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J_Mizu
02-07-2011, 06:08 AM
Hai gais. I'm back. And hopefully I'll stick around a little bit longer. Editing scripts for JC manga.


But yeah. Joker pic. I finished it.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z62/mizukiyanagi/joker.jpg

Blue_Dragon
02-07-2011, 06:19 AM
Wow! That's really good! It's gonna be really hard to critique, since you're way out of my league ;P


Hm...but I should say something constructive. Since you're this skilled, and can demonstrate you have virtually mastered value, proportions, and expression, I might try to offset images. This is all I've seen of your work, so you may already to do this, but try to create some interesting poses where the figure is not in the middle. You can also "crop" the images differently. Take a look at some of Degas' horse race paintings, to see what I mean. They almost seem awkwardly cropped, but they really draw you in because they are different from most paintings. Also, good use of diagonals is something you could try. Since I can't really see anything that needs improvement, the only thing I can suggest is to take it to another level by moving the subject to different areas of the picture "grid."
Does that make sense?

man, awesome work, though! I'm impressed. Can't wait to check out your Joker comic! Will you be posting it in "manga works?"

J_Mizu
02-07-2011, 06:47 AM
lol thanks
this is actually just life drawing from a photograph of Joker from the Batman movie framed straight in the middle, I do that to practice proportions, shadowing and stuff like that.

but yeah, Im not drawing a Joker comic lol. Wasn't clear on the manga thing, but yeah basically Im redrawing and rescripting my manga Just Criminals and stuff like that. For direct reference: (shameless plug) http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/gallery/23939570

jaidurn
02-07-2011, 07:06 AM
Mizu, why so awesome?

Blue_Dragon
02-07-2011, 07:12 AM
You can shameless plug :P And you're doing great on the proportions! (Though I've said that already.)

What I've looked at of you comic is very well done :)


Edit: and I think I've commented on the dude with the stick drawing on your DA...nice!

Yara
02-08-2011, 03:49 PM
Mizu, why so awesome?

^True D'8

J_Mizu
02-11-2011, 03:14 AM
lol oh you gais

right so creating a main character for manga, etc etc.

two versions. The first one was the original one so its much more refined than the second one, but yeah which one do you think is better?

http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/3214/concept1.jpg

http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4613/concept2f.jpg



..ignore the toes..

indescribable
02-11-2011, 03:40 AM
Sheesh, Mizu. Your style really improved in the time you were gone. o - o

I personally like the first design a lot better, except that I prefer him without knee-socks. And just because I am picky and like to feel that I actually have something to critique, I think that, proportionally, his fingers seem a bit too long, and his palm and upper-arms are not long enough. Looks great though. Colour?

I am glad. that you are back.

J_Mizu
02-11-2011, 09:18 PM
TAAAYYYYY *glomps*

lololol miss choo

yeah here I changed the hands 8D
is it better now?
Also I decided to make it a mix of the two concept and changed the bandaids to scars and coloured it 8D

http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3580/concept3.jpg


need comments about the chosen colour pallette though. Does it look alright?

indescribable
02-11-2011, 10:33 PM
TAAAYYYYY *glomps*

lololol miss choo
PSH, LIES. Jkjk, miss choo too. x] But you probably already knew that. -cough-

Anyway, the hands look much better now, and the scars look great. Anyway, "Everybody knows cool guys don't wear band-aids." right? O<

I adore the colour scheme, although I'd like to see how it looks with a darker grey for the gloves, pants and flip-flops. Also, did he get slightly shorter? Lol.

J_Mizu
02-17-2011, 09:12 AM
lulz yeah I scaled the image down a little so it would fit the screen better
hahahahahahha
yeah I'll try a different colour scheme when I has time. I got asked to do a couple of posters for the anime club at Uni so yeah

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/4128/screenshot20110217at938.png

Doing a bit of a risk though cause Im trying a totally different way of colouring.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7591/screenshot20110218at120.png

doghateburger
02-17-2011, 09:44 AM
im lovin' this C: hope to see more!

