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Joosh
12-01-2010, 07:56 PM
THIS POST WAS TOO LONG

ALWAYS BOTHERED ME

Ozzaharwood
12-01-2010, 08:02 PM
Damn dude. You improved a lot. I love that Totoro pic, Hayao Miyazaki is the best.

Rio
12-01-2010, 08:26 PM
Good stuff! You've improved in just a year. I notice your characters look more like American style that you see in cartoons. Is that mainly your inspiration?

Joosh
12-01-2010, 08:52 PM
Oz; thanks man :D
Rio; No, not really. I try drawing manga I just suck at the style I guess..:/ ITS JUST ANOTHER THING TO IMPROVE ON >:0

Rio
12-01-2010, 09:11 PM
Rio; No, not really. I try drawing manga I just suck at the style I guess..:/ ITS JUST ANOTHER THING TO IMPROVE ON >:0
I'm sure you can do it! Have you tried learning by doing fan art? I think your current still is close to FMA. If you do FMA fan art, I think you can make the transition into manga drawing style.

Joosh
12-01-2010, 10:27 PM
:0 You really think Fan art helps?

It looks like it does...:l HMM
I'll give it a go 8D

Son44
12-02-2010, 06:35 AM
Awesome improvement for just one year. You were pretty good though at the beginning xD

Keep it up!

Joosh
12-02-2010, 08:03 AM
Thanks son 8D I intend to keep it up >:0 hoho..

Matt
12-02-2010, 11:42 AM
You, Josh, have improved a heck of a lot more than me in just a year. And you're thirteen; I started at fourteen. You've got a huge advantage on me.

Joosh
12-02-2010, 04:36 PM
Matt, I was just exposed to anime and manga at an early age, And got a headstart on drawing manga, really.
I think thats about all. 'Cept for the improvement part.

:0 I cant really explain that, but just taking awhile to improve is fine, it probably just means you'll be Badass later on.

narutofox180
12-11-2010, 07:04 PM
i envy you..i realize i can never get around to practicing :/

Joosh
01-14-2011, 12:07 PM
I believe in you narutofox, you can practice. I too am super lazy when it comes down to it, but I eventually do it LOL
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GUYS I HAVENT UPDATED IN FOREVER SO HERE.
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http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7607/glutesboio.jpg
btw Im still getting used to this forum.
Its just different.
Almost as if it were a twitter or something.
I cant update Facebook, DA, MT, And my artthread!!
ITS TOO MUCH!

Joosh
03-03-2011, 09:36 PM
Okay wow, its been a long time since I updated my art thread.

SO HERE GAIS
I HOPES I IMPROVED ON MY ARTS
Critique Me like a demon or I will cut you all. Srsly. Critiques help a lot, and I've noticed some of the new people who join that are new to drawing get shunned like hell... >_>

http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9433/thewizardandhisorb.png
A wizard. (http://img823.imageshack.us/i/thewizardandhisorb.png/)

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1633/interestingfeatures.png
A fat guy (http://img27.imageshack.us/i/interestingfeatures.png/) because not everything in life is attractive like artists portray it to be c:

GunZet
03-04-2011, 11:20 AM
I'm really liking the dynamic way you do your hands. Update more often bro.
Ok, you want crits? Time to put on the SUIT.

The Wizard
The anatomy seems off mainly with the arms. I noticed that the right arms fingers are stubby and short, missing length. Actually the palm is short altogether.
The length from the elbow to the wrist is shorter than the left arm (the arm holding the orb).
The left arm actually seems to be just fine, but if you look around the orb, there's a finger that bends completely out of shape, as if he's breaking himself to grasp the thing.

After some staring at it more, I noticed the right arm is resting on the table, but there's no shading underneith it. So it seems like he's just holding it there in a really girly stance.
You made a lightsource (the candle) so use it.

The cloth around the right arm also seems to wrap perfectly around the arm, make it loose and give it some slack like you did with the left arm.

The Fat Guy
If you didn't describe that he was fat, I wouldn't be able to tell. He just looks really gruff, not fat.
There's not much I can say here since it's obviously in a style. Nothin' wrong with the face.
Once you start getting down to the neck area, things get odd.
Try to make it so that the collar of the shirt seems to wrap around him, right now it's just a straight up V shape with no dimension, and the wrinkles don't follow shape.

