my drawings X33

The Characters are Emil and Delaila which appears in DivineDesires (DA) @ MemaiShirosaki comic in SmackJeeves, everyone should check it out.. It's-One-Of-A-Kind, I tell ya... Well, many mistakes and yeah, I do feel bad to keep it this long...and on top of that I'm a bit busy, so better upload it before I totally forgotten it...

So, here's a bit detail of the drawing... Remember xXTokyoGirlXx Sephiria (OC artgift which I give her, in the DA gallery) this is her Imouto (Little Sister), the Nurse Priest which still unclaimed by anyone X33... and she's clinging to Hardigen, Tiberius Twin....(also in the DA gallery)... Was done during my worktime, and a Nurse in the Hospital where I worked asked me for it.... 2 hours to be exact while playing my PSP game - Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's.....

Actually my skills are way rusted....Some major anatomy errors and I do look forward to improve myself better with the drawings in new environments... Thank you very much for everyone supports... Please enjoy Sephiria little Imouto-chan, Reah and her lover Hardigen X33

Another artwork which I have done it a loong time ago BUT didn't upload it due to touching up many of the forgotten artworks...And all of it are belongs to my dearest friend *Looking at my long lists*

CONGRATULATIONS~~!! MadMenlover45, your wish have come true BUT I blamed myself for not submitting it earlier due to many "Obstacles" in my life...I'm very glad I can finish it and delivered my promises.. Whew~ Although have many major mistakes and yeah, I'll leave it to everyone comments and judgements...

Another "sealed arts" and It's the long awaited Sky Commander, Captain Kanami Tenzai of the Air Raider Squadron.

It's all started because I bought Transformers : Generation One comic for researching Mechanical Designs especially Jetfire and Air Raid (From Transformers : War For Cybertron PC game) and also Soviet Conscript from Red Alert 3. So, I combined with Hatsune Miku and Black Rock Shooter to form Kanami The Air Raider..

If you do know Force Commander Romanov in my DA, Kanami is his Sky Commander (More like Thaddeus from Dawn of War 2) under his command....Actually, it was completed long ago, but remained hidden till now... I gratefully thank you for everyone responses and supports. *Bows*

For the first time....My second colorings which I kept hidden for a long time of Tiberius Vearnheim.... Also, it is special for someone, that's right... KuwiRules145 on DA, CONGRATULATIONS and also my deepest apologies for making you wait for along time since I can't decide which color matches his personality.... So, in the end, German Emperor and Nazis Gestapo were mixed....Well, I'll leave to her to decide along with everyone...

The colorings I only used Staedler coloring pencil, with Ballpoint pen Inking also 2H pencil to perform it.... Well, many mistakes as usual BUT I finally realized my skills of coloring were dormant.... Now, it was went berserk and WALLA!...Anyway, more uglier than I thought....huhu

I'm back again with one WIP, which I have been long forgotten to made it BUT eventually triggered after this event...

YUP, Dawn of War: Space Marines (PC and PS3 game) TOTALLY knocked myself out of pure inspirations and haven't finished it yet.... So, I made the fanart today at work and still unfinished, many things shall be changed... We'll see what I can do and hope the knowledge can be obtain by everyone X333

This character is DIFFERENT from my OC Tiberius and I shall revealed the details after we see the finished one X33

I gratefully thank you for everyone comments and supports X33 Take care ne? Laters...

10-24-2011, 01:20 PM
OTL I bow before the god of line art!

Been a long time since I've seen your work and it just keeps getting better and better. :3

10-24-2011, 02:40 PM
TROLOLOL! i think i found one thing that (seems) wrong to me!!! Id say that your hands are a bit short. Especially in the first pic, i think that the elbows are too high, but thats just mine 2 cents.

10-24-2011, 09:41 PM
I gratefully thank you, Kasey...WHAT THE.. I'm not a GOD of Lineart... Didn't deserve that title....
Many are better than mine truthfully...
Haha, glad I have updated the recent ones, and you love it X33

I gratefully thank you, Gedeon.. Good eyes, even 2 cents means a lot and future improvements can be made X33

10-25-2011, 12:22 AM
your art is pretty awesome, however I must critique since this isn't a boast thread, it's a "help please" thread.

