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Hamachi
04-16-2012, 03:03 PM
Hey guys I wanted to share some of my art with you

Here's an anatomy study I did earlier on
http://i.imgur.com/FD3Ar.png

You may have noticed that my anatomy style is kinda unique. That's because he's a unique character. He's your basic ninja steampunk wizard hero from the Rutabaga empire, a country I had this great idea for. So he's also a Rutabugian.

Some more pose practices
http://i.imgur.com/VJTVk.png

I think his nose is a bit off in that one. Also his ears might be a bit long. Anyways tell me what you think.


http://i.imgur.com/uCtiq.png

Tried to introduce some dynamic action into this pose

Hell_Baron
04-16-2012, 03:13 PM
holy shit that's fucking incredible.

Hayashida
04-16-2012, 03:36 PM
if its okay I'd like to post some of my paintings here for critique
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o219/Dokken_2112/Minsk.jpg

I call this one Minsk, it's supposed to represent suffering or some shit like that

GunZet
04-16-2012, 04:07 PM
This is classic.

Hamachi
04-16-2012, 04:42 PM
Hey Hayashida your art is really good but I think her hand on the right is higher than the one on the left. Also she looks like she has a triceratops sitting on her head. To solve this, I advise that you begin eating birdseed after your meals and doing the chicken dance before going to bed.

Psy
04-16-2012, 05:04 PM
I missed something again didn't I?

Delphinus
04-16-2012, 05:07 PM
if its okay I'd like to post some of my paintings here for critique
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o219/Dokken_2112/Minsk.jpg

The grey skin of the character, juxtaposed with her tears and obvious sad pose, make her appear to be weeping for her own mortality. Her skin is grey because she's both a corpse and a living being, reminiscent of the epiphany of L'estranger, in which the protagonist realises it doesn't matter whether he's alive or dead, and allows himself to be trialled and executed. The red background represents blood, further reinforcing this theme of mortality, and the white rectangles resemble a measuring instrument. The character is sad not only because of her mortality, but because of the way others seem to quantify her, thus reducing her to a static object. The eyes symbolise the others who perceive and label her. This is a work of existential significance; the quantification of the self through the views of others is a central theme of existentialist philosophy, and the source of Sartre's phrase 'hell is other people' from No Exit. The patterning of the character's dress makes her appear indistinct; she feels a non-entity under the gaze of the other. This reinforces the theme of existential angst.

In conclusion, Minsk is a simplistic work, but one that may hold significance for the precedents it sets. It interweaves violence and existential angst in a way surely symbolic of the modern condition and all that entails.

Hell_Baron
04-16-2012, 05:18 PM
The grey skin of the character, juxtaposed with her tears and obvious sad pose, make her appear to be weeping for her own mortality. Her skin is grey because she's both a corpse and a living being, reminiscent of the epiphany of L'estranger, in which the protagonist realises it doesn't matter whether he's alive or dead, and allows himself to be trialled and executed. The red background represents blood, further reinforcing this theme of mortality, and the white rectangles resemble a measuring instrument. The character is sad not only because of her mortality, but because of the way others seem to quantify her, thus reducing her to a static object. The eyes symbolise the others who perceive and label her. This is a work of existential significance; the quantification of the self through the views of others is a central theme of existentialist philosophy, and the source of Sartre's phrase 'hell is other people' from No Exit. The patterning of the character's dress makes her appear indistinct; she feels a non-entity under the gaze of the other. This reinforces the theme of existential angst.

In conclusion, Minsk is a simplistic work, but one that may hold significance for the precedents it sets. It interweaves violence and existential angst in a way surely symbolic of the modern condition and all that entails.

there is no way in hell you just made that up...

Outcast
04-16-2012, 06:01 PM
It's del.

Hayashida
04-16-2012, 06:32 PM
finally someone who understands my work

Joosh
04-16-2012, 07:38 PM
I dislike those drawings

Matt
04-16-2012, 07:50 PM
I'm too good for studies; I use subtle symbolism. If your IQ isn't at least 143, you'll never figure out this masterpiece's deep meanings.
I call this one "Shades of Evil." I'm selling it for $900,000, discounted from its original price of $1,000,000.
http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/1259/pretension.png (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/856/pretension.png/)

Joosh
04-16-2012, 07:54 PM
I think that one guy on the right farted really loudly and all the others shut him out and are groping for fresh air

Sylux
04-16-2012, 08:45 PM
I'm too good for studies; I use subtle symbolism. If your IQ isn't at least 143, you'll never figure out this masterpiece's deep meanings.
I call this one "Shades of Evil." I'm selling it for $900,000, discounted from its original price of $1,000,000.
http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/1259/pretension.png (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/856/pretension.png/)

Well this piece is obviously a work symbolic of turmoil in an allegory to social behaviors. The man is grey, which again represents the piece's intense feelings of despair, in addition to his dismal background of a similar colour. His shadow is cast over an extensive barrier between himself and that which he participates in: He is marking out others' shortcomings to hide his own, much as a bully might. It is surely a piece to depict the angst of oneself who has no regard for himself, his own, and thus less even for others.

Surely you all have realized this.

AlmanacnamedTime
04-16-2012, 08:47 PM
@Matt could you pay in installments?

Matt
04-17-2012, 10:20 AM
I'd have to think about it. I mean, it's obviously worth quite a chunk.

GunZet
04-17-2012, 01:30 PM
I'm too good for studies; I use subtle symbolism. If your IQ isn't at least 143, you'll never figure out this masterpiece's deep meanings.
I call this one "Shades of Evil." I'm selling it for $900,000, discounted from its original price of $1,000,000.
http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/1259/pretension.png (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/856/pretension.png/)

The meaning of life, there is no other word for it.