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ciber
07-29-2012, 10:20 AM
hi. this is my latest drawings .how is it?
http://data0.eklablog.com/mangas4fun/mod_article48171671_5013e78dc036f.jpg?721http://data0.eklablog.com/mangas4fun/mod_article48199225_501547b3e0245.jpg?2982http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2012/08/ciber-sakura-fan-art_500.jpg?t=501c07b43bea8

trilokcool3
07-29-2012, 11:24 AM
2nd is better .
Work more on your lines make it smooth.
About first
eyes placement are wrong.
I recomend you for practicing fanarts.

ciber
07-29-2012, 11:42 AM
ok thanx. I always had a problem with with placing eyes

JJJorgie
07-29-2012, 12:11 PM
These aren't too bad! :)

On the first: The eyes should have one eye length between them and shouldn't be slanted downward. The eyes should fall at the vertical center of the head. Raise the nose and mouth, too.

On the second: The right eye is smaller than the left.

Keep up the work work. I hope this helped.

Demonfyre
07-29-2012, 12:19 PM
1) The eye placement is wrong (JJ explains it well), and you have made the eyes slanted so try to straighten them out a bit, raise the right eyebrow a bit and make it flow almost parallel to the eye line (once you have removed the slant and straightened them out), Also I would have expected to see the right ear as the side burn isn't that big

2) Looks much better than the first :) I still think the eyes are slightly slanted but the placement is much better this time round, I think you have the same problem with the eyebrows again but that is up for debate :P

Hope this helps somewhat :) I look forward to seeing more :D

ciber
07-29-2012, 12:59 PM
ok thx guys (and the lady of course ^^) i'll do my best

ciber
08-03-2012, 01:19 PM
here it is. My first fan art. how is it?

JJJorgie
08-03-2012, 06:51 PM
I assume you're talking about the picture of Sakura. When's you put up new pictures, make a new post for it so that people see that it's new. :)

The eye's are slanted down. To help straighten your eyes, use two straight lines across the face as guidelines. Also, the hair seems pretty flat on the right side, compared to the left, so it seems off balance.

She's pretty cute. keep up the good work. :)

ciber
08-07-2012, 10:15 AM
ok thx. I'll remember that.

Demonfyre
08-07-2012, 11:31 AM
http://i1165.photobucket.com/albums/q599/Demonfyre1/5c45cfd9.jpg

Notes I made when looking at your digitally uploaded piece :) hopefully that should help your eye problems. Most of the points could be interpreted as stylistic but I've noted them because they are worth consideration. Also just a side note not in the image is I think when your drawing the lower eye lid make sure to curve it towards the iris, I've noticed that you curve it away which makes pulls the whole thing into a slant, also try using a ruler and drawing straight guidelines like I have, that will also help :)

Hope this helps, let me know if you can't read my hand writing or something and I'll make edit it

Edit - (2) is at a 3/4 view btw

Edit 2 - Obviously there hundreds of ways to draw eyes, an eye study may be helpful to you :)

ciber
08-07-2012, 02:54 PM
oik thx very much. I'll try it. so here is the new one. didn't completly finish it yet
http://data0.eklablog.com/mangas4fun/perso/drawing.jpg

Demonfyre
08-07-2012, 03:19 PM
Well done! You got the eyes straightened out and they look good :D here are some other things to consider to improve your drawing further;

As the face is turned away the right eye should be narrowed horizontally but should remain the same height as the left.
The same principle for the eyebrows, the way I do it is I make the eyebrows span the same horizontal distance as the eyes and make them mirror each other if the mirror line was running down the middle of the face.
Try looking at Manga/Abime heads and check out some tutorials because on the right side the skull just disappears when the hair strand goes over the side of the face, also draw out the skull first then place the hair on top :)

Hope this helps :D

ciber
08-08-2012, 09:57 AM
ok thx this helps a lot.

Cloudy
08-13-2012, 08:33 AM
Make sure to read the rules for each category, keep up the sketches :3

ciber
10-26-2012, 08:06 AM
well, hi again, guys, here one of my latest drawings, but i think there is a problem with the ears, what do u think?
http://data0.eklablog.com/mangas4fun/mod_article58276169_508a7c3cb39a5.jpg?4656

JJJorgie
10-26-2012, 04:25 PM
The problem with the ears is that they're too small and too low. Ears are always eye level.

The big issue here is that her face is lacking in symmetry: one eye's bigger than the other, the sides of the face are shaped a little differently, the mouth's a bit crooked. It's a big improvement from the last picture, though.

Try studying and practicing face structure and hair some more. Keep up the good work! :)