As I cannot find faults in the current images, I issue a challenge. Try finding a style of art that is unbecomming. Like cartoons, life art, abstract or what have you, and try drawing in that style. Changing styles only helps you grow

10-27-2011, 04:17 AM
Greetings Maxx and I gratefully thank you for your critiques and comments..
I appreciate it dearly X33

Haha, the Challenge Issue, I must say I will wave the white flag BUT do not worry as I'm a bit busy with a game project as of now (Will be informed) and an Anime Convention this December in Malaysia. So, Maxx challenge have already been underway several years ago before Maxx issued it here..

I gratefully thank you and I shall be back with something that meet your requirements X33

Greetings Everyone,
*Wheeze* Huu~~ I'm back with a new work and took me 3 days to finish it... and my hand are all blue due to frozen blood when drawing....not to mention I'm having a series of small fever after finishing it...

Haha, yup, as you all already known, it's Kagamine Len in Karakuri Burst Version (I never heard the song, only search references to make the illustration).... AND it was requested by KinTsuchi93 (DA) @ Leftenant L. Wanderer (FB) 3 days ago and went on working on it straight.... Finally FINISHED without decent sleep...Lucky her~ Just hope she doesn't hunt me down for this... I'll keep it to myself hehe~

How should I say.. Too many mistakes and I always facepalm since I say it to myself "Aww Dangs~~ A missing piece, Kagamine Rin to complete the set!!" then again, Kintsuchi93 doesn't inform of Rin involved....nevermind, I have backup plans for these lovelies (Rin & Len)....

Yeah, my hands almost fall off this morning and turn blue after all the lining drawing... The arduous task so far, nevertheless I have learned many things....

Please enjoy Len in Karakuri Burst version ARGIFT for KinTsuchi93 and all copyrights of Vocaloid belongs to their respective owner, IT IS NOT MINE..

I gratefully thank you for your comments and supports. I look forward to the next drawing with everyone X33

10-28-2011, 05:00 PM
first thing that caught my eye on this pic is his mouth... what is in his mouth?

I don't know if it's just me, but the hat looks a little too round. heads are egg shaped, so wouldn't the hat be the same?

As for the sword, it looks a little inconveneant how it is held. As it is a box shape, most people allow the corners to sit into the creases of the nuckles, however you pressed the corners into the muscle itself. I would have turned the hand up a bit to accomadate.

On a more personal note: I am sorry to hear about your blue hands. but this looks awesome

10-28-2011, 06:49 PM
I gratefully thank you for your critiques and comments, Maxx..
You have keen ayes, I'll give ya the honors...

Hmm, that would be the ribbon line that he's trying to loose from the chain..
Haha, probably the angle mistakes that I made and lack of 3Dness to make it more logical..That's right, the sword is a fatal mistakes which I made and already review it after I finished the drawings... That's where my dissatisfaction is..

Don't worry about my blue hands, that's how I do my drawings every time since first drawing in 2005...Again, I thank you for your generosity, I'll be sure to post something soon for everyone X33

10-30-2011, 08:43 AM
Greetings Everyone, an UPDATE:-

Haha, looks like I'm back again, this time, after a while too much penciling... Now time for a change, INKING...

I presenting here Emperor Tiberius (My Copyright OC) in his Chibi Mode for the ChapterMaster series Card.... I hope to make something for December, like a product. So, here I come up with the Bookmark series and Character Cards style... So far I ONLY REVEALED one out of 6 that I made, let's see.. Miku, Rin, Romanov, Reah & Sephiria (My OC's in the gallery), Space Marines and this numbers just adding up... DO not know what I might come out next...

Yup, fully inking today (Takes one whole day with many breaks)... and also my hands turning blue again....Of course, with many mistakes in the process...So far, ONLY I haven't revealed the colored yet, since B/W would be enough for now...This one will be out in December along with the rest that I'm making...

Go on ahead and please, enjoy Tiberius in Chibi Mode... He's eager to have fun with you all...
I gratefully thank you for everyone responses, faves and supports, I look forward for the next future drawings X33

10-30-2011, 04:43 PM
Really good, strongly resembles Manwha.

10-30-2011, 05:51 PM
Greetings from Malaysia and pleasure to meet you, Captain_Neko X33
I gratefully thank you and yesh, Manwha, Anime and American arts are my source of inspirations and combinations X33

10-30-2011, 06:04 PM
it really looks amazing. the only thing wrong that I see is that the skull ball's nose looks a little crooked. and trust me, I looked hard to help you out.