There...is your crit mein friend.

Rio
03-04-2011, 04:56 PM
I pretty much agree with hat Gunz said. Some other thoughts:
What's that shaded section right next to the face? I don't really see what that's supposed to be...
The second drawing: The iris' look odd to me and the eye looks like it's barely in the eye socket. With that said, I'm surprised not to see any crow's feet. It seems rather plain in that area when you have all these other details going on.

Psy
03-04-2011, 05:14 PM
I think the arm on the table looks allmost broken. It doesnt seem natural to me that the hand would just be draping off the table while the wizard is obviously excited or somthing of the sort. i think if he was grabbing the edge of the table or a fist like he got so happy he hit the table. His belt buckle is off to me. The belt doesnt overlap at all on his right our left into the buckle like it should and it hangs down prematurley. I like your work allot its just minor off details here and there that im noticing.

Joosh
03-04-2011, 08:52 PM
Oh my god Gunz, Rio, and Psy I love you.

Okay i'm going to redo what you said was all wrong.

here: http://img806.imageshack.us/i/thewizardandhisorbedite.png/

havent redone the fat guy yet.

And the right hand on the wizard still looks odd to me, and I didnt want to shade/color it because I wanted the orb to be center of attention. Even though I sorta shaded folds and stuff.
Im not being a total wuss on that, ill shade after I get feed back on this, and ill save as a seperate copy.

Celestial-Fox
03-09-2011, 03:25 AM
Those edits look pretty good. WHY OH WHY do you improve so fast?!

Rio
03-10-2011, 02:53 PM
C'mon Seefy! You're falling behind! ;D

GunZet
03-10-2011, 03:00 PM
The lines are still really shakey, but overall you did a nice job on re-doing the wizard. He looks a lot more dynamic now, and the folds actually flow now.
The buckle looks a bit odd, sort of like it's inside out, maybe the piece that's hanging off should be above the rest of the belt.
And a bit more work on the head and face could help.
The left hand fingers seem to be fixed which is nice, but now the right hand seems to be very small. Just drag the fingers out a bit, and add more room for the palm and you're set.


Good stuff bro.

Joosh
03-12-2011, 02:54 PM
Seefy: Thanks :D I think its just because I update like every month and thats it. Im neglecting MT big time. D:
I use to be such a lover of this place...what happened ;_;

Gunz: Hands are hard. Lol. Gotta study up >:D
to be honest what you guys are all telling me about the belt I just cant understand.
I know that it looks inside out, but the piece thats hanging below the buckle I have to fix from what you and the others have been telling me. I'll look at some belts on some stock website to see how they work lol

erikamae
03-12-2011, 03:07 PM
aww man Josh bro, I really dig that last one with the orb ;a; asdjfkajdf
you're getting a lot better at anatomy (certainly <^< further that I've come cough cough)
ANYWAY., dig dig dig dig itttt. Especially the candle and the orb c:
very clean lines, although D: one hand has slightly erm...larger? fatter? IDK, bigger fingers than the other...
c:

Joosh
05-29-2011, 09:31 AM
Havent been on in awhile... :C
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Yeah. Thats about it for what I was doing while I was gone. COMMENTS AND CRITIQUES PLEASE 8D

EDIT: Does anybody know how to change the thread title.. OTL

Sutari
05-29-2011, 09:49 AM
Oh god... i see oval-ey mannequin bodies with boobs... AND THEY ARE GOOD. I'm so proud ;D

And I was gonna help you with the thread title changing thing, but apparently you figured it out...

Joosh
05-29-2011, 10:00 AM
I did figure it out lol BUT IT WAS A COMPLICATED PROCESS.
It involved many rings having to be thrown in volcanoes.

