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weez18
06-09-2011, 02:01 PM
go easy on me lol ive only been drawing for 3 months now n manga tutorials is the only site ive used to improve.. n a couple others that rio told me to use..

ok so here are some of my drawings..i know there are ALOT of mistakes..lol

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/elfgirl.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/alice.jpg



http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/21elementfire.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/saya.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/request.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/18Angel.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/15horrorzombie.jpg

ram
06-10-2011, 05:55 AM
1st picture.. .... you still got a lot to go when it side view... usually the face should be 1/4th of the head or something... (not sure it's just my observation and this is just me talking :) ) and the neck looks like misplaced.. >.<...
2nd picture..... she looks like she has a weapon in the knee cause it's so harp lol!... >.< (other viewers don't look at me as someone bad were already close friends)
3rd picture...... I'm not expert with chibi..(loli maybe but not chibi)
4th picture..... the normal width of a girl's hips should be the same with the shoulders..
5th picture.... lol that just made me burst out of laughter! I don't know what kind of comment i should say...
6th picture... very cool.. but still the hip
7th picture.... I'm not an expert in zombies....
nomobuyo hoshi hashtawa dogeda gumnicha de ribura!

weez18
06-10-2011, 02:20 PM
so im still lacking in anatomy.. and profile...ok ill work on those >.< lol so on the females the shoulders are to wide right or r the hips to small or both..

fanlala38
06-10-2011, 02:26 PM
I'll say Weez yur not bad... not bad at all!

weez18
06-10-2011, 02:43 PM
haha thx ((:

ram
06-10-2011, 06:32 PM
the fifth picture... I wish i wont die in that kind of posing =_=

so on the females the shoulders are to wide right or r the hips to small or both..
well probably the hips are too small... on my opinion atleast... people has their own way of drawing things.. so it still depends on you

weez18
06-10-2011, 08:47 PM
the fifth picture... I wish i wont die in that kind of posing =_=haha yea me either X))

Ozzaharwood
06-10-2011, 09:32 PM
Highschool of the dead fanart = proskills

weez18
06-10-2011, 09:57 PM
Highschool of the dead fanart = proskills

^^ thx

ok im real proud of this one ((:
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/Ocnikki.jpg

BlueExorcist
06-10-2011, 11:56 PM
First off... nothing personal for anything i say. I'll say it in advance. Sorry.

1st Pic: i love this one. it is a little pale though (it doesn't stand out)... darken some lines. The face could be worked on, you can learn side view anywhere, though.

2nd Pic: Good, (looks a little sloppy, lol) but the eyes are kinda far apart. The fingers on the hand also, where's the middle finger?

3rd Pic: The feet are kinda small, the eye burn doesn't go all the way down... the fist looks a little awkward. Could use some work.

4th Pic: Shading and the left hand... Great though!!!

5th Pic: Wait a second.. ... ... this is my request!!!! Okay then, i don't know how to judge it... it isn't really an original charecter, sry...

6th Pic: Wings need more detail, and shading needs more.... ... ... shading! Good Drawing

7th Pic: You seem to be good at zombies, i didn't find any flaws..

8th Pic: Good.. do you forget to shade? lol. Need to darken lines that weren't erased...


After criticizing your artwork (sry if your mad at me) i think that you are better than i originally thought. Great artist, Bravo!!!

weez18
06-11-2011, 12:04 AM
First off... nothing personal for anything i say. I'll say it in advance. Sorry.

1st Pic: i love this one. it is a little pale though (it doesn't stand out)... darken some lines. The face could be worked on, you can learn side view anywhere, though.

2nd Pic: Good, (looks a little sloppy, lol) but the eyes are kinda far apart. The fingers on the hand also, where's the middle finger?

3rd Pic: The feet are kinda small, the eye burn doesn't go all the way down... the fist looks a little awkward. Could use some work.

4th Pic: Shading and the left hand... Great though!!!

5th Pic: Wait a second.. ... ... this is my request!!!! Okay then, i don't know how to judge it... it isn't really an original charecter, sry...

6th Pic: Wings need more detail, and shading needs more.... ... ... shading! Good Drawing

7th Pic: You seem to be good at zombies, i didn't find any flaws..

8th Pic: Good.. do you forget to shade? lol. Need to darken lines that weren't erased...