10-30-2011, 06:09 PM
I gratefully thank you appreciate your efforts dearly, my dear friend *Bows*
Please don't strain too hard on your eyes to look for it.. Yeah, the skull base look does like crooked... Hmm, I guess I need to triple check my new works after this, doesn't like those common mistakes to reoccur...

10-31-2011, 09:59 PM
Your inking is other worldly! And I gratefully thank you for posting on MT! One thing I did see on the last one is that he seems to be a TINY bit off balance sitting on the skull. the skull sorta tilts to the left, and naturally his legs follow the tilt, but his upper torso is still vertical with no tilt. again this is SO SO SO small it might not even be worth talking about. but its worth noting if you never saw it before. Do you use a ruler when inking?

10-31-2011, 11:58 PM
Greetings NWAP and pleasure with honor to meet you, dearest friend X33
I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and critiques X33
Haha, I give you credits for spotting the mistakes, which I have recognized it long ago, BUT it never hurts to remind it again XDD
Actually, I trust my hand that do the jobs than ruler (except for comic panels and perspectives) to making most of my drawings X33

11-01-2011, 10:58 PM
Gettin' better, Commandant!

11-19-2011, 11:38 PM
Greetings Sylux, I hope you do well and alright (Not to mentioned with the lovelies, aye mate? *Jack Sparrow Mode*)
Just lazy works as usual XDD

UPDATES after a long silence:-
Peace Be Upon everyone and Greetings,
May the Almighty Bless everyone and the World aminn~ *prays*

Looks like since my absence with artworks make it look lonely here.. Well, nevertheless, some good news for everyone and here I am returned again... Of course, with an artwork..

It's almost time for the Malaysian Comic Fiesta this December... And I was frequently busying myself with some hand-made products including what everyone saw here, Yup, my first debut of the Manga named Commander (Actually an experimental comic and see how the market going)... It's a cover and A4 size poster.. and also this is the lineart version and I haven't finished everything including the coloring of it.. Going to take some time...

The cover featuring Force Commancer Rom (Full name - Romanov Von Castillien @ Rom, nickname- Romy) and his little Loli sister, Iris Von Castillien @ Iris, the Hero and Heroine of the story.

I used 2H, H and 2B Mechanical and wooden pencil to bring out the overall lines... Kinda reminds me greatly of Code Geass, Gungrave, Killzone series (PS2 and PS3), Space Marines (Warhammer 40K Dawn of War), Gundam, Valkyria Chronicles and Busou Shinki : Battle Masters by the expressions... Actually the story concentrated in those I mentioned...

To make this expressions, the songs I mainly used are:-
1. Dawn of War: Space Marines (PC) - Titus Theme
2. Journey To The Line by Hans Zimmer
3. TRANSFORMERS EVO by Jam Project
4. Fuel Of War - Transformers: War Cybertron (PC)
5. World Chaos - Dawn of War Chaos Rising
6. Kannaduki no Miko (Anime OP) - Re-Sublimity
7. Code Geass - Mosaic Kakera

Nonetheless, I DO detected major perspectives and anatomical errors which leads to awkward view (Waist level)... since it view from ground (Like you're lying on the ground looking up or sitting)... I'll leave to everyone to judge it as usual... Epic failure this artwork as I know it..TT.TT

Well, this year I only do a little only and very limited edition to see how far the market goes... That includes Touhou and Vocaloid and one or two of my originals (Character card or Bookmark, haven't decided maybe next week)... If all goes well or not, the comic shall be made online with my friend, Shinigami-X (DA)

I almost forgot, Shinigami -X @ Scott another Illustration also underway, which one? That will be answered soon XDD

I gratefully thank you for your generous faves, comments, critiques and supports... I hope to see you all later with something new since my health conditions complicates me to do drawings these days... Forgive me and May the Almighty Bless you all aminn~ X33

11-19-2011, 11:47 PM
Ack! Don't point that at me!!

11-20-2011, 02:04 AM
*Click* Too late....

11-20-2011, 04:50 PM
Well haya and Jai won't be happy.

Commander pretty awesome as usual, but i agree with you that the perspective isn't as you wanted ^-^' ITs like they are looking at the floor
at someone, but not at us. And it seems as we (us) are standing.

