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Ryousukethehappy
06-16-2012, 05:28 AM
A manga I did before but never really got to put up I can put up other stuff

http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/274/c/1/times_of_love_and_romance_1_p1_by_ryousukethehappy-d4bili2.jpg

http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/274/0/3/times_of_love_and_romance_1_p2_by_ryousukethehappy-d4bilsq.jpg

http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/274/0/0/times_of_love_and_romance_1_p3_by_ryousukethehappy-d4bilyr.jpg

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/274/d/0/times_of_love_and_romance_1_p4_by_ryousukethehappy-d4bin38.jpg


other work:

http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/129/4/e/stuff_by_ryousukethehappy-d4z19z0.jpg

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/011/e/d/001_by_ryousukethehappy-d4m1xvn.jpg

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/128/d/b/armageddon_expo_stuff_by_ryousukethehappy-d4z0ydn.jpg

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/129/4/d/more_armageddon_stuff_by_ryousukethehappy-d4z16zy.jpg

ram
06-16-2012, 06:04 AM
I'd like critique mortal but really now you should post the exact image here..

if you don't know how to just right click and copy image location at the image you have then link

like so http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/274/c/1/times_of_love_and_romance_1_p1_by_ryousukethehappy-d4bili2.jpg
after you do it correctly then you will receive my heavenly guide.

Shadowsfade
06-16-2012, 10:11 AM
On the pic Ram linked, I really like the profile view in the second frame :)

for cnc, the bottom frame of the girl, her body seems to go in very small for her waist, needs to be widened out a little more IMO.

You're very good at getting the emotions portrayed though, good job!

ScarletHue
06-16-2012, 03:48 PM
Yes, on the linked image, her neck seems far too thin. Indeed you should try to direct link images :)

Ryousukethehappy
06-17-2012, 05:14 AM
had a few problems getting the links to show the pictures but I got it added a few extra stuff in there

Ryousukethehappy
06-17-2012, 05:30 AM
Yeah I agree I have always had problems with drawing girls hahaHA