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02-20-2011, 05:56 PM
My, oh my! So much changed here, lovely new look! And I have also improved (I believe) since the last time I was here (seems like it was a long time ago), so yeah. Me wants to get some advice. About not only the anatomy and the charas, but the colouring too... Hope you guys could help me see some specific weak spots so I could start working on them. :)
My first serious attempt on perspective..
02-20-2011, 06:34 PM
I have nothing to say but AWESOME!!!
I really like the 2nd picture
02-20-2011, 08:31 PM
I LOVE the first and last pictures, the way you color hair is just awesome. :)
02-21-2011, 08:26 PM
That first picture is absolutely phenomenal. O_O
I believe I have a problem with the way you draw limbs in some cases (EDIT: hmm...never thought I say it like that before)
Particularly with our guitar girl here, her right (our left) looks slightly, well undefined and sorta model (structure model) looking; sorta like a thick stick. There's a similar problem with that same girl's leg. It looks a piece of rounded wood has been slapped on to another (sorry if sound harsh). The limbs need a slightly more natural look.
02-21-2011, 09:35 PM
My fave is the first :)
02-22-2011, 12:55 PM
Ookey, so noo stick-legs :D Thanksss you all btw :P
Edit: So that it would not be only thanking help me understand what's wrong with this one. I made her taller, shorter, it keeps looking wrong.
02-22-2011, 03:33 PM
Such dazziling colours! I think i can help you with the last one! You actualy did everything great tha anotomy is good but it seems as tough she has realy long thies(uper leg, i think i spelled it wrong) in comparision to the shins and it makes her look realy long. her arms could have been a bit smaler but are ok, actualy the whole pic is great. There i hope it helped....now PLEASE DONT KILL ME!
02-22-2011, 03:55 PM
I rarely kill people darlin' :D Thank you! Sometimes it really takes just a few words to see something obvious (!@#$q how have I missed that x.X)
02-22-2011, 11:56 PM
Umm. Firstly I'm sorry to say something like this, I think the "looking wrong" on this pict is her "butt." Try to move it lil bit to right.
And her right foot is longer that left, I think.
02-23-2011, 02:07 PM
WOAH WOAH WOAH, dude, I am really digging the one with hair wrapped around the fish bowl
good job with all the poses @_@
02-25-2011, 09:12 AM
@Reset Yeeah, I tried for a less-skinny thing this time but I guess it couldnt work out right :D
@erikamae Thankkkss ^.^ I really like it a lot too :D A surprised fishy. Classic.
Sooo. Yeah. A link for a big pic for a contest:
Definitely not gonna win, still I'd love to hear what's wrong\not wrong about it. You know, for learn-by-mistakes' sake. (if this even has a meaning in Eng)
(Which reminds me to remind you that Kiseki and Wacom are organising their fourth contest, you may give it a try)
02-25-2011, 02:27 PM
I think there is nothing wrong about this pic, is good. Maybe only its concept, the concept about this pic not speak loud.
02-25-2011, 03:02 PM
What are you doing on the critique thread? Go to the art auctions already!
02-25-2011, 03:14 PM
@Reset THat's why yay for artist's comments :D Hopefully explaining it with words would be enough..
@PWhit IIiiii dunno :D Wanted to get better.. Advice if always useful, I never see mistakes in mah own pics, I'm just staring too much at them and get used to the way they look, so I need help with that xD (And probably cause I have no idea what this is o.O *starts searching*)
dikka! I went like DANNNGGG D8>
You're coloring method is soft and pretty =D keep going.. I'll try to catch ya <-- in my dreams >_<"
05-11-2011, 04:55 AM
This art is great!! I find the guitar strap not properly installed or you just really meant it?
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