After criticizing your artwork (sry if your mad at me) i think that you are better than i originally thought. Great artist, Bravo!!!
in most my works i rarely to never shade in my work because i hate the way i do it lol

as for #3 its a chibi so i thot i should make the feet really smal

n thx for the critique ^^..im not mad at all i expect ppl to b honest..but let me remind u ive only been drawing for about 4 months now (=

BlueExorcist
06-11-2011, 12:07 AM
4 months??????!?!?!!!?!?!?! i think i was a little hard for 4 MONTHS!

weez18
06-11-2011, 12:08 AM
lol its ok... i like honest ppl ^^

BlueExorcist
06-11-2011, 12:11 AM
okay, the best thing to do is get better, and post again!! ^.^

weez18
06-11-2011, 12:11 AM
will do X))

BlueExorcist
06-11-2011, 12:17 AM
kk

CypressDahlia
06-11-2011, 12:44 AM
The arm proportions are quite off. Elbows should be about the same level as the bellybutton. Also, your hands need a bit of work. It doesn't seem like you spend much time on them. Your lines are little shaky, too, so I can't tell if some parts are badly proportioned or just wobbly. Still, this and the very first picture you posted were the best, IMO. Good job. You should do more like it. But study the anatomy a little more.

weez18
06-11-2011, 12:57 AM
thx ^^ ...i just hate hands but theyr a must in drawing.. i just cant find alot of hand tutorials tht i like >.<

Kumo
06-11-2011, 03:51 AM
overall: line work is very messy, maybe u should learn to be more confident in ur lines first =) ^_^ draw a dot and draw a line though it, and gradually draw more n more lines that gets longer. then practice with 2 dots, draw a line that goes through 2 dots, then start to draw multiple lines on top of each other, try to make them overlap each other without making it goes to different directions. im pretty sure ur drawing small lines and connecting them together to form shapes/ etc. i think u should losen up, and draw long big lines and let it flow, so ur object would be more smooth/ free =) u can always erase, so its ok. draw lightly. =) use a soft pencil like 2B, not too dark, not too light neither to the point u create creeses on ur paper. only darken up lines on the area where u want people to focus on, to look at, ( to establish focu point) or on area where there are sharp edges. its kinda hard to explain XDD haha anways, my point is, if your line work is all the same thickness/ color, its gona look very flat/ stiff/ . i think you are good at comming up with ideas on costumes :O and i sugest u to focus in one thing at the time, such as practice alot alot on drawing a human face/ eyes/ head/hair, in different angle. then move down to hands/arms/shoulders. break it down slowly. don't rush in and try to shade so fast yet, get your line work clean first =D then learn shading afterwards. you are pretty good for a beginner :) fight-to :O!

im sorry if i talkd too much :|

:3 i like the second pic its cute ;D~

weez18
06-11-2011, 04:21 AM
lol thx i appreciate u taking time to let me know whats wrong ^^..n thts a good idea i guess ill start off by drawing the head and progress slowly ..thx for everything again (:

ram
06-11-2011, 07:49 AM
thx ^^ ...i just hate hands but theyr a must in drawing.. i just cant find alot of hand tutorials tht i like >.<

lol just draw these in all parts of view and other stuffs.. >.<
http://www.posemaniacs.com/archives/884
I'm not good at drawing hands as well >.< but this thing help me a lot... there's no illegal issues copying these,,
better listen to cype sensei >.<

weez18
06-11-2011, 09:00 PM
thx ramiel those helped alot ^^

Alacarte
06-12-2011, 08:56 AM
All of your drawings are great...
But one of the greatest drawing you draw that
I like the most is the High School of the Dead's Nerdy Girl Character(because she's so SEXY!~ XD lol)

Advice(s):
1.)Enhance your lineart...
2.)Make sure the lines are clean to look...
3.)The Hand movements, move your hands softly and calmly when you draw... I think you must master this one :)

weez18
06-12-2011, 10:47 AM
yea hands...are..punks.lol

ram
06-13-2011, 11:23 PM
don't know what to comment on that one >.< my drawing style is so much different from bleach

weez18
06-14-2011, 03:17 AM
D: lol

weez18
06-16-2011, 03:45 PM
well these are some of my first colored ones ^^
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/1stcolored.jpg
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/art/shikamaruandtemari.jpg

ram
06-17-2011, 04:17 AM
it's getting good... (atleast i think it is) weez do you remember what i told you about measure the character height based on the head? in the first girl if i measure it again you'll see a lot of mistake.. >.< it's either that you measured wrong or that you didn't measure it at all.. as for the shoulders.. if that's quarter view you got it wrong.. remember that japanese book i gave you? see page 76 and look at the bottom images.. >.<

as for the second image.. >.< i don't know what to comment yet because even i have a lot of mistakes when it comes to side view

weez18
06-19-2011, 09:50 PM
ahh dammit lol..i never measure it i guess thts y it comes out crappy..and if i measure it the way u say to measure it theres never enough room on my paper X((...i guess i make the head to big lol ...n if i make the head smaller its sooooo damm hard to draw in the details for the face D: idk what to do........