Matt
02-17-2011, 10:17 AM
Mizu, your skill is much higher than mine and I probably won't be able to critique you as well as some, but I'll give it my best.

The WIP coloring is good. I'm not sure where you're going with it, so I should really withhold this, but her skin looks a little dead/lifeless right now. In case you were gonna fix that anyway, I retract my critique. Of course, if you intended her skin to look like that, I again nullify my critique.

Son44
02-18-2011, 05:45 AM
I like the WIP so far. Like Matt pointed out, the skin is a bit lifeless. Ofcrouse it depends on the lightning, where she is etc. Can't wait for the finished version!

J_Mizu
02-18-2011, 06:37 AM
alrighty~ I changed the skin colour a bit. Added a bit of saturation and made it darker 8D
Is it better or does it still look lifeless?

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1998/screenshot20110218at933.png

Celestial-Fox
02-18-2011, 06:52 AM
The skin definitely looks better, but it could use a lot more shading. All of your shadows are tending to concentrate themselves around the linework, which, while it create more visual interest, does not create the illusion of depth. Consequently, the face, and a good part of the abdomen look like flat planes rather than organic shapes, if that makes any sense. DX

I do like the pose a lot, and the color scheme is very cool. I can never seem to use pink right.

J_Mizu
02-24-2011, 05:21 AM
I was told to change that drawing because it isn't anime style *CRIES* ALL MY HARD WORK BFJKASDASD
Anyway I'll continue the original when I'm finished with the 2 posters.

MEANWHILE....

http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/184314_201362423208332_100000037286417_753684_2852 08_n.jpg

new devart chyeah

Crit to myself:

I guess the teeth?
Needs a improvement on the hair. I'm still trying to figure out how to make it a little bit more realistic I guess

Son44
02-24-2011, 06:30 AM
IT'S A ZOMBIE!!!! ASRGHDSRUANWDKASF *gets out a shotgun*

I like it. Especially the colours

indescribable
02-24-2011, 06:50 AM
What happened to your eeeeyes. D:

I like the hair, but yes, the teeth seem rather unrealistic to me. I think they are rather uniformly square and extend too far to the side -- remember, teeth curve around to the back of the mouth -- see how only about 4 or 5 top teeth are visible on one side of the skull on the right? (http://www.wsws.org/images/f16-hobb-480.jpg)

As for the whole zombie-you thing, I love it. x] I'm on a bit of a zombie kick right now so this is awesoooome.

erikamae
02-25-2011, 04:08 AM
Mizuzuz 0: , dude, you were awesome when you left, and you come back and BAM ;a;
anyway, diggin' the zombie you, I really like the way you drew Joker @A@ ; amazing folds c:

J_Mizu
06-19-2011, 10:46 AM
AHFASDKSJ SORRY FOR DISAPPEARING
IVE BEEN HEAPS BUSY WITH UNI AND I JUST FINISHED THIS SEMESTER AND I ALSO HAVE WORK AND I ALSO TRY TO HAVE A SOCIAL LIFE WHICH KINDA FAILS BUT STILL

I've been having prac work for Uni and I get like 3 of each things so I'm always swamped ;A;

anyway, I won a contest at a convention called Supanova, at sydney. The deadline was during the time when everything else was due so I had like 2-5 hour sleep everyday for about 2 weeks =_=; Doesnt help that I have work at 6am most ofthe time >.>

But yeah, they gave me an intuos4 when the original prize was a bamboo. I cried LOL

Deviantart Link: http://artzombi3.deviantart.com/#/d3j7w80

http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/4035/supanova2.jpg

Light source is kinda iffy on this one =_='

Also I got 2 of Inoue Takehito's artbooks. I jizzed

Also did animation for animation class

Deviantart Link: http://artzombi3.deviantart.com/#/d3fjzh0

Note: its better if you check out the one in devart because the youtube link was recorded 2nd hand and is really really really choppy

