View Full Version : Twisted Wing {NSFW} {Some new concept art on page 2.}

04-26-2013, 12:58 AM
{Has gorey gores, please no complain if no likey gorey gores.}

{Also, as shooty guns. Please no complain if no likey shooty shots.}

{Also also, has peopley people and humans and stuff. I know, I'm sick.}

{Honestly, through, you should like gores. You'd die without your organs, bro, they do stuff...}


{Still here? Was it be making of the enjoyments?}

{Also also also, more actual plot and talking next time, promises. More pages are penciled, but I just really wanted to get stuff off the backburner. GOTTA EMBRACE THE WEIRDNESS MANGOS.}

{KISSES. :m}

04-26-2013, 01:41 AM
Wow! Interesting concept. You actually gonna finish this one? Hahaha! I like the girlie, she's real cute! Good work, Reggie!

04-26-2013, 08:00 AM
Thanks mango! Been forcing myself to actually get this one rolling for ages. Glad u liek. There are more unfinished pages too, like I said. ;I

04-26-2013, 08:39 AM

04-26-2013, 05:26 PM
Peak Regantor ITT
Well, wait. No musclegirls, so maybe not peak.

Awesome stuff Regduder. Glad you finally posted it :D

04-26-2013, 08:29 PM
love da expression of that dude in almost last panel

04-26-2013, 10:29 PM
Maybe girly beefcake later? Dunno. THERE ARE NO RULES IN A STEEL CAAAGGEEEE~

As for expressions... He actually just ate an entire moldy pizza and this entire comic is infact the cosmic brain trip he's ballin. True story.

But... erm... yeah. Thanks guys.

04-27-2013, 10:02 AM
Geez moooooarrrrr. That Lawmaker(?) is the cutest/creepiest darn thing ever D: <3 The first panel really hooked me in, the landscape is so simplistic but it had a marvellous feeling of being vast and grand. Teach me your ways @_@!

04-27-2013, 01:09 PM

04-28-2013, 02:47 PM
@ Linz; Thanks, mango. Really flattered! Kinda don't know what to say, actually... But, erm, yeah, since it's coming from a Linz and all, mega appreciations are had! x_x

@ Jubeh; http://i.imgur.com/NaIyM4k.pnghttp://www.freewebs.com/handcannon/IMG_0042&#37;20copy.jpg

04-29-2013, 08:56 PM
That was pretty awesome. I thought you handled the reveal of the lawmaker's face very well; it's genuinely disturbing when you get a right look at it...

05-02-2013, 12:52 PM
Yeah, close ups are awesome.

TIPS: Try to very your perspectives a bit, this is all very standard, med-shot, 2-point, "flat" almost... which does not do credit to those amazing backgrounds. I realize this takes a bit more time, but try to get some more variation in the panels. Make them more... I don't know... dynamic? Every picture has to tell a thousand words.

As for the gore--- it wasn't too gory. *sad face* I found the blood and stuff to be slightly unrealistic as its being spurted out of your victims here... I would have liked to see more realistic damage. (But not waaay over the top, if you get what I'm saying)

Also... you're British? Those miner guys say "old bean." I have zero people I know who say that. heh heh. *Laughs at the accent since I am an offensice American*

...Can I just say that was really weird though? (Especially the tail in the butt part... what WAS that? o_O )

05-03-2013, 03:44 PM
@ Gaff; Right on the money, then, lol. Not really sure that I can even call this 'creepy cute' as much as 'horrible cute' now, through... Dunno. Just doing what my brain tells me to. Thanks for commenting, man. ;I

@ Rebel; Thanks for the really in-depth critique. Certainly stuff I didn't notice... Yeah. I actually have varied the perspective alot more with other things in the past, not quite sure why I forgot to this time... I'll try and fix that even with the new penciled pages... The gore... I'm actually not 100&#37; sure how to handle since things are so grimdark that it's really just quite silly and not very realistic at all at this point, but on the other hand, corpses literally play a large part in the plot. Perhaps I'll just make a point of throwing in some hypergory exposition later, when it calls for it.

The British accents... well, lol, why not? Yorkshire blokes used to be world-renouned miners, so when trying to think of a pro miner in a dingy crapshack world, that's all I could think of... I am english, through... Really weird? Yeah. Weirdy things are goody things!

Tail butt?... The monster woman is a busy little bee... erm, bee-corpse... erm... zombie wasp girly... person-thing... yeah. :333

05-04-2013, 06:57 PM
Oh. Didn't look like a wasp to me. (heh, whoops)

Well, you see ol bean, I'm from colorado, so we also have our own version of miners here chap. They talk more like this though: "Gold! Lordy, I found me some gold! Ain't she a beauty pardner?" So that's what I think of when I think of a miner's accent... Anyways.

Yorkshire did have renowned miners though, even I've heard of the coal business way out here in the middle of uneducated America. ( ;) )

But "Old bean" reminds me of... not miners anyways. Keep the accent though. The accent is good. *thumbs up*

05-06-2013, 04:53 PM
Fair enough. ;I

Also, yeah. Things going kinda slow at the minute. Still working through. Have some of the piles and piles of concept art, in the mean time. >_>

Alternate cover idea-

05-09-2013, 09:45 PM
Vespa is ridiculously cute for being such a strange creature. Love those eyes in the alt cover. Thats the reg eyes I know and love :3 Fabulous sketches indeed @_@.

05-12-2013, 12:16 AM
The detail you put into every part of your drawings is just amazing! I really love your character designs! :) The story has a really cool sounding plot and setting. I think you started it out very well and really made it interesting! Keep up the great work!

05-12-2013, 10:37 PM
Jeez how'd I miss this nice work regs.
I like mouth stitches.

05-12-2013, 11:10 PM
Your art style really compliments the story you are telling I think c:
Must agree with Linz, Vespa is cute despite being such an odd entity :3

05-14-2013, 06:31 PM
Thanks guys! I really do appreciate it, I just feel like a bit of a number two when I post without any new work. Things are rolling... just, erm, yeah, really kinda slow at the minute. But it be exist. >_>

@ Linz; Cheers Linzorator! You always manage to motivate me again! And, erm, yeah... Who needs consistency, lol. Might still do something with the alt cover but not sure what... ~_~

@ JJJorgie; Thanks! That does mean extra coming from you, too. Glad I managed to impress. :3

@ Ooocast; So THAT's who made that stitched together crab-pidgeon on my doorstep! Super cool beans! *u*

@ Demonfyre; You mean scraggly and half-dead? lol. Thanks man. This is kinda new territory for me in proper comic terms so I'm glad if you think it works. 'v'