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Jake
04-16-2011, 10:03 PM
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/105/d/9/crappy_bench_by_vd8drum-d3e3czh.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/105/0/6/1302935653_lance_v2_by_vd8drum-d3e3f7l.jpg
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/106/3/e/jen__character_practice_by_vd8drum-d3e5ekz.jpg

Critique would be much appreciated!

-Jake

ladyannette
04-16-2011, 10:12 PM
Well, they're all very nice. ^^

The first girl's arm seems a bit dislocated (?) and maybe a bit thin.

Other than that, very nicely done!

Mr_Liebe
04-16-2011, 11:45 PM
The shading looks great, Gandalf Brohame.

Nerdonoff
04-17-2011, 03:07 AM
Well, they're all very nice. ^^

The first girl's arm seems a bit dislocated (?) and maybe a bit thin.

Other than that, very nicely done!

I don't think you're right, the pose it's kinda forced but I think is good, the face is the only thing that bothers me, the top it's kinda flat...
anyway you've got nice skills, watchout for the small heads and long bodies (2nd pic)
do you have a tablet?

dbc
04-17-2011, 05:08 AM
All of them are really good! :D
But I found the 1st pic is a kinda weird....

nisaren
04-17-2011, 08:23 AM
Looking pretty decent. The first one has a really difficult pose and perspective to draw so very nice attempt. The second picture is definitely off proportion-wise, I'm not sure exactly what your construction process is when sketching these out. Do you sketch out a base stick figure to get proportions down? If not I'd suggest learning to do so. I like the last drawings, they all look like they have fairly accurate anatomy and the expressions are well done.

Jake
04-17-2011, 03:01 PM
I don't think you're right, the pose it's kinda forced but I think is good, the face is the only thing that bothers me, the top it's kinda flat...
anyway you've got nice skills, watchout for the small heads and long bodies (2nd pic)
do you have a tablet?

Thanks! I still just got into manga... and drawing altogether, but these are some problems I should work on.
And yeah I do have a tablet :D

@everyone else: Thanks for the crit, I need it X_X