Ray Scanten's Drawings.

[scanten71-402san]

As it says, douzo.

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Only constructive criticisms.

[Yara]

You're doing well, but work more on the eyes and hair.

Make the eyelids line appear more.
For hair, do this little practice: hold you pencil loosely (but not too much) and try to make waves, curls and straight lines. Now try to draw the hair of you characters.

I'll come back later and see how you've improved.. Good luck ^_^

[scanten71-402san]

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[Rio]

Cute stuff! No eyebrows on the two bottom characters?

[scanten71-402san]

It's because I draw Lucky Star stylized eyes.