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Evil_Cake
01-17-2012, 01:32 PM
Here is a new comic I have been working on since the start of January..

IDK if it is any good, so let me know what you think.

http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/1/1a/


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Chapter 2 of Bad Suzy is done.. It is the same length as the first issue.



Please let me know what you think about it... :cat_huh:

http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/2/


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Bad Suzy Chapter 3 is here -> http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/3

Plz read and tell me what you think. Especially interested in people's opinions of the new characters that show up.





here is another chapter o_O I used a blue pencil at one point and thats why there is blue in some pages -_-

http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/4/2/

plz let me know what you think

Bacon_Barbarian
01-17-2012, 04:44 PM
It's an interesting idea, that's for sure. It is by no means cliche, but it's an old theme. On that note, I like where you're going with it.

Cloudy
01-17-2012, 08:51 PM
ooh cool idea, I wanna see more pages :)

jaidurn
01-17-2012, 10:37 PM
Evil Cake, you are great. I love your comics.

Sylux
01-17-2012, 10:39 PM
GET TO WORK GODDAMMIT I WANT SOME MORE RIGHT NOW!!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD--!!!

Evil_Cake
01-19-2012, 04:10 PM
thx for reading and comments :cat_bye:

Regantor
01-20-2012, 10:13 PM
Reminds me of GITS, except it's got comedy features. Mind = blown.

Definately keeping my eye on this, Cakerton. *_*

Evil_Cake
01-24-2012, 09:22 PM
thx gegantor

Evil_Cake
01-30-2012, 07:56 PM
Chapter 2 of Bad Suzy is done.. It is the same length as the first issue. But before you read it, here is a quote.


Jubeh says:
Cake
Evil Cake says:
wat
Jubeh says:
This is super fucking weird
Evil Cake says:
ya i know
Jubeh says:
I thought I was fucked up
Jubeh says:
Here you go
Jubeh says:
*gives The Cake*
Evil Cake says:
o_O
Evil Cake says:
wat is this
Jubeh says:
You took the cake from me its yours
Jubeh says:
The fucked up shit cake


Please let me know what you think about the comic... :cat_huh:

http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/2/

Regantor
01-30-2012, 11:07 PM
Hum... Girls having their heads/brains pulled off and attached to robots ain't exactly a rarity in manga... But I can't exactly think of any example that was a comedy, either. The banter with the nurse was pretty good, but overall... Eh, I'm not sure. The most of it is barely a standard cake fare at all. A bit too serious-faced, even. Maybe you're pulling punches because of the grizzly subject matter?...

I'll still be keeping an eye on this, but being entirely honest, I can't really see it being a favorate without a sudden explosion of weirdness and hypergore to make up for this 'timid' start. Taking this kinda plot seriously just leads down weird alleys. >_>

Evil_Cake
01-30-2012, 11:49 PM
hm if reg does not improve, might have 2 try different comic

jubeh
01-31-2012, 05:49 AM
Yeah I feel the opposite. Much like jojo's bizarre adventure, the way the story is told takes something incredibly weird and perverted but attempts to make it seem normal within the context of the universe and fails. But it's a good kind of failure.

butternut
01-31-2012, 10:39 AM
a little nitpicking: pg12, last panel - spelling of 'weirded'

the comic - i agree with reg. the comedy is kinda bizarre (could be just me), and i laugh at even poorest of jokes. but i'm gonna keep reading (i'm curious what happens later).

Evil_Cake
01-31-2012, 04:34 PM
thx I fixed the spelling error.

Also hm O_o I will try one more chapter maybe to see what people think

Hayashida
01-31-2012, 05:34 PM
this is weird but funny too

Regantor
01-31-2012, 05:35 PM
Probally a good idea, man.

I mean, sorry if it came across like I was saying it was terrible or something, far from it. It just feels like it's missing that little extra something IMO, as things are. Reg will keeping gandering at any rate. >_>

Hell_Baron
02-04-2012, 06:08 AM
Damn, Cake!
This is some good shit!