11-21-2011, 09:33 AM
I'm not sure if I see the same thing as you, Ged, with where they're looking, but I agree that the picture would be more dynamic with a little more extreme worm's eye perspective applied to the characters. The angle of the guy's right (our left) hand seems off to me - like it should be angled up more to the left, but aside from that awesome as usual.

11-21-2011, 02:00 PM
first, I want to comment on the irony I see with North American associations that make this picture interesting. I live in north america so I don't know if it's the same as the other places in the world but the x on his hat reminds me of the Southerner flag of America, which is associated with racism and such (American Civil War) and the skull itself is negative. Along with the look of the coat that reminds me of a nazi officer, I would say this is a villan. But the recent drawing you put, with his sister (or any woman) holding him for protection and feeling safe in his arms makes me question the view of who the villan is in the world as, to her, he is the good guy. Like I said, I find it ironic.

As for your floor view, I feel like it's part of a backstory. Man tries to harm girl, Ramy (as I love that nickname) comes in, kicks him down and this is what he sees as Ramy tells him never to harm the girl. Being the girl is his sister just adds to the suspence. However the main point remains that I wouldn't call it a fail on your perspective or anything, but a compliment to it.

11-21-2011, 11:34 PM
I love your art and the lines and detail are amazing as well as the poses you use.

The one major thing I see here is a massive contrast between your styles when it comes to male and female, I feel you are giving the males a more realistic and correct proportion and appearance but then when you draw the girls they are much more simple looking, bubbly eyes and disproportionate body proportion almost child-like appearance.

You could try using more reference when it comes to drawing women to make the style fit more or leave it as is, I'm not sure if this is intentional but it just stands out a lot to me and doesn't seem to flow.

11-22-2011, 05:03 AM
Aye aye matey~ Nah, just kidding and I know Jai will be upset...
I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and critiques, dearest friend X33
Yes, there are many debates regarding to the new Illustration I made and actually, I DID looking at it back after completion and face-palm to myself "Aww nuts, major contrast of balance and mistakes"....I hope to return again with some improvements and take your advice in minds.

I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and critiques, dearest friend X33
My epic credits to you for spotting the mistakes and offering generous advice of correcting it.. Truly appreciate it, it seems I lack some "dynamic" angle and expressions. I will take this matters in my mind and consideration in making future works soon..Cheers~

I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and critiques, dearest friend X33
Yes, you have pointed out the main combinations of what I love at, History (History Channel) and I'm sort of a freak in it... Southeners@The Confederates, Nazis and a mix of anime Mecha are what I used to create him, there numerous others..

Ironically, as you have mentioned, it gives mixture opinions and expressions to different people.. Yes, the Manga will be out in December and I'll be sure to inform everyone here to read it online to know them both better (IF you all have the free time, no forcing)...

Sometimes, you imaginative expressions and interpretive meaning of mine and others drawings stunned me, not to mention the details of your explanations... My thanks and credits to you and yeah, maybe too much modesty and always says failure makes my arts a bit restricted as many says, even though I can do better without these obstacles hinders me... It'll take time and I'll be sure to come back with something new... Cheers~

I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and critiques, dearest friend X33
My grateful thanks and credits to you, Cloudy-chan for pointing the major contrasty of my both version of female and male... Correctly, it doesn't flow where the version mix up and impede the drawing impact it suppose to deliver, I was researching back on some anime, games and drawings based on Cloudy-chan and everyone comments here for the moment.. Let's see, I'm playing Black Rock Shooter, Fate Extra, Project Diva Extend and Valkyria Chronicles II now to enhanced it back...

Actually, to be honest.. I don't not know IF this intentional, BUT I leave my passion overtakes me when drawings without thinking too much on the overall outcome... Haha, as I'd say "each have their own opinion" and I'll try my best to improve and gain new insights based on everyone comments, critiques and supports here... Again, I gratefully thank you *Hats down*

P/S: My highest thank you and unlimited credits to everyone who have the time to visit and drop comments, critiques and supports here...One that I cherish it forever. Hope the knowledge that I have here can help everyone improves and succeed XDD

11-29-2011, 03:30 PM
Greetings and Peace be upon everyone, LordSyafiq here *Bows*

I pray to the Almighty to Bless Each of you and the World for eternal prosperity, longevity and tons of blessing Aminn~ *prays*

Haha, it's been a while since I'm absence in here, everyone can guess now why I'm here and yes, a new, commission art by Hecterian 2 days ago when he requested it and now it's completed....As usual with lots of mistakes and epic failure, my skills way rusted....TT.TT

The art features Hecterian (DA) Crosser (which the art done by Third-Eye-Crow in DA) against my OC, FritzGerald Odin (That is also Chiitan (DA) Bishonen Father in my gallery) to bring out Crosser aura into it... Haha, more like pure brawl and strength to determine who is the best... And Fritzy (nickname) already took a hit and bleed with a smile.....

