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jaidurn
12-01-2010, 07:28 PM
Old member here. Here's my walk through time.


When I started (August 2009 - December 2009):
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http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Chilee.jpg
yeaaaaaaah.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Practice02.jpg
My first anatomy practice.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/HalloweenPen.jpg
um. yeah.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/P2030001.jpg
it's taking to long for me to improve. ;A;

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/SamusPowerSuit-3.jpg
First digital work

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Anatomypractice.jpg
yeah. I got a tablet. And sucked.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kalinredesign.jpg
I feel like I improved a little.

More Recent (This summer. 2010)
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http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/090610111539.jpg
Not really improving.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/artworkcopy.png
Hitman Reborn

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/WIPanatomy-1.jpg
I improved. :0

Entirely Recent (October - Today 2010)
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http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kamina.png
kamina

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kaminacopy-1.png
kamina phase

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kamina-1.png
So I tried a background

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/forjoosh-2.png
Josh's Professor Bentley. I had fun drawing this.

New (Fucking. First view p. much.):
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http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/TheseedFullmetalOpening2.gif

Rio
12-01-2010, 07:46 PM
Do you mostly draw digitally now jaidurn? Or do you still pick up the pencil and paper and draw?

Joosh
12-01-2010, 07:53 PM
I really like those kamina drawings...

Ozzaharwood
12-01-2010, 07:56 PM
I love that samus. C:

jaidurn
12-01-2010, 08:02 PM
Rio: I do still draw with pencil and paper. I prefer it for the most part. :3 I just don't have a good scanner anymore.

Josh: So do I.

Oz: I wish I could say the same.

Ozzaharwood
12-01-2010, 08:06 PM
Why don't you like it? I think it's awesome. If you colour it I'll love you forever. Maybe. XD

jaidurn
12-01-2010, 08:08 PM
I'm actually thinking of redoing a Samus picture. But this time, Zero suit samus.

Rio
12-01-2010, 08:09 PM
Oooh, Zero Suit Samus! I think that's her best suit yet.

Ozzaharwood
12-01-2010, 08:20 PM
Zero suit samus in SSBB was awesome. I didn't think she was the best character but I always picked her anyways. lol

-Ithinkyouallknowwhy-

jaidurn
12-01-2010, 08:28 PM
Rio: Yursh

Oz: Yeah man. I owned with Samus. She is one of the best characters, imo

narutofox180
12-12-2010, 12:21 PM
youve improved alot :)

jaidurn
12-22-2010, 04:20 PM
Penguin: Thanks!

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Quick update
Oz's request from the old forum:
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/forozcopy-1.jpg

Kodos' Request WIP. Would love crits.
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/th_forkodossketch.jpg
Bigger version:
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/forkodossketch.jpg

jaidurn
01-05-2011, 11:50 PM
So I did some anatomy practice.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Anatomypractice_1_5_2011.jpg

axion
01-07-2011, 12:12 PM
im sorry i cant comment properly cause i kept laughing at the face :L

anyway id suggest you try a different method of approach when doing the anatomy
look at a muscle dude i guess and make basic shapes of the body parts to keep a solid form

Matt
01-07-2011, 01:00 PM
Your understanding of the male body is quite good, and I'm liking Kodos's request already. Maybe, though, you could broaden your male characters' shoulders. Just a suggestion. They look just a little off as they are.

jaidurn
01-14-2011, 05:18 PM
Axion: Thanks man. I've been changing my style so your advice helped.

Matt: Is this better?

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So here is a WIP of mine. I will be finishing it and coloring it.
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kaminacopy-4.jpg

nisaren
01-14-2011, 10:29 PM
I really like how the last picture is looking so far. I definitely find it much easier to work with large masses and then just refine it over the course of a few sketches. I think for this person I'd take a bit of the hump off his neck because at that angle you most likely would not see his neck at all.

I also like how Kodos' WIP is coming along. I can't really see the picture too well to really give any feedback but it looks decent. You've definitely improved since I posted here a few months ago.

