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KakashiTheSharingan
02-28-2011, 05:19 PM
Here's my first comic page i almost done with it...please comment and tell me what i did wrong...i like to know what i did wrong...was alot of advice as possible.

http://i54.tinypic.com/2yzgdon.jpg

Evil_Cake
02-28-2011, 09:04 PM
the words are hard for me 2 read :(

Reset
02-28-2011, 09:11 PM
It just too small

KakashiTheSharingan
03-01-2011, 01:30 AM
Shall I make the ballons and words bigger