My unfinished comic....

[KakashiTheSharingan]

Here's my first comic page i almost done with it...please comment and tell me what i did wrong...i like to know what i did wrong...was alot of advice as possible.

http://i54.tinypic.com/2yzgdon.jpg

[Evil_Cake]

the words are hard for me 2 read :(

[Reset]

It just too small

[KakashiTheSharingan]

Shall I make the ballons and words bigger