SuperKasey
02-04-2012, 01:48 PM
Dude, don't stop writing this. PLEASE. Reading this is extremely entertaining and inspires me to keep working on my own stuff. I love the story and I'm attached to Suzy already :c DON'T TAKE HER AWAY FROM ME.

jaidurn
02-04-2012, 02:03 PM
You know, the guy Suzy is in love with reminds me of Leeron.

Jpg
02-07-2012, 12:29 AM
I'm liking the new comic, I can't wait until Suzy goes "bad" and the action begins. That's gonna happen right?

Cloudy
02-07-2012, 10:30 AM
I really like it cake and I look forward to more pages as always :)

Evil_Cake
02-07-2012, 08:50 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, it inspires me to make more


this is weird but funny too

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4417/bestsmiley.jpg thanks for reading
Probally a good idea, man.

I mean, sorry if it came across like I was saying it was terrible or something, far from it. It just feels like it's missing that little extra something IMO, as things are. Reg will keeping gandering at any rate. >_>

cool. maybe it will grow on you. in a good, benign way

Damn, Cake!
This is some good shit!ty



Dude, don't stop writing this. PLEASE. Reading this is extremely entertaining and inspires me to keep working on my own stuff. I love the story and I'm attached to Suzy already :c DON'T TAKE HER AWAY FROM ME.
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4417/bestsmiley.jpg Thanks o_o I am a little over halfway done with the 3rd chapter at the moment, so it should be up in a week or less.


You know, the guy Suzy is in love with reminds me of Leeron.I dunno who that is ._. except hes from TTGL thanks to google



I'm liking the new comic, I can't wait until Suzy goes "bad" and the action begins. That's gonna happen right?
maybe... probably... yes


I really like it cake and I look forward to more pages as always :)
thx

GunZet
02-09-2012, 03:18 AM
I just started it, and damn the first few pages are a helluva hook. Keep. This. Up. Or so help me jeebus, shit will burn.

No really, this was pretty entertaining, even if it does dabble in a bit of seriousness here and there, I think it all works with the way you do things in your comics pretty flawlessly. So yea, more please. I got my eye on you.

Sutari
02-11-2012, 10:38 AM
I swear to god, cake... if i wasn't so busy, i would make a one-shot H adaptation of this... >_> with your permission of course. This is gold.

Evil_Cake
02-11-2012, 01:36 PM
No really, this was pretty entertaining, even if it does dabble in a bit of seriousness here and there, I think it all works with the way you do things in your comics pretty flawlessly. So yea, more please. I got my eye on you.thx for reading and comment señor


I swear to god, cake... if i wasn't so busy, i would make a one-shot H adaptation of this... >_> with your permission of course. This is gold.
o_o I would probably be fine with that XD thx for reading

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Also the new chapter is done o_O Plz read and tell me what you think. http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/3 Especially interested in people's opinions of the new characters that show up.

Bacon_Barbarian
02-11-2012, 01:57 PM
Huh. You certainly have an interesting group dynamic going on. I'll be eagerly awaiting Chapter 4.

Evil_Cake
02-12-2012, 11:03 PM
hm thx I am not sure when chapter 4 will be done tho

butternut
02-12-2012, 11:11 PM
The bots reminded me of stereotypical high school ....stereotypes.

I'm kinda warming up to Suzy now. and I want that guy to be beat up. somehow. anyway you can incorporate that? pweeese??

Regantor
02-12-2012, 11:41 PM
Definately liking this now. The mechanic with the robots definately makes this weird enough to be funny/cool/offbeat instead of just disturbing, like it sorta was. Also, wasn't really sure before, but I guess this chapter concretes that bad suzy is gonna be a revenge story type thing, too? Saphira may have already got that request in advance. :p

Either way, good stuff, Cake bloke dude person...

Evil_Cake
02-15-2012, 01:45 AM
The bots reminded me of stereotypical high school ....stereotypes.

