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kaidahara
06-05-2012, 01:59 AM
Ok so first of all I'm Kaida (just another person who loves manga and art). Although I've only been drawing for a year I've felt I've been improving. My current Q for your A is a resent drawing I've down for a first offical scetch of my characters from a manga I want to work on.

http://s447.photobucket.com/albums/qq192/annturner11/?action=view&current=Snapshot_20120531_3.jpg

I'm mostly worryed about this drawing because I started with the eyes while I normaly start with a head shape. How do you feel it turned out and PLEASE give your personal opion on how to improve. I'm perfectly ok with hate. This is a both press or prasie thread post (my talk for you can say its good or not it won't hurt my feelings).

Also while your at it could you look at this drawing I've done of grell form black butler?

http://s447.photobucket.com/albums/qq192/annturner11/?action=view&current=Snapshot_20120531_3.jpg#!oZZ3QQcurrentZZht tp%3A%2F%2Fs447.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fqq192%2 Fannturner11%2F%3Faction%3Dview%26current%3Dgrell. jpg

Thanks so much for the help. I've tryed hard to find a place were artist (of manga) can get advise from other artists who enjoy manga and anime. So happy I came across this sight.

ClockHand
06-05-2012, 02:08 AM
Could you post the images as images and not links?

JJJorgie
06-05-2012, 02:10 AM
In the first picture, it looks pretty cute! One thing is that the boy's nose isn't centered and it kind of throws off the face.

The second picture's pretty good, too. you may want to tilt the eyes down on the left (does that make sense?) to go with the rest of the face.

Good job! Keep up the good work!

kaidahara
06-05-2012, 02:24 AM
I have tryed posting the pictures and it didn't work so the url's were the next best thing. Also I just want to point out that in the first drawing they are both girls. It's from my manga idea and they are the main characters. Yoko and Kume (left to right) and technicly are fiternal twins (no this is not at all yuri) and Kume is often mistaken for a guy in the story line. This is a more maskulen drawling but I've done a more fimanen one of her before to... anyways I just had to say that but thanks so much fo those who have answered so far.

ClockHand
06-05-2012, 02:31 AM
There is a button in the quick reply and advanced reply where you can see a framed tree, its between the button that look like a planet (for the direct link) and a film (for videos). The button between those 2 is to post images, which must be used with direct links of the picture.

Raikov
06-05-2012, 04:25 AM
1st pic: The necks are too thick for a Female, and the mouth is a bit too slanted on Kume, it's also too much to the right. Whole face is a tad bit too small. Overall looks good, though.

2nd pic: The first thing I thought of when I saw this was \. Everything is pretty much out of proportion. The way you drew his eyes is meant for the face to be straight, and not slanted, when your face slants to a side, so does your eyes. and same as the first picture, the mouth is too much to the >.

Good job on them c;

trilokcool3
06-05-2012, 06:20 AM
Ok you have these images in album too . So go there click on image , click on that image again until it shows in different panel . Then right click select 'copy image location'
then come here paste the link and edit begining and end of link as
link.jpg
or for spoiler edit as
link.jpg.
Write and at begining and end including IMG code.
I think it is easy .

Matt
06-05-2012, 06:58 AM
On Photobucket, go to the right of your screen. Then click the text to the right of "IMG code." Then after it says "copied," come here and paste the code. Like so:
http://i447.photobucket.com/albums/qq192/annturner11/Snapshot_20120531_3.jpg
http://i447.photobucket.com/albums/qq192/annturner11/grell.jpg

kaidahara
06-05-2012, 11:33 AM
I guess I learned more about posting then my pictures. Thanks I'm pretty new here and still learning

Demonfyre
06-06-2012, 05:33 PM
^ don't worry you will pick it up quickly ^_^ the second picture reminds me of Soul from Soul Eater :) and I don't see any faults in either picture, they are looking awesome so keep up the good work :D