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SuperKasey
12-31-2011, 01:31 PM
Welcome! I encourage you to read the garbage my brain likes to spew!

Page 1
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9544/20867107.jpg

Page 2
http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6928/41406060.jpg

ClockHand
12-31-2011, 01:43 PM
It seems robust and elegant.

SuperKasey
12-31-2011, 02:33 PM
Indeed :{|

ClockHand
12-31-2011, 02:45 PM
Are you going to psot it for febreauryryryr?

SuperKasey
12-31-2011, 03:06 PM
I hope to have some of it up before then :O Why? Does something happen in February?

ClockHand
12-31-2011, 03:20 PM
http://www.mangatutorials.com/forum/showthread.php?1786-Manga-Making-Month-(MaMo)-2012!&p=64057#post64057

SuperKasey
12-31-2011, 04:39 PM
All signed up. My timing = win.

jaidurn
12-31-2011, 04:52 PM
This will be great. I'm not saying it's aliens, though.

SuperKasey
01-26-2012, 04:06 PM
Page 1 and 2 are up!

. . .

The art is going to get better I swear to god OTL *sobs*

ClockHand
01-26-2012, 09:46 PM
weren't you crying because the colors weren't right?

You don't need to make the art better, just finish the comic. Put goals and achieve them.

jaidurn
01-26-2012, 09:50 PM
Kasey. This is already really good. You've managed to create a hook within the first two pages. I can't wait for more.

Regantor
01-26-2012, 09:55 PM
Agreed. It's a damn nice start-up, better than 99% of the work we get through these parts... and kinda intimidating to even try and give you any helpful advice within that. All I can say is that it's looking brilliant, lass. Hope you stick at it. >_>

SuperKasey
01-27-2012, 12:15 PM
@Clock: You are absolutely right. Some aspects of the art bug me a little but I'm doing my best to keep in mind that the more pages I churn out the better my skills will become. Right now I just have to keep on going.

@Jai/Reg:Thanks for the support you guys :'3 You have no idea how much it means to me. It really gives me that spark of energy that keeps my motivation alive. <3

Currently working on the chapter one cover, it's kind of an awkward angle and pose so the sketches will probably end up in my CC thread for advice first if I feel I can't get it right on my own.

Cloudy
01-27-2012, 08:33 PM
looks so nice and pro <3

Evil_Cake
01-28-2012, 12:04 AM
o jeez when I saw "western" I thought cowboys and stuff >_>

lookin forward 2 more

SuperKasey
01-28-2012, 02:45 AM
@Cloudy: Fank joo x3
@Cake: I know that's what I keep thinking too Dx I dunno what else to call the style though.

Just finished the cover for issue one. It's a little weird but all the covers and most of the story will be too. There are (hardly) reasons behind my psychosis.

Hayashida
01-28-2012, 03:20 AM
o jeez when I saw "western" I thought cowboys and stuff >_>

heh I was thinkin the same thing

Evil_Cake
01-28-2012, 03:31 AM
my brain must have skipped over "style" tho or else wouldnt have thought that as much

Hayashida
01-29-2012, 12:41 AM
I thought he meant western style as in those post apocalyptic western things like Trigun or desert punk

ClockHand
01-29-2012, 01:04 AM
I would have preferred to look the cover at the end.

Principally because it might not make sense for us at the beginning, and secondly because it would be easier to critique it.

PD: So yeah, always do the cover at the end.

SuperKasey
02-03-2012, 11:30 AM
I would have preferred to look the cover at the end.

Principally because it might not make sense for us at the beginning, and secondly because it would be easier to critique it.

PD: So yeah, always do the cover at the end.

I agree. Mostly because I decided I really fucking hate this cover. From now on I'll draw them at the end of the chapter.

Psy
02-03-2012, 03:23 PM
I like. I allso fully support blaming cats for the bad things in life.

Celestial-Fox
02-04-2012, 08:12 PM
Hey, looking good, Kasey! Other than the critiques other people have given, I also have something to add. The dumpster on page two has a gradient into a texture. It's visually jarring to me, and I think if you left it black instead of fading to that earth tone, it would have given a better mood to the top two panels on the page by giving it a feeling of darkness.

I like the colors and style of the comic so far, though, and the background work is great.

Sutari
02-11-2012, 10:42 AM
I have one thing to say... *ahem*

*inhaaaaaalllllllleeeeee*

ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY ENVY JEALOUS JEALOUS JEALLLLOUSSSS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaa*coughcough* *gack*

-that feeling when your rival mangaka is 9001x better than you-

SuperKasey
02-12-2012, 01:18 PM
@Psy: Thanks xD
@Seef: Ah, thanks for pointing that out! I'm still feeling a little bit awkward with coloring pages. In fact a little bit awkward with everything that goes into comic making, so I'm glad to have the crit :3 I'll keep that in mind and try it out on the page.
@Rei: Are we about to have another "my dick is smaller than yours" argument? :b

Sorry, guys been a little distracted lately. Page three is being colored, page four is inked, pages five and six are sketched. I plan to upload all of them at the same time later this week if I survive this week. I've been scheduled at work eight days in a row (6-8 hour shifts) so I don't have a lot of time on my hands OTL