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OneShot
02-25-2012, 03:52 PM
Hi everyone, here is my comic One Shot. It updates every Saturday. I want everyones opions on it and what I could do better.

http://one-shot-the-comic.smackjeeves.com/

AlmanacnamedTime
02-25-2012, 05:33 PM
Good, though hard to read. Use some computer thing to letter. Try to draw better. no idea really