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toast
01-24-2011, 05:41 PM
hey guys =D

if you've never seen my art, go ahead and look at my da: http://greensubmarine.deviantart.com

anyway, ok here's a recent drawing I did (it's kinda huge soo I'll put it in a link. sry):

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/022/f/f/paranoia_by_greensubmarine-d37t5ve.png

and i posted this one already, but as always, i didn't get criticism on it. (which annoys me guys. even if the style isn't one you're use to, doesn't mean you can't criticize it. it's not that hard.)

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/361/2/b/dollars_and_sense_by_greensubmarine-d35t5j3.png

GunZet
01-24-2011, 05:53 PM
Welcome to the other side Toasteh! It's...it's not so green yet but it's getting there lol.

Now bout that art, I think I remember this one from a while ago but never commented on it >_>
I have a feeling it has something to do with your obsession over that mp3 you got xD I love this one and that blue tint the girl has...and the firehawk.
Gots any new stuff? cuz I'm waiting!

Renzokuken
01-24-2011, 06:06 PM
Welcome to the DARK SIDE!!! -insert dramatic music and sinister laughter-


This is awesome!! But you already knew that.

Yara
02-05-2011, 03:10 PM
goggy is on the dark side too.. What is the dark side guys? =S

Regarding toast's art, there is some resemblance to picasso's style imo =)
http://img4.allvoices.com/thumbs/event/609/480/67615797-picasso.jpg

Rio
02-06-2011, 09:04 PM
Her head doesn't look symmetrical. Love the colors and very avant-garde looking artwork, btw. What were you trying to accomplish on the left, beside the tree? Also, I feel like the base of the tree should be wider. Right now, the top looks wider than the bottom and it just looks odd to me.

PWhit
02-06-2011, 09:49 PM
Trippy stuff man! I like it, but I don't know if the distortion of the anatomy (the picture on MT) is intentional or not. Paranoid is good, but I would change how the eyes are to add more a realistic effect to the art and really make her look like she's going insane.

GunZet
02-06-2011, 09:52 PM
Are you talking about that last pic?....I don't think Toast did that.

PWhit
02-06-2011, 10:04 PM
No, Paranoid was from following his link to his deviantart.

GunZet
02-06-2011, 10:23 PM
Toast is a girl bro xD but while I'm at it, I didn't see that link.
And now that I see it, I really like the colors, the orange hair really fits with the skin color. Although I agree the eyes could've been a bit more uniform or whatever I mean...looks epic either way.

jessica_owl
02-22-2011, 09:42 AM
awesomeness :) love the hair and the skin....i can't really find anything wrong?

toast
04-24-2011, 07:40 PM
hey guys! sorry its been like a gajillion months, I got lazy..<_<

gunz: thanks dude~! it actually came out more of how I thought this rainbow I saw on a cd looked really pretty so I wanted to color it. and then this shit came out lol
renzo: lol thanks man
yara: uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh maybe the lines or something? I dont know xP its cool that you find some type of similarity though!
rio: the unsymmetrical head is purposeful lawl, I don't go for perfect head and face symmetry, thats not my thing. about the tree, on the left I was just kind of doodling around, and I see what you mean about the top and bottom of the tree. the composition isn't the best considering I was just doodling and adding whatever I felt like ahah, so this was kind of on the spot. but thankyou! I'm glad you like the colors and the fact that my attempt at making something avant-gardeish is working! (:
pwhit: thanks dude :D yessir it was intentional, although I wish I kind of emphasized it more so it was more obvious that it was intentional lol. and about paranoid, thanks for the idea dude. I actually wish I would have done that!
gunz: thanks again :3
jessicaowl: thankyou!

now I've drawn a whole bunch of crap since this post, so im just going to pick out the things I find best. I guess if you want to see everything, check out my deviantart which is in the first post

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/050/4/3/lady_in_bloo_by_greensubmarine-d39w2hn.png
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/071/2/0/red_telephone__love_by_greensubmarine-d3bhhvr.png
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/085/0/b/when_did_i_become_a_ghost_by_greensubmarine-d3ck16r.png
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/085/e/d/eezy_breezy_by_greensubmarine-d3ck3md.png
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/092/3/8/just_seen_a_face_by_greensubmarine-d3d2y4i.png