one more thing i know this will sound stupid but....whats a good way to enhance my lineart..?

ram
06-19-2011, 10:08 PM
get a bigger sketchpad >.< i have a big sketchpad and it doesn't cost that much money(well i always go for the cheapest one)
reducing the details is really hard at first for me as well... if you have a very small paper you don't have to draw it full body or anything..
or you could start drawing kids first... that would be better..
their only 5 heads
http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee388/skyramiel/062.jpg
if you master it you'll understand how to draw grown ups as well...

weez18
06-19-2011, 10:16 PM
my sketchpad is pretty big lol..my drawings are just sized down alot...n yea i guess imma start drawing kids instead lol...o n any tips on how to imrove my line art..everyone keeps telling me its crappy ^^

ram
06-19-2011, 10:23 PM
hmmm well i think you should know how do do rough sketch first... do you know what rough sketch is?

weez18
06-19-2011, 10:31 PM
dammn i feel like a dumbass...and no >..<

ram
06-19-2011, 10:33 PM
go to the GB now and i'll show you

weez18
06-19-2011, 10:35 PM
ok

ram
06-20-2011, 03:51 AM
sorry i disappeared here's an example of rough sketch
http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/ramiel-10928917-p1.jpg?t=4dfefa885512e
and here's an example of it's lines done
http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/06/ramiel-10928917-p2.jpg?t=4dfefa8951e2f

weez18
06-20-2011, 09:40 AM
oo ok i c what u mean now

ram
06-21-2011, 06:04 AM
in doing rough sketch don't hold the pencil too hard... and if lining with a pen be very extra careful when it comes to lining... that's about it... just make sure you are super focus when it comes to lining the art.. :) i know i'm not...
but you can't improve by me just saying these things...
practice is the only thing that matters

weez18
08-01-2011, 01:52 AM
sorry i havent uploaded in a while..damm scanner broke >..<...well here u go enjoy ^^

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0038.jpg1
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0037.jpg2
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0036.jpg3
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0035.jpg4
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0032.jpg5
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0030.jpg6
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0021.jpg7
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0015.jpg8
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0014.jpg9
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0013.jpg10
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0010.jpg11
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0005.jpg12
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0001.jpg13

ram
08-01-2011, 05:30 AM
nice weez! you seem to improve 1 year worth of practice in ordinary people and just did it in one month.

well anyway you seem to forget what i told you about heads tall.

btw, avoid posting too many images at the same time. it's really hard for people to critique it if you do that.

SirJimmJimm
08-01-2011, 09:55 AM
I like the way you make sure your drawing have many dynamic poses! It really brings them to life. There's a bunch of pics, so I'll try to make my critiques as short as possible.
-1st pic- There's some issues with aligning the face. I'd recommend using guidelines. Also good start with folding; keep working on it.
-2nd-Horns are a bit lopsided. Also, I'd imagine the arm thingies would be loose, so more folds on them would help.
-3rd-Arms are a bit flat. I understand the character does not have huge muscles, but they still have a defined shape from the elbows. Also the legs have no knees. Don't make it drastic, though; a sharper turn in the lines would be all it takes to show the viewer that there is a knee.
-4th-Again, faces aren't completely aligned. Also noteworthy is that in 3/4 view, the farther eye is supposed to look a tad smaller than the other due to the perspective.
-5th-I mainly see that there is little depth in the background. Make a vantage point and then put the lines so that it looks a bit more 3-d. You almost started that when you put the diagonal lines on the fence.
-6th- Arms are a bit short. Also work on differentiating the texture of the metal as compared to the fur and cloth.
-7th- With the pose of the girl, I would suggest moving her left (our right) leg back a little bit.
-8th-Toes are a bit flat. No biggie.
-9th- Feet are a bit flat. Try drawing them at different angles.
-10th-The arms have different lengths.
-11th- Facial alignment of ed.
-12th- The back seems stiff. Our spinal cord is a bit more flexible. Probably jut out the stomach a just little bit and then curve the back a bit more.
-13th-You shaded the arms and torso but not the legs.

Gedeon
08-01-2011, 05:58 PM
Well im gonna CnC just on that last batch of drawings....... i admit that i dont have enough nerves too write everything( And of course you've improved since the first page of this thread( and everyone else probabbly already told everything that i would have seen =w=)
Ok i just got to the 6 pic but there is so meny im gonna critique the others once i have time (and will =w=) ok? Sorry.