The request came 2 days ago, when Hecterian requested he wanted Crosser in my version and I researched on the art and make some twisted imaginations on my own during the process..... I was told Crosser will be look angry and I have found his partner, that is my OC FritzGerald Odin to maximize the output...When I looked back, an old version of Bionic Commando with Marvel style of combinations, also Manga speed lines....Interesting BUT my lack of skills and efforts may damaged the overall composition since I wasn't in my fullest ability to perform my usual routine....I'm having fever this week BUT then again I have stressed myself without I realized it....

Then again, my mistakes on perspectives, the body measurements and the angle composition may bring some awkwardness, nevertheless I have done my best to deliver what I can in this art.. I'll leave the judgements to everyone...

Well, time for me to have rest and may the knowledge and the artwork provide some insights and amusements since my absence.

I deeply apologize and gratefully thank you very much from everyone responses X33 Have fun~~~!!! *Kitty Sleep Mode*

11-29-2011, 05:47 PM
Again you are being too hard on yourself, your art is amazing!!!!

however I do see one problem... it is that Crosser's right hand seems too closed. I grabbed my arm where Crosser is grabbing Fritzy and my fingers aren't quite closed. Crosser seems more to be doing a fist rather than holding a thick item. So I suggest just changing the angle of the fingers to two 45 degree angles rather than two 90 degrees in order to add thickness to the arm he is holding. This will also expose the underside of his finger joint...

hope that helps

11-29-2011, 05:50 PM
I only see a little bit of proportion mistakes concerning Fritzy's hands. Pretty awesome!!! Wanted to see if you could do a pic with a lot of movement and action! The faces are epic!

12-08-2011, 04:27 PM
I gratefully thank you for your generous critiques and comments, dearest friend X33
Not to mention some spanking on it... Maybe my negativity chains me these days, always look down on myself...

Haha, you critiques does helps a lot in tremendous ways and again, I gratefully thank you..
Let's hope the future works bears some improvements X33

I gratefully thank you for your generous comments, dearest friend X33
Haha, I hope the next one meets your and everyone expectations X33

Greetings and Peace Be Upon Everyone,
I pray May the Almighty Bless Each of You and the World and hope everyone here doing fine and well in your routine activity Aminn~~ *Prays*

It's been a long way journey and near the Malaysian Comic Fiesta event also Christmas then 2012... Truthfully, I still have long-harsh yet adventuring road of learning to improves myself and skills of drawings... So many things to do with so little time given...

Haha, I believe I almost rambling senseless again, well, everyone knows as usual I'm here BUT this time it's different... Let's just say that I have been researching, experimenting and have fun in hiding all this time to maximize and improve myself.... And come out with this artwork which still depicting my failures and laziness...

Yes, as everyone who already saw much of my Tiberius and his Chibi Lineart previously.... I have tried to place the colors which suits him best along with the mood and expressions of the work....

To be honest, this is just the base coloring, and already the other phase have been underway while I'm reviewing some of the Illustrations Books I have to enhanced it further... As I have mentioned it's still in early stages and will be changed unnoticed...

I was dilly-dallying with PhotoShop and my Mouse (You all heard it right, mouse NOT Tablet) to understand on the basic of free hand mouse lining along with solidify my skills on it... Everyone surely ask, why I didn't use tablet even though I HAVE one? Nope, I want to feel the hardship of Pro's who went using mouse to understand first what they gone through then once I have build up my confidence, Tablet is next to applying more advanced one.... Let's see, 7 layers (Base, and Colors) with a little editing here and there...

All in all, everyone is the judge here, for me... This is far from over and this drawing shall be in Comic Fiesta event, while I'm moving around... Those who are lucky, there's only ONE of it I printed out in 100 gsm Inkjet paper with HQ (High Quality) printing to be given on who find me firstly XDD

Next year I hope I can finally colored my works after so long of traditional methods and NOW, with my Manga, Commander shall be launching in Christmas approaching... Let's see what will happen next when the cover in Full color which I haven't exposed yet...

