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doghateburger
02-11-2011, 06:57 AM
My art after 3 months of not drawing anything D:!

This is actually for a contest for a MMO game call Cosmic break, first place gets 2000....in game money >3<

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice032c.jpg

Wish me luck :C

Do critique and comment plz C:

Hamdrank
02-11-2011, 08:40 AM
Good luck.

Dark_Deception
02-11-2011, 12:05 PM
This is awesome... =^.^= I'm sure you'll do just fine

indescribable
02-11-2011, 02:56 PM
Hmm, this is kinda hard to crit, curse you. O<

I only have a few suggestions for the blue girl -- although most of the things I mention will most likely just be stylistic preferences.

- shoulders seem slightly too large
- hand appears to be rather small (it's smaller than her shoulder)
- lower leg is somewhat long and therefore gets too narrow in the middle

Great job on the boobs though, and the red girl looks amazing. x]
Good to have you back, man.

CypressDahlia
02-11-2011, 04:16 PM
Lookin' good thar, iccy. I have some critiques, though:

- Red's facial features are off-center.
- Her chest sticks out too far, compared to where her neck would be.
- The blush tone on her stomach is in a perfect oval, which makes it look somewhat unnatural.
- It gets a little crowded nearby Red's far leg, so it's kinda hard to tell what's going on there.

- Blue's far shoulder is way too far back. She would have at least a shoulderspan of 3 heads. You might wanna bring it closer.
- Her near shoulder is quite large and raised a little high.
- Personally, I'm a fan of long lower legs so I'm okay with that.
- Does her knee have a kneepad on it? (can't tell cuz of costume) If not, it's too raised.

Aside from that, this is a solid entry and makes a great wallpaper.

doghateburger
02-13-2011, 01:59 AM
To Hamdrank, thx mate C:

To Dark Deception, thx man! ^^

To tay, I agree with the legs and the tiny hands, I notice that as well when i was colouring it Cx. I'll keep that in mind for future reference C: thx!

To Cyp, Thx mate! I keep an eye on those for the future, maybe next time i sould have post it here on MT before getting to the final product, haha.

Sparky-J
02-13-2011, 02:32 AM
It's a little cramped, Red's left arm is getting lost in the BG.

doghateburger
02-17-2011, 11:33 AM
True that Sparky my man.

New stuff, an over due request from DA
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice033.jpg

Yeah...this one have a ton of errors in it >_>;

Its kinda one of those things that force you to get back into it, but even so, you fail horribly at it

D:

Do tell me if the colour are to dark for this one, because from my experience, the display on my laptop makes everything goes lighter :/

doruks
02-18-2011, 10:15 AM
i really like the first one.
if you don't win the contest, make some shirts of it or something else....don't let it go to waste.

for the second pic, i really dig the j-lo type behine ;-)

doghateburger
02-24-2011, 02:41 AM
xD I'll try to make some shirts mate! thx C:

Ok, serious update...well, an update that i seriously need critique on xD

MANGA PAGES! Dx

This is not an original story, its my friends, I'm just remaking it for practice since I'm idea block atm.
I need critiques on the paneling in particular. And yes, I havent insert any context. And this comic pages are supposedly to lead to my new art C:


http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice034-1.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice036-1.jpg

I know the pages are off sided, Ill fix that C:


Check the original here:
http://frost7.deviantart.com/art/PDA-Honrad-VS-Rebecca-PG4-157095660?q=gallery:frost7/25194635&qo=66
http://frost7.deviantart.com/art/PDA-Honrad-VS-Rebecca-PG5-157096020?q=gallery:frost7/25194635&qo=67

Renzokuken
02-24-2011, 06:57 PM
That is one big ass.... Not that I'm complaining but, that is one big ass....


ALSO! The manga pages look pretty slick, man.

Rio
02-24-2011, 08:57 PM
Second artwork - I feel like you're not giving the hair the same coloring treatment like the skin. Give it some love, man!

Byakuran
03-08-2011, 10:02 AM
Iccy did yu win?

I was watching some anime on goodanime.net
and this popped op it reminded me of your art lol
http://www.cosmicbreak.com/

doghateburger
03-08-2011, 02:06 PM
Renzokuken, yeah, i was trying to give her some nice hips, but she ended up with big ass >3<

rio, I will give it some love on my next update! D:

Byakuran, They havent announced the winners yet xD. Im still waiting my self D:!

Celestial-Fox
03-09-2011, 02:38 AM
ICCYYYYYYYYYYYY <33

Listen, mister: I really, really dislike you because you are SO GOOD with coloring skin. D: Wait to let me catch up, bro! XD The only thing that gets me most of the time is that you have a tendency to color outside of/not close enough to the lines, so it gives off a weird sharpness effect when you resize it to lower dimensions. A good way to avoid little hiccups like that is to make your lineart thicker, or to check your coloring using Setsuna22's contrast outline method (explained at the bottom) (http://setsuna22.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=/resources/tutorials/digiart/#/d14fzrj).

doghateburger
03-09-2011, 06:07 AM
http://www.cosmicbreak.com/info/topic/news/4265

Well, I didn't win, but I got GM award worth 20 bucks!! xDDDDD


To Seefy, I agree with you, and my laziness is to be blame for it D:. Thanks for the tutorial, I'll definitely have a look at it! C:

Rio
03-10-2011, 01:39 PM
Congrats Iccy! :D

doghateburger
03-25-2011, 04:35 AM
Thank you rio!!