Anyhorse.......

pic 1 : As Sire Jim said The face is a bit assimetrical (yeah in realitty no face is all simmetrry but thats a bit too much) And it seems that one boob is bigger then the other one.

pic 2: The horns are not aligned with the face. Although the pose is quite good and it look more 3d :D YAYS!

pic 3: Its pretty good although some of the limps are shorter then they should be. Still a good one.

pic 4: Great!!! A great 3d look, still some proportion problems around hands, and it seems that your faces could use a bit more love.

pic 5: Still some proportion (from now on im gonna call it POP :D ) problems, and faces but hey you are improving!!!

weez18
08-01-2011, 09:22 PM
@ramiel thx..ill remeber to upload only one or two next time ^^
@ sir jim jim thx for the critiques..n as for bgs n shading i get lazy and tend to half-ass my drawings lol
@gedeon thx..i no my poportions r really bad..i really need to work on tht >..<.

..n i can never really find good tutorials on porportions n stuff

trilokcool3
08-01-2011, 09:56 PM
hey WEEZ do fanarts....:cat_see: if you dont find a tutorial its better to do full character sketch from fanarts....
if you draw on then you will understand what wrong you are doing..:cat_gleam:

weez18
08-03-2011, 12:29 AM
ok guys here r a few drawings i did today..imma try n post a drawing everyday ^^..enjoy

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0002.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0003.jpg

http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0004.jpg

ram
08-04-2011, 12:24 PM
1st pic. that's an imbalanced stand.
i hope you remember this picture.
http://i1225.photobucket.com/albums/ee388/skyramiel/069.jpg?t=1312474694
head and foot intact and if it's not the body should be bent or imbalanced.

2nd pic. head misplaced, or if the head should really go there it should be in position of quarter view

3rd pic. eyes to close to the ears.

weez18
08-06-2011, 08:38 PM
tryin to keep this thread alive lol..n these both took around 40 mins together
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN00072.jpg

KayleL
08-06-2011, 10:28 PM
You need to practice drawing lines. This is especially true with anime.

It looks like you are drawing lines very slowly, which is causing a wiggling effect. I am guilty of this to this very day. The lines have to be as smooth as possible. So you could be as sketchy as you want for the outline, but when inking it (or draw the darker lines when doing it in pencil), you have to draw it quick, and in one swipe. This takes practice because you may end up with a unwanted or exaggerated curve.

I know it may seem like a small aspect, but in anime, it makes a world of difference.

weez18
08-06-2011, 11:04 PM
lol yea i try to do it slowly but it doesnt work n when i try to do it faster i still mess up lol >.<..i guess practice makes perfect


TT_TT(^^^) i h8 u damm cubes n perspective things..idk i jus cant get em down...it makes me wanna cry lol
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN00082.jpg

Leannah
09-07-2011, 08:42 PM
The swordgirl looks cool, and so does the man you took from how to draw manga volume 1. Keep drawing shapes, it really helps. I'm a beginner and I try to do it every day.

toast
09-07-2011, 09:39 PM
keep the lines parallel and the square nice and straight dood! Think more about the shapes and the lines than the fact that you are drawing a box. I don't know if this will make much sense, but forget that you are drawing a box. Get a picture of a cube and look at how the lines correlate with each other.

The picture before the boxes looks cool, I actually quite like the style! keep it up dude

weez18
12-14-2011, 09:25 PM
o man i havent posted anything in sooo long in this thread i hope i dont get in trouble for this >..< lol

started drawing way diff..sorta dropped the manga style of drawing as of right now n im focusing more on stuff like this
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0009.jpg
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/SCAN0007.jpg
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x422/weez-18/weez18-stuffs_500.jpg

spidergoth
12-14-2011, 09:58 PM
You're really good at shading I love the still life and the bottom sketeches alot. I looked through your thread and you really grew. Though I will say that the large pic of the girl and the man with the sunglasses the heads look slightly slanted other than that I think it looks really incredible. :cat_thumbsup:

weez18
12-14-2011, 10:37 PM
ahh u noticed..when i draw i have a tendency to draw sitting sideways and the drawing comes out like tht lol

spidergoth
12-14-2011, 11:22 PM
Do you spin your paper while drawing? it helps when you're trying to drawing a line and sometimes you can't get it right unless you move your paper like 45 degrees of something that should help to avoid the slant. I mean I'm still a newb but it does seem to help.

weez18
12-15-2011, 06:39 PM
my drawing style is really wierd thts y my drawings r usually at a slant or messed up angle tht makes the whole perspective of the drawing look really not right lol