Anyway Ty ;a;

Joosh
08-09-2011, 11:28 PM
HERES MOAR ART, PLEASE ENJOY. Comments and critiques are appreciated plz
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http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4269/flik.png
flik from para-ten
http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/5152/ttglcollabwithrei.png
Collab with rei :0 (Hes a fun guy, you should talk to him sometime)
lol.
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/113/itsyourtime.png
The beginning of this picture--
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1972/superpoohwerssd.jpg
A guy who has super powers and yeah.
http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/5905/problems.png
Problems?
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3752/spidermanawwyeah.png
I used a ref for the pose... :x
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/2663/heythereikeeluyou.png
IM guessing a skinnier version of the guy above...
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/1215/bagheadstrip.png
The beginning of my BAGHEAD kid OC
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5903/bagheadkid.png
Drawings of baghead kid with a colab with Taylour, shes awesome. You should talk to her sometime.

indescribable
08-10-2011, 05:23 PM
Lol, aw Flik. I had a feeling you'd like Para-Ten. xD

I've always love that collab you did with Rei. That Kamina is just... > v <


Okay. I think it's pretty safe to say that I am BagHead Kid's #1 fan. Srsly. If you ever want someone to do a guest comic I am so there. (For now I guess I'll just have to stick to fanart. > o >)

So here goes --

1) Although the first three panels are cute, I think the latter two would have more of an impact if there was a bit more focus on the bag.

2) In the fifth panel, it's a little hard to tell what's going on with the bag poking. It seems kind of weird for him to be able to stretch his fingers like that. I would suggest something along these lines (http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3425/pokex.png).

3) The little shard of panel next to panel five, though somewhat interesting, is unnecessary and makes an already busy space even busier.

4) The angle of the bag in the sixth panel seems a bit off -- I think at a bit of the inside should be visible at the bottom of the bag.

5) As I mentioned before, I think it would make more sense to have BagHead sneezing downward. Not far enough for him to lazor his feet, just a similar angle to this (http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/6438/bzzt.png), or perhaps a bit less.

6) Last but not least, he seems to have sneezed his shoes on. Consistency, ma man.

I am, of course, no expert on comics, and these are just my opinions. Take 'em of leave 'em as you see fit. :P Oh, which program did you use for the strip?

Augh, I adore these BagHead collabs. x} As I said before, the colour scheme is totally *chk chk (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ZLgi5LRNvc)*.


Sorry I didn't really crit anything else, but I've already commented on most of them, and as you can see I kind of wanted to focus on BagHead Kid. xP

Btw, I love this (http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5601/watertribegirl.png). She's adorable, and the style is awesome.

Edit:

Drawings of baghead kid with a colab with Taylour, shes awesome. You should talk to her sometime.
Eheh, you know it. ;D

CypressDahlia
08-11-2011, 12:04 AM
Josh, I swear to God if you leave your crap on the GB again without erasing it I will kill you.

Aside from that, good work. I see you are still working on male musculature.

Joosh
08-16-2011, 01:20 AM
Taylour; You are a goddess. Thank you for all of that. I will keep in mind these things next comic strip! :ascii_wink2:
Cype; maaaan. Ive started on Female anatomy now, but yerp I will forever study male musculature. /issuretoalwayserasenow
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Buy this mans papers plz
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/8776/buymypapersplz.png
He's unhappy because he's orange, he'd rather be blue.
http://joshbygosh.deviantart.com/#/d46py4y
GAMER GIRL AWR YEAR
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/3637/gamergirl.png
Some gangstahs
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/4107/gangstahs.png
ADVENTURE TIME FANART
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5092/finnandjake.png
Comments and critiques plz!
I would love them so ;a;

Joosh
08-18-2011, 10:29 PM
D'aw no comments to respond too...
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http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4021/trolloger.png
Cloudy really gave me some good advice for coloring that I will possibly treasure forever. Flesh the drawing out, then lineart it (Somewhat,) in colors that are dark and with thinner lines. It was a moment of awesome when I finely understood what she meant and cranked out this.
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/8567/akhjsbhjksbvkjshbck2.png
I tried to flesh this out with darker and thinner lines but since it was red and stuff... argh..
Anywho. Comments and Critiques are always welcome! I need to know whats wrong to do whats right :D

nisaren
08-19-2011, 12:05 AM
Interesting, I do things similar to that when I'm painting. One thing that I do differently is that I work from dark to light. So think silhouette and then start filling in lighter colors where the basic value of the material is lighter and light (direct or indirect) is hitting. Before I do the silhouette I usually toss in a quick and sloppy sketch of the subject that I'm painting just to give me some initial guidelines.