<iframe width="480" height="390" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/rbYDNmWYJXk" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>

indescribable
06-19-2011, 03:07 PM
GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK FOR THE BLINK OF AN EYE. ; v ;

Congrats on the contest, btw. x} Looks like a heck of a lot of work went into that piece. o . o

Rio
06-21-2011, 04:49 PM
Mizu! :glomps:

Glad to see you drop by even if for a little. Awesome stuff. Since it's summer, drop by when you can! :ascii_tearsofjoy:

J_Mizu
07-31-2012, 02:49 AM
I disappeared again woo
sigh this is becoming a constant thing, Im terribly sorry.

Few of my most recent stuff...

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/5199/sorceressi.jpg
http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/1773/roguebyartzombi3d50kj6m.jpg

Currently working on Khaleesi from game of thrones and a Legend of Korra fanart... If I have time to do them anyway...

http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/6839/hermahgurd.jpg

Sutari
07-31-2012, 03:22 AM
MAN MIZU, you gotta just

kick real life's ass and tell it to get up outta your kool-aid >:[

but it is nice to see you're still godly at coloring

J_Mizu
07-31-2012, 03:30 AM
HOMAIGOD YOURE STILL ALIVE

kick lifes ass and tell it to-- kool aid whaaaaatttt?

I WISH I CAN DO THE SAME WITH MAKING COMICS. ahmygad, writings block right thur.

Demonfyre
07-31-2012, 10:47 AM
Wow... your works are phenomenal :O the colouring is superb and the figures and clothing look amazing :D I really hope you don't disappear again, I really want to see more of your work :)

*Looks at DA page...*

JJJorgie
07-31-2012, 04:15 PM
Those are all incredible!!! The ghost in the first is amazingly done!!! Keep up the awesome job!!!

Cloudy
08-06-2012, 08:26 AM
nice stuff! you should totally post more though ;3

J_Mizu
08-21-2012, 04:00 AM
Lol I wish I can do more things, Uni is destroying any possibility of me finishing a personal work.

I might put some other things here aside from illustrations in the future though, stuff that I do at uni.

Here's something Im working on for my 3D class. I learned how to model like a few months ago, I just havent been practicing it lol, since I became absolutely lazy after my first semester. Anyway, this is supposed to be a digital composite, so I have a photograph for the background. They're sitting on the keys of a piano. (EDIT: I use Maya)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6113/screenshot20120819at627.png

I'm also currently working on a credits scene for my video class. Here are some background images im using.

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/400420_481659135178658_1395996909_n.jpg

GIF File: http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/8730/factory.gif

I'll post it once I'm done, if its worth posting lol

Rubisko
08-21-2012, 02:23 PM
Lol I wish I can do more things, Uni is destroying any possibility of me finishing a personal work.


You're like the opposite of me then, when I were at uni I pumped out new personal pieces like all the time, but now almost all drawing and painting I do is studies and I'm almost too blocked up by details to do any personal stuff at all :P

I love that manbearrabbit with the guitar

J_Mizu
08-23-2012, 09:42 AM
Lol yeah I hate Uni for doing that to me. But I do kinda personalize some stuff that I do, its just that theres limited freedom is all.
Here's my animation thing for my video2 project. we had to do a credit scene for something


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WlWTRyT4pL4

Shadowsfade
08-24-2012, 06:42 AM
that animation is amazing <3 and i love all the people you put in it xD

Demonfyre
08-24-2012, 09:39 AM
The animation flows really well :) catchy song as well xD

J_Mizu
08-25-2012, 10:05 AM
Hahaha, yeah there was a brief that we had to follow, I actually had no part about the names, sadly. BUT, fun fact. James Nguyen is the creator of a film called "Birdemic". THE BEST FILM EVERY MADE *cough*


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9j5tH_H5aN0

Anyway I finished my 3D work! yayy
http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/6070/3420209janacruz.jpg