I'm not a punk---> http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/097/6/2/i__m_not_a_punk_by_greensubmarine-d3dgfai.png
this image is huge soo

of course I have to post this although he already posted it
best gif ever, I want to make more animations
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/113/2/7/happeh_birthday_8d_by_greensubmarine-d3eq6bw.gif

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/113/a/0/erase_by_greensubmarine-d3eqief.png

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/114/e/7/mr_sad_lion_by_greensubmarine-d3esp4c.png

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/114/b/6/hay_im_new_by_greensubmarine-d3esuoc.png

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/114/4/8/bleeeh_by_greensubmarine-d3esulk.png

erikamae
04-26-2011, 07:39 AM
duuude, I dig this one: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/085/e/d/eezy_breezy_by_greensubmarine-d3ck3md.png
nice detail.

Noodlesoup
04-26-2011, 07:58 AM
Wow, your art is so bright, lively and just generally pretty. I love it! On the peacock lady one, I love the way her skin is coloured.

GunZet
04-26-2011, 11:51 AM
Trippy and bright as hell, always. Classic Tz.
Great stuff chap.

Sylux
04-26-2011, 02:02 PM
Toast, I just gotta ask. Are you on acid.

ClockHand
04-27-2011, 12:01 PM
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/114/b/6/hay_im_new_by_greensubmarine-d3esuoc.png

one of my favorites

Byakuran
04-27-2011, 01:04 PM
Awesome. your'e so awesome D: ,, and i like the guy smirking

but my fav is the first... what did you use to colour that? (Waterpaint?)

Also i see you've been drawing on SAI kewl (orithink)

Ruther_3429
05-14-2011, 06:17 PM
Your profile says you're 13...
Please keep drawing and I think you could be immense one day :)
The first one is greaaat

Scarletlight
05-15-2011, 10:02 AM
Really digging the first one., The mask reminds me of...whatever that evil womens name is from ff8 lol. Anyway the style is so bizarre. It attracts attention. Nice work

Celestial-Fox
05-19-2011, 09:10 PM
Egh, Toast, teach me how to be as bold as you with pattern and color. D: <3

toast
06-17-2011, 09:55 AM
erka: thankyoou!! <3
noodlesoup: thankyou too!! aaah!
gunz: gracias dude! cant lose the trippiness
sylux: not yet, my dear sylux, not yet
clock: yeah when I was drawing it, I had a feeling you'd like it lol. something about the weird animal species
bya: lawl thankyou! <3 you're awesome too maan. I used SAI to color that lawl, and yeah I've been using sai for a majority of my stuff (: I like it better than photoshop...
ruther: thankyou!!!
scarletlight: thanks! (:
seefy: darling you already know how to be bolder! <3

goddammit guys why are you so nice lol. THANKYOU TO ALL

this has to be super quick because I need to get ready! (birthday mang)
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/163/d/8/ooh__look_at_me_by_greensubmarine-d3iridm.png
self potrait
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/148/e/4/doodleldood_by_greensubmarine-d3hh5oc.png

KBYE

toast
07-27-2011, 02:47 AM
I would veeeery much appreciate some suggestions on the coloring of this:

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/205/1/d/you_basterd_by_greensubmarine-d41kc1g.png

I feel like I haven't been coloring to my fullest potential lately and it's sort of bumming me out. Alsooo advice on the line weight distribution throughout the pic and stuff.

also I'll link some other doodles I've done lately, but I don't really want critics on:

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/183/f/8/slip_out_by_greensubmarine-d3ks7be.png

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/199/5/1/dr_pepper_zombie_by_greensubmarine-d40o5bw.png

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/170/f/5/greatest_shade_by_greensubmarine-d3jcbei.png

erikamae
07-27-2011, 05:34 AM
I'm getting a psychedelic/angsty vibe from this :}
and I'm really diggin the eyelashes for some reason.
I can't really comment on your lines since the weight and jagged feel is stylistic,
It looks rad man, but I'm looking at the shorts and it's feeling
a bit 2-D, a little flat in comparison to the entire picture (I think it's the colours ;oo)
Also, I suggest getting my homey to dentist.
that is all. C: and wb <123