Here's a video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xk4pVF4IRKU) by Feng Zhu that explains what I'm trying to say a lot better.

Edit: Found another similar video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKLZ7VSR9qw) on youtube also by Feng Zhu.

Joosh
08-20-2011, 09:23 PM
Nisaren those videos were great, and that insect drawing was amazing. I will definitely take into account what he said about over detailing stuff.
Idk if painting in black then going over in colors is something I really like to do. I think I just like the natural feel of painting it out mang.
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GenderBender Megaman girl :0
http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/4518/wooth.png
Okay I know image shack will see a butt so I will link Deviantart-Dat ass. (http://joshbygosh.deviantart.com/#/d479ylr)
A house maid lol
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4300/maidservice.png
SNAPE. SNAPE. SEVERUS. SNAPE.
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A guy with like a portal gun of some sort...
Maybe a whacked out awesome one that can make portals on Gray surfaces..?
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3896/portalgun.png
Baghead kid says its time for me to draw the second page of the comic now..
http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/126/drawmeplz.png

SO YEAH Please critique! Id love to know what you think.

Sylux
08-20-2011, 09:33 PM
You want my critique? NEEDS BIGGER ASS

Joosh
08-20-2011, 09:47 PM
;_; But like megaman isnt 20 years old and fully developed so why should she be -EXCUSES-

Matt
08-20-2011, 10:37 PM
Maybe Roll could -- *Silenced by pedo police*

I think it was one of your pictures that I looked at beside one of Sutari's and couldn't figure out whose was whose for a minute or so. You just keep getting better, don't you?

Also: "Snape. Snape. Se-verus Snape."

Win.

Joosh
08-20-2011, 10:45 PM
Lol matt thanks. Rei is one of the many artists I look up too. :D
Thats awesome broski, that means a lot. C:
Harry potter and the mysterious ticking noise, LOL

Celestial-Fox
08-21-2011, 03:56 AM
Ahahaha, SNAPE. I love that one! The nose is so awesome. :D

And Baghead Kid reminds me of all that Rio art going around the old MT from the MT meme before she posted the picture of herself, haha.

I like the folds on the second one a lot. You're style is coming along super well. it's like Cype's sketching style, but your own kind of form. ... WOW THAT MADE NO SENSE LET ME JUST LEAVE.

Joosh
08-21-2011, 02:41 PM
---And Baghead Kid reminds me of all that Rio art going around the old MT from the MT meme before she posted the picture of herself , haha.---


WAT, WHERE. And thanks man, being compared to pros; this day keeps getting better lol
and Snapes nose is what makes him Snape tbh.

Hamachi
08-21-2011, 03:58 PM
Was that the one where she posted a picture of herself but with her long hair over most of her face? Dangit, that was disappointing );

And to give this post even a semblance of relevance, your drawings show a lot of accurate gesture Joosh so my guess is you know exactly what you're doing. Good on ya mate.

Joosh
08-22-2011, 01:37 AM
Thanks hamachi!
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Goddanget shoulda used darker lines. :C
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/2131/pew.png
these hands in this image are the same in the above, But I realised that if you put your arms into that position, it hurts somewhat. SO I fixed it.

woo thats all folks

Celestial-Fox
08-22-2011, 05:10 PM
WAT, WHERE.
The meme or the photo of Rio?

And I like the forehead laser pose. The perspective on the arms and the position of the hands are really good.

Joosh
08-23-2011, 02:43 PM
Lol I remember that meme!
And ty<3
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Just one image, D;
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9762/checkemout.png

Joosh
08-24-2011, 11:21 PM
I used a Ref picture for this ones vv
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/6540/hunterg.png

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1508/woahnowplz.png
Ninja with a wolf or something lol

me and cloudy were figure practicing

Slurpee
08-25-2011, 06:31 PM
Pretty cool. You get it all nice without using too many lines.

Sho
08-30-2011, 05:25 AM
Josh how did you improve so quickly @ _ @ I am jealous.

Joosh
09-01-2011, 09:25 PM
Slurpee; THANKS BUD, sometimes it takes 3-4 strokes before I get the line I want. :P
SHO; THANKS BUD, you'll get there.

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COMMENTS AND CRITIQUES PLEASE.

