heres some of my work plz critique

[kine]

http://www.mangatutorials.com/index.php?do=/kine/photo/my-manga/photo0266-001-jpg/

http://www.mangatutorials.com/index.php?do=/kine/photo/my-manga/photo0257-001-jpg/

yes i know her head is alittle messed up but besides that. tell me how i did on both of them

[kine]

my pics wont upload

[andr3ytp]

try to use sites like: deviantart.com or photobucket.com to upload images

[kine]

i got it to work so my pics are on a different thread