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Onion-chan
02-06-2012, 08:53 AM
So this is my first ever drawing of a Lady knight so tell me your thoughts on it :D

http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2012/02/Onion-lady-knight_500.jpg

Portogas
02-06-2012, 11:42 AM
uhm we can't see the drawing? :P

Psy
02-06-2012, 12:17 PM
So this is my first ever drawing of a Lady knight so tell me your thoughts on it :D

http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2012/02/Onion-lady-knight.jpg

This should help

Mr_Liebe
02-06-2012, 06:26 PM
You did a nice job on the hair, it has a nice style. The face was well done, the eyes could use a bit more work. The armor is great, the gauntlets, the chest plate greaves and the like. However, I think she looks a bit too thin, other than that, it's a nice piece.

Onion-chan
02-07-2012, 07:18 AM
teehee sankyou :D

Gedeon
02-07-2012, 09:44 AM
Agreed with Liebe that she is somewhat thin in body compared to her head. Everything else is good. The sword could use a bit more detailing.

Onion-chan
02-08-2012, 03:22 AM
Thanks for your thought on the drawing :D and yes I also noticed that she is weirdly thin =w= what... and lol I forgot the details on the sword OTL

Inksprout
02-08-2012, 04:14 AM
Seeing as your armour is quiet realistic rather than 'sexy' I think it should be a bit chunkier looking. The smoothness of it combined with her thiness make it look kind of flimsy. Other than that I like it :3

Onion-chan
02-09-2012, 08:52 AM
Ahhh, okie :D Thank you for your opinion :D