Slurpee
09-03-2011, 12:42 PM
its good that youre practicing anatomy :)
the last guys neck looks kinda funny though. and that robot thing is cool *_*

Joosh
09-03-2011, 06:23 PM
Oh yeah, the neck is too thin/small. I know how to fix it im just lazy. Its supposed to be zuko, though.

Celestial-Fox
09-05-2011, 05:31 AM
Can I just like, marry the way you draw hands? OTL

Joosh
09-06-2011, 06:13 PM
Lol Seefy.
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http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/1914/flippingandtrippin.png
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6867/frodoandsam.jpg
THEYRE TAKING THE HOBBITS TO ISENGARD. I did this on paperrrr.
COMMENTS AND CRITS PLOX

Leannah
09-06-2011, 09:12 PM
Nice hobbits <3

Slurpee
09-06-2011, 09:32 PM
Must... watch..lord..of the rings O_e

Gedeon
09-07-2011, 03:24 PM
xD Those drawings of yours made my day! lol at the nose xD

Leannah
09-07-2011, 09:38 PM
Should read Lord of the Rings. Probably won't do it. Still like the Hobbits a whole lot :p

toast
09-07-2011, 10:45 PM
what's up with your awesome anatomy? maaan I gotta step up my game

my only problem is that you should start making more finished pieces! D: like, I need some coloring mang

Joosh
09-18-2011, 12:58 PM
Leannah; Read "The hobbit" before LOTR.
Slurpee; DO IT, But watch the extended editions. Each movie is like 3 hours long and they are SOO epic.
Ged; :D lol yeah Sam's nose is pretty weird, if thats what you're referring too.
TOAST; I KNOW I like coloring butbutbut I just dont do it that often ;_; Mainly black and white value painting...OTL ILL COLOR SOMETHING JUSSFOYEW
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This one I think Is a lot like Rei's style with eyes, forgive me Rei ;_;
And A link because Image shack hates nudity... (http://joshbygosh.deviantart.com/#/d4a72h4)

indescribable
09-18-2011, 01:10 PM
I don't know if you noticed... but that girl is missing her arms and everything below the knees. o . o

I jk, I think her torso is leaned back a bit too far - standing like that is rather awkward. Also, the guy's neck seems a tad off center. That's about it, gj, Josh. xD

Now give me baghead kid. o _ o

Joosh
11-02-2011, 07:01 PM
http://chicagofree.info/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/free-movie-the-shining.gif
IM BACK
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http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/8178/scouttf2.png
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1448/linzfacepink.png
Yeah failed attempt at linz' OC.... :[
http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/1820/hipstercollegestudent.png
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/9536/72156708.png
http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/7946/bluhbluhbbluhiyhd.png
Failed foreshortening :[
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/8166/bagheadkidseesanimposte.png
BAG HEAAAD KIDD

C&C are much appreciated. 8D

Sylux
11-02-2011, 07:14 PM
Das Armen and die Handen look like one thing. You should maybe make the wrist more pronounced, unless that's what you're going for. :}

Celestial-Fox
11-02-2011, 09:12 PM
I have an honest-to-goodness question: Is Bag Head Kid supposed to be Rio's child? XD Either way s/he's awesome. XD I love the pose and expression.

Joosh
11-03-2011, 03:46 PM
Sylux; I see what you mean. Thanks for the feed back!
Id have to add more hand to it lol...

Seefy; -He's- My OC, just a kid with a bag over his head. x3
And thank you xD

Celestial-Fox
11-03-2011, 06:05 PM
I see! Back when the MT Art Meme was going around with the "draw Rio" section, most people drew a vague figure with a paper bag over its head, haha.

Gedeon
11-03-2011, 07:00 PM
Second pic right guy: His arm s coming out of a place that isn't his shoulder
The seventh pic: Too much differences in the thickness of the lower arms!

Also i love your lines!!!!! :D

Joosh
11-11-2011, 05:08 PM
Rei helped me a LOAD last night, giving me tips and stuff for Woman Anatomy. It helped a lot.
I also drew some Baghead kid pictures..