I'm kinda warming up to Suzy now. and I want that guy to be beat up. somehow. anyway you can incorporate that? pweeese??beat up...? idk if thats how i'd describe it



Definately liking this now. The mechanic with the robots definately makes this weird enough to be funny/cool/offbeat instead of just disturbing, like it sorta was. Also, wasn't really sure before, but I guess this chapter concretes that bad suzy is gonna be a revenge story type thing, too? Saphira may have already got that request in advance. :p

Either way, good stuff, Cake bloke dude person...ya the second chapter was a little too weird. When I was planning this all these chapters were going to be in one, but I realized that it would be stupid long...

also I guess it is kinda a revenge thingy at least at the start

Evil_Cake
03-02-2012, 05:31 PM
here is another chapter o_O I used a blue pencil at one point and thats why there is blue in some pages -_-

http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/bads/4/2/

plz let me know what you think

Regantor
03-02-2012, 09:14 PM
Man, you really left us with alot of unanswered questions and hangy plot bits with this one...

Was still pretty good, mind. Suspense and such. Expressions and actiony stuff was pretty rad, too. Definately liking Mandy the best. Robitch is tsundere. *u*

Hanging on for the next one to see where this is all going, Cakertons, fo'sure.

Bacon_Barbarian
03-04-2012, 08:06 PM
I think the questions the chapter raises are engaging. Definitely leaves me looking forward to the next chapter.

Evil_Cake
03-04-2012, 08:35 PM
What questions specifically? if u guys dont mind explaining

thx for comments.

Bacon_Barbarian
03-04-2012, 08:39 PM
What's she gonna do now? Is he really dead? Why did the other robot decide to help Suzy out?

Evil_Cake
04-11-2012, 07:08 PM
Kinda took a break on this during march >_>

Im not sure why, but I feel like uploading this chapter's pages as they are made/scanned, instead of all together at once

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/page1-2.jpg


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/page2-2.jpg


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/page3-2.jpg


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/page4-2.jpg

Sutari
04-11-2012, 10:22 PM
I really want to fan-art Mandy... shes my favorite character so far, but I don't think I could capture her expression like you can o_o

Evil_Cake
04-12-2012, 02:40 AM
ya her face is kinda weird >_> it would be cool to see what u do though

Chuchu
04-12-2012, 11:10 AM
I don't think I've read all of Bad Suzy yet, but I must say: that face is priceless! XD

Kodos
04-12-2012, 12:41 PM
Malignant Susan is the best comic.

Hayashida
04-12-2012, 03:35 PM
dude deserved to be punched in the face he's a weirdo suzy's got no reason to feel bad

Evil_Cake
04-13-2012, 07:03 PM
Thx for comments


I don't think I've read all of Bad Suzy yet, but I must say: that face is priceless! XD

which 1?

Malignant Susan is the best comic.
huehue

dude deserved to be punched in the face he's a weirdo suzy's got no reason to feel bad
tru dat

Regantor
04-13-2012, 08:17 PM
Yeah, still liking Mandy, like Sutari said.

These pages are pretty good anyhow, alrough it does raise the question of exactly why she'd lie...

Keep it up, Cakeotron.

Evil_Cake
04-14-2012, 08:37 PM
Yeah, still liking Mandy, like Sutari said.

These pages are pretty good anyhow, alrough it does raise the question of exactly why she'd lie...

Keep it up, Cakeotron.stay tuned to find out! >_>' and thx

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/Page5-1.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/Page6-1.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/Page7.jpg

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i206/Evil_Cake/Page8-1.jpg

Evil_Cake
05-10-2012, 04:01 AM
puttin this comic on hold >_> might use the characters in something else or something because I didnt like the tone of the story that I had planned. Didnt like the tone of the whole comic really

but going to post something else tomorrow :monkey_umwell:

Kodos
05-10-2012, 02:17 PM
WAT
U cant cancel Malignant Susan!

WhenRabbitsAttack
05-13-2012, 04:57 AM
that was really riveting. nice work on keeping ur readers engaged, cake :3. however the whole story just felt a bit...... wrong. more wrong than it should of, even though it already has a very original story line.