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ClockHand
03-24-2011, 12:52 AM
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/082/9/2/red_eyes_portada_by_efrierednihil-d3cbwhz.jpg


Read the COMIC:
http://createceous.freehostingcloud.com/gallery/clock/comics/redv1pg1.html

Hayashida
03-24-2011, 01:42 AM
It looks really cool. I don't have any crits for the cover. I always wondered what your first name was...

DrPumpkin
03-24-2011, 01:42 AM
Ooh. Looks pretty interesting.

Is very curious to see what it's about.

toast
03-24-2011, 05:28 PM
like I said, epic, and the comics awesome too. FINISH CHAPTER 2 SOON

the site will be done soon, I swear I swear!

ClockHand
03-24-2011, 07:35 PM
I like you guys like the cover and I hope you guys like the comic when we get the website working for it. So everything is in the hands fo toast and jpg (who is helping us).

But for now I'm going to be working on the next chapter.

Edit: I fix the Volume Title. It can be seen on my DA.
http://efrierednihil.deviantart.com/art/Red-Eyes-Portada-202109255

Nyarlathotep
03-25-2011, 03:14 AM
Cool cover! Really nice presentation and composition.

Evil_Cake
03-26-2011, 02:23 AM
grr hurry up with the actual pages

ClockHand
03-26-2011, 02:35 PM
Toast said that today or tomorrow we are going to have the site ready to host the comic. If the site is not ready today I'm going to put the first pages.

ClockHand
04-04-2011, 08:32 PM
The Comic is online now (first part of the first volume). The link is in the first post.

Everyone should thanks Tzvety for this.

jubeh
04-04-2011, 10:44 PM
Seems weird that the immortal guy uses the word butt instead of ass when the word bitch was used like nine times.

But yeah awesome comic.

Evil_Cake
04-04-2011, 10:54 PM
cool full color

ClockHand
04-04-2011, 11:11 PM
Jubeh@ Thanks. Well the "Butt" in that sentese was made it to look like a little humoristic.

Cake@ Thanks man.

Well I'm going to try to work some details, some stuffs are not looking to good (maybe it's because I just change the size without looking the quaility after it).

Hayashida
04-04-2011, 11:40 PM
Great comic, Clock. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Nyarlathotep
04-05-2011, 12:46 AM
Yeah, this is pretty cool. I like the art style and the coloring, and it's all put together very well. The occasional grammatical error/lack of punctuation is a bit jarring for me at times, though.

Great work!

ClockHand
04-05-2011, 11:12 AM
Thanks people.

Nyar@ Mmm... I did the dialogues to be kinda southerns, and it was with some help (because me doing it be myself it would end being awful). So any mistake that works and an advice or correction that could work on the context, is appreciated.

Nyarlathotep
04-05-2011, 03:41 PM
Well, the dialogue is good and the phrasing is definitely Western - I just tend to pay a lot of attention to minor typesetting details >_> What I noticed is that you sometimes end lines with punctuation and sometimes don't. With fonts that have capital and lowercase letters, like the one you're using, I think it looks best to always end with some sort of punctuation, even if it's just ellipsis (...). It's not a big deal, but it's just the kind of thing I take note of.

The only typo I found was on page 6 - should be 'needs a lesson'

ClockHand
04-05-2011, 03:47 PM
ok cool. I'm fixing stuffs so I'm going to add those to my fix list.

Umber_the_kid
04-08-2011, 04:42 PM
He said butt because he's a gentleman of course! xD

Really cool, Clock