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Collaaaab
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9859/heyheyheyteentei.png
Fanart of Tei, even though Tei is actually never going to be a teen tho...According to Rei that is.
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5135/imafraidicant.png
BagHead kid's age tends to differ in each picture, -inconsistency- Any tips for that?
Never been good at drawing the same face twice or any of that stuff. But in the comic I plan on having him grow up throughout.
http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1907/ickleprfects.png
Just another drawing of the anonymous character up there ^^ And a pose.
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/5003/heytherechill.png
Wolf and erribody was draw horned people...I joined in on the fun. :0
/terrible fold shading
http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1953/giftbomb.png
What was suppose to be Batman turned into some Buff guy.
:l
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9996/heytheregirls.png
IM SO PROUD OF THESE :'D
.. >_>
Im p. much only going to be drawing women now..
:I

nisaren
11-11-2011, 07:26 PM
Very nice man. Just a quick comment about the last two. The legs look super short. While people actually do have legs like this in real life, it doesn't look... idealized. Which is how most people want their women to look. XD The left picture actually looks like you forgot completely about the knee area and just plopped the thigh right on top of the calves. I once read that it's more important to draw functional joints than properly proportioned limbs. Viewers are more forgiving of things that look like they can work. That being said, the rest of the body looks very nice. The right one also looks good so far, it'd be nice to see you draw the rest of the legs and head though. :) Keep it up!

Sylux
11-11-2011, 08:12 PM
Make the shrink between the forearm and bicep more pronounced. In a flexed pose, it's more accurate methinks. It looks like you have been working on wrists. Good! :)

Gedeon
11-11-2011, 09:05 PM
Very nice man. Just a quick comment about the last two. The legs look super short. While people actually do have legs like this in real life
Id agree with the fact that when drawn legs tend to be a little prolonged, but no normal human has calves that short. (no offence intended Joosh) It seems wrong but its right......Joosh your drawings make my mind explode.......O.O
What i think is that your one ankle short. But that's just what i, a lowlife among artists think :D
http://i1208.photobucket.com/albums/cc362/Gedeon-Gedza/heytheregirls.png

Joosh
11-13-2011, 05:40 PM
Nisaren & Ged; From what I understand you're both telling me (Or just Ged) that the legs need to be an ankle longer.
PLUS make the knee area more defined. I actually meant for the area above the vertical line stockings to be the knee, I just didnt really make it pronounced and it looks like I plopped the thigh on the calves. OKAY xD

Sotta; Thanks, but I dont understand "In a flexed pose it'd be more accurate" do you mean if she were to be flexing you could tell the difference between the forearm and bicep? ;-;

AND JUST FOR YOU, I drew some wrist studies.
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http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/8017/wristpractice.png
Woo CRITIQUE AWAY
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9030/heythur.png
Er yeah this guy who I think his eyes/nose are out of place

Sylux
11-15-2011, 09:14 PM
Believe it or not, idk what I meant, all's I know is the forearm tends to be bigger than the bicep in front view, side view is the opposite

Celestial-Fox
11-17-2011, 01:10 AM
UM. JOSH. GIVE ME THOSE HAND-DRAWING SKILLLLLLS

Slurpee
11-17-2011, 08:37 PM
Whoa dude, i think you hit a breaking point in your art! And you have your own little cartoony style coming out. So much fun to watch other's grow as an artist.

Joosh
11-20-2011, 06:18 PM
Seefy: SERIOUSLY, IF THERE WAS LIKE A DUPLICATION THINGY I WOULD. BUT I NEED THEM.

Slurpee: Lawl, Thanks! I kind of see it. But I dunno. My style wavers.

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http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6456/axzxkjnjk.png
Just a crazy chef..
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/5408/redheadjester.png
RED HEADS AW YEAH. But in SAI I had to stabilize the lines to S-7 to get those. Either I have a shaky hand or my tablets to small to have much control IDUNNO
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1976/detailedbagheadkidcolor.png
Baghead in the house
http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/2553/heyimbetter.png
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/9942/coupleofpirates.png
PIRATES with Erika
:D
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/1432/mangavi.png
Manga-ish style and JAKE THE DOG.

Oh and:
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1541/heyheyheyheyheyhey.png

Slurpee
11-20-2011, 08:18 PM
on the last picture, the girl holding the bag, her upper torso seems a bit off. like its too long.

Gedeon
11-20-2011, 09:16 PM
^Id say that her legs are too short.

