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RemyGurl6
03-19-2011, 07:51 PM
http://remyplaysjenga.deviantart.com/#/d3buiib

This is Logan (I like to give names to my drawings... Or the ones that I finish at least) Whatever you have to say to make it better, would be very highly appreciated! Thanks!
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Okay, well, It won't show the picture on my computer, so if it isn't showing on yours, here's the link:
http://remyplaysjenga.deviantart.com/#/d3buiib

Mr_D
03-19-2011, 09:10 PM
Hi there,
in my opinion it looks pretty good, but I don't know how hard it is to watercolour so I'll just shut up about that. Anyway, his left eye seems to be a bit too far from centre than it should be. Also, both eyes are placed in an angle that makes the face look a bit twisted. If you draw an axis on the face, you should see it, I think. I hope this helped ^^ (btw it doesn't show up on my computer either)

Psy
03-23-2011, 04:25 AM
I would like to see a full head shot of him. I cant see very much of him from this close up.