View Full Version : Renzokuken's Thread Mark III: Colouring & Unfinished work

02-06-2011, 10:52 AM
Well, it's been a while. I'm Renzo: the teen artist with decent drawing skills with a poor quality camera. The last time I updated was in September and the last comment made in my thread (which happened to be mine, lol) was in October.

I bet I've faded so far into the background you've forgotten me, huh?

*awkward silence*

So yeah, here's some new stuff for 2011 and some old stuff altogether:

Sunset taken just at the bottom of the steps to my house.

http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/hs256.snc6/180406_142720195789517_100001546116381_266742_7533 509_n.jpg
When it snowed around here, it looked amazing.

http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs774.ash1/166472_142720242456179_100001546116381_266743_7550 645_n.jpg

http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/hs077.snc6/168712_142720565789480_100001546116381_266750_1892 26_n.jpg

http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs753.snc4/65346_113931075335096_100001546116381_103471_62760 56_n.jpg

http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs733.snc4/65346_113931078668429_100001546116381_103472_55126 59_n.jpg
Train Station.

Drawings (Leisure & College work):
This is a WIP character from...Actually, you'll find out eventually, lol.
Her name's Astra.

Trying to use my imagination to represent human emotions. This one's...Love. Yes, I know, it's f*****g weird.

I got this, lol.

Time & Age piece for College.

Study of drapery. Taken from Da Vinci's work.

I added a random skeletal hand to try and make it relevant but I decided to leave it as an experimental page.

One of my favourite OCs: Kain.

This look feels more final.

Risa in my updated style.

"The deaths of her loved ones trouble her deeply."

Amongst the first of my 2011 pieces.

This a final piece for Art.


Just some general sketches of 2010.


Anatomy studies for College. (Yes, that top pic is inked XP)

More anatomy studies.

More later.

02-06-2011, 08:46 PM
Interesting stuff. I like the clouds in the first photo and the sunset (or is it a sunrise?) with the open field photo. You don't have access to a scanner?

02-13-2011, 08:32 AM
Sunset. Winter sunsets, I've found, are very beautiful. Thanks, Rio! :D

And no...Unfortunately.

02-20-2011, 01:14 PM
Double post.


Dream World sketches.


I need to take better care of my paper. D:

02-22-2011, 06:58 PM
DAZUMN!!!! Dude you cant be forgoten, everyone probably bieng lasy! I love the artwork, sure the real pics are nice and i like the one when it snowed here and all that but im more facinated by what you did with your pencil! I especialy love the times up pic! Sure the half naked girls is ok and all that but THOSE SKULLS IN THE BACKROUND ARE DAZUMN GREAT!!!AND THAT COLOURED ONE WITH THE SKULL AND THE FLWER IN THE HAIR IS ALSO AWSOM! Only thing that i can say thats a bit off is the scale of Kains head. But maybe you did it intentionaly, if thats the case i apologize, and the girl that well know who she is soon enough is missing an eye, but that also might be intetional! DAMZUMN!!! Your art is so great that even when i think there might be a mistake it cant be indentefied as a mistake!!!! ):( :D

02-22-2011, 08:37 PM
I love you work :) Can't say much more than Gedeon though.

02-22-2011, 11:15 PM
Hmm. The first photograph (the sunset) is good but i feel inconvenient about pole (two pole). I think you need to think about composition before taking a photo. Something like "repeat pattern" is quite helpful. Maybe just one pole (for point of interest or something like a frame) is better than two similar pole but don't have a meaning.

But about your drawing is damn good.

02-24-2011, 07:07 PM
Gedeon: There's always something that needs to be improved on, in my opinion. Indeed, you have made light of Kain's slightly large head. Also, thank you for your positive comments. :D

Brain: Thanks for viewing and commenting, though. XD

Reset: Yeah, that just shows I spend more time with it. I just tried to capture the light because it intrigued me. -.- Thanks for the advice and comment. :D

02-24-2011, 08:20 PM
WIP Inked and colored girl - you should take more care when inking. I notice that you went over some lines over again and now some lines are heavier than others. Also, I see some wavy lines there.

Rose - you need to work on making it more 3 dimensional. Right now it looks so flat. Since you already inked it, you can't fix it so I suggest you add more shading to make it more 3D.

Is the orange part ribbons?