Joosh
11-21-2011, 04:38 PM
Yes I agree It does look weird Slurp
And ged I just have a habit of drawing short legs D:

Joosh
11-21-2011, 07:30 PM
WOO DOUBLE POST
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http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/9742/coloredtree.png
COLORS WOO

Joosh
11-30-2011, 05:36 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9199/blueboobs.png
Im proud of this one since she has arms AND legs woooo
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5674/armsarmsarms.png
Some foreshortened arms. I didnt use a reference so im really happy I got foreshortening right on my own. Kind of an achievement you know? Like beating a LoZ game without walkthroughs..Lol.
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/7286/narcisssus.png
Oekaki board is so great. This is supposed to be Narcissus btw.
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3250/unknownsamurai.png
then my final crappy one. I drew his legs too far down OTL

Celestial-Fox
12-01-2011, 02:22 AM
JAWSH. That top one in turquoise and Narcissus are so, so good. Could you finish one of them? ;D

Joosh
12-01-2011, 04:31 PM
Yeah I want to do some things with narcissus. :D

Joosh
12-30-2011, 01:41 PM
Aye Carumba, I didnt do anything with That picture, Sorry seef.

I lost internet on my PC with the drawing tablet awhile ago, and its been on and off. So I never got around to it.
But I got tonsa cash for the Holidays. So I can get a new PC, and then run PS!
-excite-
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http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3364/heartsbelongtome.png
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/7937/getagrip.png
http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/149/couldntsaveher.png

http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/7927/coloringbewbs.pngDear lord, Please someone help me with everything on this Picture ^^ @_@

http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/6596/leavehimbe.png

CnC on anything would be loved 8D

Slurpee
12-30-2011, 05:20 PM
Uh.. your skin coloring is so awesome on it. Its just her boobs look lumpy. Try and make the like Flatter n rounder. hard to explain. personally i feel the torso is long too, but im bad with torso's so take that with a grain of salt.

AND WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE THAT BAG CHAN COMIC!?!

Joosh
12-30-2011, 05:45 PM
Eyyy Its Baghead Kid lol Not Bag Chan

And I seriously dont know maybe when I get PS

Gedeon
12-31-2011, 10:26 PM
GAAARGH! Josh by god damn gosh!! You make my head hurt! I see an anatomy mistake and when i blink i see it as a style choice ( that looks pretty sweet) !!! FUUUUUUUSSSSSSS!!!! < serbs don't say FUUUUUU we say FUUUUSSSS! :D

Cloudy
12-31-2011, 11:58 PM
On the coloured girl, focus on her boobs for a sec lol

they are two different sizes and the breast on our right is not placed correctly and needs to be a little lower, but enough of that.

FFFFFFF man I love your art you are getting so amazing <333


ok I did a quick redline, when breasts are bare with no bra they tend to not have cleavage unless pushed together :)

http://i40.tinypic.com/33xg4t3.png

Gedeon
01-01-2012, 09:06 AM
I think that the left boob is too far off the side........and that there is nothing beneath it to support it. It would be ok if something/someone(?) (perv laugh) was stretching or pulling it, but like this......looks weird.

Sylux
01-01-2012, 10:27 AM
I think that the left boob is too far off the side........and that there is nothing beneath it to support it. It would be ok if something/someone(?) (perv laugh) was stretching or pulling it, but like this......looks weird.

Yeah that's what I was thinking although some women's breasts are a bit like that and they can still manage to be very beautiful women

Joosh
01-01-2012, 01:32 PM
Ged; Lol more like FUS RO DAH. Which picture are you talking about the style choice? :0
And I see what you mean about the left boob far out, Rei actually redlined but I guess I failed at trying to fix it lawl.

Cloudy; OKAY, thanks! I see what you mean, that right boob was awkward! Ill keep this redline for future reference, I tend to draw them squished together or something :S

Sylux; Lol perky boobs.

jaidurn
01-06-2012, 01:01 PM
Josh. You've dun good.