Anyways, I've been working on something with a due date, Its actually a challenge my brother set for me, but I believe Im gonna fail >_>

Heres a preview of it

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/IMG_0002c-1.jpg

Trying out a new colouring technique that I'm really uncomfortable with.


In other news, I'm gonna try and take up some commissions >_>, yeah iknowright D: . In case youre interested, check it out here C:

http://doghateburger.deviantart.com/journal/39103400/#comments

EDIT UPDATE!!!
Some stuff Ive been working on

CG Practice
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice037.jpg

Some yuri infantry concept Im working on for a Red Alert 3 mod. They are bringing Yuri back! D:
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice038-1.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice039-1.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice041-1.jpg


And Finally Wai Shee Li Reboot!!!!! This will be my new Commission sample once its done, and yes, she have uber long legs D:
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/practice042.jpg


C n C appreciated! :D

CypressDahlia
03-25-2011, 10:42 PM
Like the redesign, Iccy. Lamellar armor FTW.

But I think you should try to align the facial features more when you draw faces. Sometimes the alignment is a little skewed.

andr3ytp
03-26-2011, 02:28 AM
I always loved your way of designing characters!

Gedeon
03-26-2011, 12:15 PM
YAAAAY I love how female warriors wear armor......that not only is at a minimum but also can't protect them from anything!!! Huzzahah for female sexy warrior with uber long legs!!!

doghateburger
04-04-2011, 12:00 PM
To Cyp, yes Lamellar armor is indeed FTW! I'll try and fix her face in the line art, but that has been delayed :C

To andr3ytp, thank you, good to see you again :P

To Gedeon. oh yes indeed ;DDDD Enough to cover the essentials!

Anyways!!! For those of you who have been active on Groupboard, you'll know tat I've return once again! D<

Here are just 3 stuff that I drew while i was lonely :C
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/gbfuncollection1.jpg

I think im gonna start getting into the habit of drawing more in GB, since I am somehow 50% more creative there >_>

indescribable
04-04-2011, 12:37 PM
Ahah, I love the bubblegum girl, although I get the feeling that if she stood up, her ankles would snap.

I also really like how you coloured the armour in the first pic. Your colouring skills are improooviiiing. o:

Linz
04-04-2011, 04:33 PM
Why does it say Linz = <3 in one of the pictures? lmao.

PWhit
04-04-2011, 06:50 PM
I would have loved to see a full body of the woman in the knight's armor! Everything else is amazing!

CypressDahlia
04-04-2011, 07:40 PM
For the record, that is a man.

PWhit
04-04-2011, 07:45 PM
lol... awkward.

Ozzaharwood
04-06-2011, 08:08 AM
Why does it say Linz = <3 in one of the pictures? lmao.

I think I wrote that when we were trying to annoy each other...

Badass work Iccy, keep it up. c:

Matt
04-06-2011, 10:14 AM
Iccy . . . I think you should draw a girl version of that man-who-I-thought-was-a-girl-at-first in the armor. (The muscle-arm tipped me off.)

I think your comprehension of colors is really good. Especially this new GB stuff.

Now you make me wanna get on GB. I'll be there this afternoon.

doghateburger
04-07-2011, 03:00 PM
To Tay, yeah...her anatomy is a little wobbly, first time actually trying to draw an up side down head xD

To linz, what Oz said C:

To Pwhit, lmao xD

To Oz, thx mate C:

To Matt, wish granted C:

second set. all drawn in one day
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/gbfuncollection2.jpg

The second one i was actually aiming for a more western inking style

And now, they're ugly faces! :D
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/gbknights.jpg

Matt
04-07-2011, 03:08 PM
WHOA. She's hot. Everything in that pic just looks epic. For that matter, so does everything in this new update.

I really like your style. That's all I can say, cuz I can't critique you (too much level difference!). Sorry.

>>Thanks for taking up a request like that out of the blue.<< *Downloads*

Lady_Knife
04-08-2011, 12:50 AM
Iccy! Nice work with the GB stuff. Are you still using the same pen you did for your digital art or have you upgraded? What are you using now? Do you use SAI? (I have yet to buy it.) Or do you settle for Photoshop?

Celestial-Fox
04-08-2011, 01:36 AM
I hate how you fake detail in your line quality and shapes. *fistshake* I am so jealous of you all the time, buh--! <33

Umber_the_kid
04-08-2011, 01:25 PM
Lol, Iccy. The one chewing gum, she looks like she's about to do a barrel roll. Xb

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/phantomking/gbfuncollection1.jpg

I really like your lineart on the more finished pieces. It's so easy on the eyes.

doghateburger
04-09-2011, 09:13 AM
To Matt, Glad you like it! ^^

To LK, I'm using Wacom intous 4 right now, and I'm still on photoshop, since I'm already used to the hotkeys C:

To Seefy, If it look good, it aint fake ;DD

To Umber_the_kid, She'll barrel roll over you O:<, nah jk C:.

Anyways, I think I'm gonna take up some GB request, meaning, I'll draw them all on GB. I'll take 3 C:

1. Sho - Sho Minamimoto
2.
3.