I gratefully thank you to everyone for every responses, faves, comments, critiques and for those who attended Malaysian Comic Fiesta, I hope we can have a BLAST and lots of fun X33
Best regards and prays also wishes to everyone and my beloved watcher *Bows* Laters~~

12-08-2011, 06:10 PM
Kick-ass as usual, friend!

12-08-2011, 07:20 PM
IMO, the one with the two guys fighting doesn't suffer so much from anatomical issues as it does from composition issues. The composition is too flat and cramped for the poses you're trying to convey. They look like they're kinda stacked on top of each other and the movement doesn't follow through in the poses. The punches look like they're being swung entirely from the shoulder and the impact against the guy on the right is at the wrong angle. Try to space out your characters more when doing fighting scenes and employ perspective when necessary. Try to avoid doing fight scenes in eye-level, full front PoV if possible and don't be afraid to draw characters from the back or the side, if it suits the composition.

I have a problem, too, where I feel most comfortable if you can see the character's face. But I learned that you don't always need it in the picture. In fact, sacrificing the appearance of the face for compositional reasons could make the overall picture much better. example:


Don't be afraid to show the character's back to the viewer.

12-08-2011, 10:46 PM
wow, I will feel like an ass on this, but I think I should ask what is in your king's mouth? it looks like a cigarette however two things: IF there is that much smoke from it, normally it's red hot, so I would have added a red line in your black ones.

Also the butt end is normally not black.

other than that, I see no problems... keep up the awesomeness

12-09-2011, 07:18 PM
Wow Maxx really I mean it's seriously fucking obvious that it's a cigarette dude

12-10-2011, 03:46 AM
Actually I was also thinking it could be a piece of rope or something.. I know Black Beard used to tie cannon wicks into his hair and light them to make himself look monsterous to his opponents. Thought it could be something like that...

12-10-2011, 04:04 AM
Whoa that's actually really cool

12-21-2011, 11:27 AM
Greetings and I gratefully thank you for your generous long comments and critiques, dear CypressDahlia Sensei *Bows* Glad to see you dropped by and miss ya a lot X33

I didn't know we both have the same problem back then, and I'm relieved to know there's an alternative to improve it further by reading you comments... Hmm, looks like it takes some experimenting and practice to get it right... I do know my skills are rusted way almost beyond fixing, a failure I am...

Again, I gratefully thank you and look forward from Cypress Dahlia and everyone C&C in future drawings. Love ya all~X33

Many thought it was a cigarette but it turns out otherwise XDD I also the same thought of it..

I gratefully thank you for your generous comments and critiques dearest friend X33
Yeah, I did noticed it after many times looking back at it and thought of making another new one which is will be later...

My skills totally rusted this whole time, need dome space to enjoy Life and Scenery to lighten up the stress and burden that plague me...

I hope to make vast improvements when I'm returned X33 Epic thanks Man X33

Greetings everyone and Peace Be Upon Each of you Aminn~
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y192/lordsyafiq_naz/375471_318180174869338_100000320742467_1124515_183 0230310_n.jpg

Haha, I think many shall focused on seeing the picture that I uploaded and yes, your eyes didn't deceive you, it's the Commander Manga that I've been telling everyone.

It will be debuted this Christmas somewhere around 25th to 27th December, not long now XDD Some of it you see here, is REJECTED (only some) and the rest will be uploaded online during the launch, just mixing it up to masked the real one that hidden X33

Although I didn't expect my Manga shall meet everyone expectations BUT I'll try my best for you all X33

I already finish most of it, and I gratefully thank you for your responses, critiques, comments, supports and faves etc etc..
This is a Christmas Gift to everyone, please be patient for my next announcements X33

See ya laters and thanks X33

12-21-2011, 01:43 PM
Well one more thing to look forward to during the holidays :D

12-21-2011, 03:57 PM
Is it published?

12-23-2011, 10:00 AM
I do hope it meet everyone expectations and requirements X33
C&C always appreciated XDD

That my friend, the answer shall be in Christmas for everyone X33

04-02-2012, 02:55 AM
no mean to bring up a old thread... but did this manga ever come out!! I was very excited for it!