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04-05-2011, 04:23 PM
Any critiques on the art you are about to see would be sweet, I have loads of free time to practice because i'm pretty far from highschool.


One of my first shots at a dip pen. (I got lazy cleaning it up :))

04-05-2011, 08:21 PM
whoa dude. thats pretty awesome! how long have you been drawing?
you kinda remind me of me when i started out. (not all the way back in 5th grade, but like when i started to understand art concepts)
you face the same problem that i did and still do now. the head is kinda big, but its not that big of a deal. i also like the arms. they look well proportioned for the most part, but are his shoulders supposed to be like that? oh well. but hey it looks good dude. i think you should probably look at working on hands though.
but like i said. good job.

04-05-2011, 08:29 PM
thanks! I've been drawing seriously for like 2-3 months now? I don't know. :D and i thought the same thing with the head. I'll keep that in mind next time.

04-06-2011, 03:58 PM
New stuff!
Also, next time I shall be using a blue coloured pencil so that the scanner doesnt get the pencil marks in there. I did not know this before. :D
head better?
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7551/critique001.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/i/critique001.jpg/)

Just something I did for fun

http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6275/critique002.jpg (http://img824.imageshack.us/i/critique002.jpg/)

04-07-2011, 10:05 AM
it is a good work. in the first image the head of the character it is draw properly but i can see you have a problem with the rest of the body. the only advice i can give, it is to stop drawing movement just for a while. and focuse on how to draw the different type of view for the head.
here is a picture i took to show you what i am talking about.
http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/8539/pict0025dh.th.jpg (http://img839.imageshack.us/i/pict0025dh.jpg/)

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once you have managed all the view and master it, then try to draw the different type of view but now with the all body
such as this:
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/4766/anijeproduction.th.jpg (http://img687.imageshack.us/i/anijeproduction.jpg/)

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when you fill confident of yourself i will advice you to visit this website:

study how to draw all the different type of pose. and then take this challenge, http://www.posemaniacs.com/thirtysecond
this challenge consist of giving you 30 seconds to draw a pose but without really putting detail. this exercise Will help your brain to draw mouvement without really looking at a example. it will also improve your speed of drawing.(at least use this website 15 minutes a day)

i hope that will help you to get better drawing. good luck.

04-07-2011, 05:26 PM
Thank you. I suppose I've only really been drawing whatever i'm in the mood for. I'll definately try that!