Sylux
01-06-2012, 02:05 PM
Draw a creeper blowing you up hahaha

Joosh
02-08-2012, 06:40 PM
2012 HURR I KERM---

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/3835/scarfaceo.png

This is the new style I'm going for.
I didn't really plan it out but when I finished I was like "This is what I WANT".

http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/1072/yooossooke.png

http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/7117/pumpingiron.png

http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4656/slain.png

http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4290/awsnaaappp.png This is actually my first attempt at semi-realism, the image way up top without spoilers is my second.

http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/5842/finnjakepbg.png Collab with Cloudaaaay~

You dont have to critique anything in spoilers, It'd be great if you did. But all I really want is thoughts and opinions about scarfaec up durr. ^^

SuperKasey
02-08-2012, 07:54 PM
That second pic turns me on more than it probably should. . . :I . . . ANYWAY.
I like where you're going with the new style. The line quality kinda reminds me of the way Rei draws. More detail in the facial features and structure than an average aime/manga style is a huge plus in my book.

Cloudy
02-08-2012, 10:25 PM
wooo Josh update <3

Mr_Liebe
02-09-2012, 08:51 PM
The anatomy on your drawings is fantastic, could still use a bit of work, but great job.

The last piece is great, I love the blood, a very nice touch, keep up the good work.

Gedeon
02-11-2012, 01:58 PM
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4656/slain.png
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.......... ......... Veary nice man-anatomy...faces are coming along well.......Would like to see more anatomy practices with legs.....and more women anatomy practice.............Everything else is going along quite smoothly...

indescribable
02-12-2012, 08:26 AM
Baghead is dead. Just like your heart. :(

On the upside, I really like the adventure time collab.

The "aw snap" face is really cute too. Love it.

As for the scarfaec, well, we already talked about facial proportions. Now we just gotta get the rest of those proportions down.

Joosh
06-24-2012, 02:34 AM
Holy crap, 4 months. What.


The "Lets Exercise" thread pretty much took over my updates since I was too darned lazy. But I kinda wanted to collect all my stuff's here so anybody who doesn't frequent that thread can see. I can also ask//beg// for critiques which I haven't gotten in so long. I need to start studying and learning again! IT'S SUMMER.

I WILL CUT RUGS AND DRAW WHATEVER
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Pictures with lots of muscles, full body shots, and my horrendous women;
http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/161/avataraangrightup.png
http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/7392/waterbendera.png
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/4539/vikingtodde.png
http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/2323/boxingboss.png
http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/2762/sittingandthinking.png
http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/7775/sometime.png
http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/266/stopstaringplox.png
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5939/fabulousbatmanman.png


Heads/busts
http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/8740/28136883.png
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/4676/blckgrl.pngKind of empty in here...

Collaborations, Doodles, and Fanart
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4614/71456249.png
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/8871/metalheads.png
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/9105/chucklenuts.png
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6373/pyroy.png
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/4526/woofg.png
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5710/dragonbornelmo.png

I summon forth the knowledge and wisdom of a thousand Artists to aid me in my journey with these very words: Comments & crits plz plzplzplzpzlplz

JJJorgie
06-24-2012, 03:07 AM
I don't have any critiques, sorry. I love your style a lot! The perspective of the very first picture is wonderful! Keep up the great work!

Joosh
06-25-2012, 12:15 AM
Its okay, but thanks!

Joosh
10-27-2012, 12:06 AM
iuhsdhbsd
Update:
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/300/e/b/003_by_joshbygosh-d5j58nw.png
http://imageshack.us/a/img51/4681/collegeartmajor.png
http://imageshack.us/a/img23/9980/womenj.png
http://imageshack.us/a/img233/2514/anatomyandtf2.png

Bacon_Barbarian
10-27-2012, 12:34 AM
IDK if it's just me, but I don't see anything. :T

Evil_Cake
10-27-2012, 02:26 AM
nice butt on glass

Gedeon
10-28-2012, 11:27 AM
THE BIG GRAMPS FACE SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME....it resembles my old neighbor a lot. Nice stuff man. Its interesting how you anatomy is slightly stylized and i didn't notice until now. Its awesome!

whenrabbitsattack2.0
11-04-2012, 01:06 AM
THE BIG GRAMPS FACE SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME....

Hells yeah man. Pedo much? lol anyways, your male anatomy is amazing and you're females aren't bad at all. howver, you seen to have a more stylised way of drawing female bodies compared to your males. observation more than a critque :)