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Mizuko
02-08-2011, 05:29 PM
Hello :) First time posting on this new forum. Please critique my drawings; I really need to improve XD. Anything, anything at all would be helpful. :)

http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/7766/21309377.jpg
By mizuko12 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/mizuko12) at 2011-02-08

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1760/18741328.jpg
By mizuko12 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/mizuko12) at 2011-02-08

nisaren
02-09-2011, 02:00 PM
Hey, I think you're doing pretty well. I have a few comments to make. The two boy's heads at the top of the first picture are pretty good. The one where he is looking upwards needs to be fixed as there is a perspective error. When facing up his head should be narrowing as you move from chin to forehead. His neck also strikes me as looking odd, I think it may be that you've put the two diagonal lines for the SCM muscles to far to the sides so they look like they're the edge of the neck instead. Most of the time you don't even see them until they're closer to the sternum and you only really see them higher up when the head is turning.

In the second picture, both of the people look as if their forearms are a bit too long. The girl has her left hand's thumb on the wrong side too.

All in all, it's looking really good so far. Just keep drawing and you'll be awesome in no time. :)

Mizuko
02-09-2011, 04:14 PM
Haha, ah i see what you mean about her thumb XD. But thanks for the help :)