Regantor
01-18-2011, 08:48 AM
Hey man. Generally I think your anatomy is quite good; It's just the scaling that's a bit off at times. Making the arms bigger and the chest smaller in that kamina image definately would have solved alot of the problems. Might help if you start imagining the lower abdomen as a seperate "object" to the chest.

Also, Kodos' request? The bodies are damn nice. The only critiques I can really give is that their shoulders are much too broad, and that Hevisa's face looks like it needs rotating to the left a couple of degress, and probally a pointier chin. :o

Either way, keep up the good work, man. :u

jaidurn
01-28-2011, 08:10 AM
Nisaren: Thanks man. I tried fixing it in this version. Did I do it ok?

Reg: Thanks man. :U I have been trying to see the lower abdomen as a seperate shape.

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Work so far:
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kaminacopy-5.jpg

nisaren
01-28-2011, 03:34 PM
Yeah, I think that looks a bit better. The only thing now with the colored version is the hair looks like it's melding with the chest tatoos. Keep going though, it's looking good. :)

jaidurn
02-09-2011, 10:02 AM
Nisaren: Yeah, I noticed that. I made a slight change this time. Thanks!

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Kamina finished.
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/Kaminacopy-6.jpg

Hamachi
02-10-2011, 11:45 PM
O-oy, Jai, you know that preparation sketch you made of Kamina? That one has potential - real potential. Anyways make sure to curve your katana 'cause that one was straight. Love the way you're starting to tie forms together when preparing your drawing; that's the most important thing to improve.

Edit: Also , for perspective's sake I'd make the belt-thingy on the left a lot smaller... the pose apparently shows his torso turning towards you, which means that to start with his hips should be twisted away from you. Also, asymmetry=maximum appeal... :X

GunZet
02-11-2011, 12:55 AM
I can't really tell what anything is. but I like the texture method you used.

Hell_Baron
02-11-2011, 03:43 AM
YAY! ICE CREAM SPRINKLES!!!

jaidurn
02-25-2011, 12:34 AM
Hama: If I ever do a drawing like this again, I'll take note of that.

Gunz: You should try it man.

Hell_Baron(Warfire):
YEAH MAN. THEY ARE TASTY

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Doodling on GB
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/doodlescopy.jpg

jaidurn
03-01-2011, 04:20 AM
Sketch I won't finish:
http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/GokuFanart-3.png

Fabiafidus
03-01-2011, 11:46 AM
interresting technique and works :D

Sylux
03-01-2011, 01:27 PM
You should make some over-exaggeratedly dramataesensational pictures. Focus on super-dynamics.

Joosh
03-03-2011, 08:25 PM
Stop drawing the same pose over and over!
Like the textured kamina at the top of the page, and in Goku, and in the GB sketches.
>:0

I went through that cycle before and I'm still suffering from it D:

jaidurn
03-03-2011, 11:55 PM
Josh, most of this was working with legs and the lower part of the body. D: Sorry if the torsos are repetative, but I'm just doing what I know until I can learn the bottom parts.

Joosh
03-05-2011, 09:11 AM
Oh okay.

Gedeon
04-03-2011, 06:43 PM
that sketch of goku reminds me so much of KHR but i dunno who!

jaidurn
05-03-2011, 08:29 AM
Gedeon: Lol I haven't seen KHR

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Guys, I feel the urge to take requests. HIT ME UP.
First 4 get stuff drawn for them.
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3 -
4 -

Gogogooooo!

Kodos
05-03-2011, 08:34 AM
Whatever happened to Karin and Hevisa @_@

But I have a new request - a dinosaur!

jaidurn
05-03-2011, 08:37 AM
I'll do both :)

jaidurn
05-08-2011, 05:01 PM
Just posting this really quick. Still taking more requests!

1. Kodos - Dinosaur

2. Your name here!

3. Your mother's name here!

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Just some quick (10 min) Sketches of a new character of mine.

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/CharacterdesignsSon1.png