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Raikov
06-04-2012, 04:38 AM
Hello \o/ Please critique my work?

http://s14.postimage.org/e7fus1vj1/dumpudumpu.jpg (http://postimage.org/image/e7fus1vj1/)

Some are quite old ;v;'' but this is all the art I can find sitting around in my computer. The one on the lower right is a collaboration with a friend of mine, I did the face.

EDIT: Some people might find it that I might me "showing off my work" But I want critiques on my artstyle and my art in GENERAL, and not just one piece of work, because My stuff are usually quite consistent, and I don't get to finish much.

Raikov
06-04-2012, 04:53 AM
Found another one o/

http://s18.postimage.org/q4i3dmt9j/bluhbluh.jpg

This is pretty old ;_;

Rubisko
06-04-2012, 05:34 AM
It looks really nice! I would like to see a full/finished piece if you've got any :)

Oh, and someone is going to say this, might as well be me: click on the edit-button on one of your posts if you want to add something, that way you don't have to make a double post

Raikov
06-14-2012, 06:29 AM
Thank you :D I'll have to search around my computer for anything else.

Sorry about the double-post. If I make any other post do I add it on or new post?

Edit: New picture o/

Somewhat nsfw(indecent clothing(?))
http://s11.postimage.org/er5hah729/sugoi.png

Shadowsfade
06-14-2012, 09:47 AM
I cant seem to see either of the pics in your spoilers :(

and whether you do a new post or edit it kinda depends on the length of time - if you're doing a new post like on the same day or a day later and no one has had a comment yet, edit, if its been like a week or a month or whatever, then just do a new one, doesnt matter if you have then double posted coz a long time passed so :D

from the first pic though, i really like how you draw hair, nice and flowy

ram
06-14-2012, 10:08 AM
Thank you :D I'll have to search around my computer for anything else.

Sorry about the double-post. If I make any other post do I add it on or new post?

Edit: New picture o/

Somewhat nsfw(indecent clothing(?))
http://s11.postimage.org/3rk9yvgn5/sugoi.png

nicely done lines, but I think the legs are too thin, and also too short.

Raikov
06-14-2012, 10:12 AM
I cant seem to see either of the pics in your spoilers

and whether you do a new post or edit it kinda depends on the length of time - if you're doing a new post like on the same day or a day later and no one has had a comment yet, edit, if its been like a week or a month or whatever, then just do a new one, doesnt matter if you have then double posted coz a long time passed so

from the first pic though, i really like how you draw hair, nice and flowy
Ah, here's the direct link to the newest one link (http://s11.postimage.org/er5hah729/sugoi.png), and thank you very much!~


nicely done lines, but I think the legs are too thin, and also too short.
Thank you o/ I'll try to work more on the legs on my next picture.

nisaren
06-14-2012, 10:16 AM
Very nice stuff. Your style reminds me of Ippus (http://ippus.deviantart.com/) on deviantart. Not much else to add for now, but it would be helpful if you could post the pictures so they show up here rather than just links. :X Keep up the good work. :D

Gaff
06-14-2012, 11:57 AM
Your detailing on faces is very good, but I can't help feeling you're placing the mouth too low in relation to the nose. If you're doing work which is very stylised (like the girl in the top left of the first picture), it's not such an issue, but as most of your faces are realistic, it's making the jaw look stunted.

It's not a big deal, but I'd recommend either leaving a little less space between the bottom of the nose and the upper lip or (in the case of your most recent picture, for example) even just making the mouth a bit narrower.

Demonfyre
06-14-2012, 12:49 PM
I don't have anything to say in the way of critiques, but that is one brilliant drawing :D I love the way you drew the horns and the hair :)

Raikov
06-15-2012, 02:19 AM
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Ah, thank you ovo. For the first picture I didn't do so cause it's too big uvu'' and I don't want to flood so I put them in spoilers but i use the IMG code for it. Does it not show?


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So it was the mouth after all uvu'' I keep feeling something's wrong with the faces I draw all the time. I'll try fixing that part and I'll see how it goes on the next picture, thank you!


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Thank you very much c;

WhenRabbitsAttack
06-15-2012, 05:10 AM
did you draw your avatar, raikov? you're a very good artist by the way 80
i can't see anything structurally wrong apart from what ram said.

Raikov
06-15-2012, 11:12 AM
did you draw your avatar, raikov? you're a very good artist by the way 80
i can't see anything structurally wrong apart from what ram said.
My avatar is drawn by chisuukei (chisuukei.deviantart.com), and thank you very much v;

Shadowsfade
06-15-2012, 12:46 PM
I really like the character design of that pic you linked me :D the only things I can see are what's already been said, about the mouth too low, and the lower leg being a bit thin. I also think that maybe on the arm on (our) right, the line at the elbow showing the bend of the arm is maybe too long, for the position of the hand - when I put my arm in that position, the line didn't seem to go quite so far across.

Gedeon
06-19-2012, 04:28 PM
I cannot see your drawings OAO