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Bacon_Barbarian
12-27-2011, 08:24 PM
Welcome one and all to my One Shot. I made the rough draft over the summer while on vacation. Sadly my Tablet died while on vacation, so it's sat until now. But now I have a new Tablet, and my passion has been re-invigorated. Anyway, the One Shot follows the original plot of the manga I first thought up in 8th Grade. After I've finished the One Shot, I hope to move onto the current plot of the manga, which features some of the same characters, but is drastically different.

One Shot Synopsis:
A boy named Ben is finishing up his Halloween escapades when he meets up with his friend Marcus. After some conversing and name calling, Ben wanders into the woods where the truly unexpected happens. Will he make it out alive?

Title Page
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Page 1
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Page 2
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Page 3
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Page 4
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Page 5
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Page 6
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Page 7
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Page 8
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Bacon_Barbarian
12-28-2011, 08:08 PM
Character Profiles go here:

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Ben is just another nerd who finds himself entrapped in the cruel part of life we call High School. Bullied from a young age, he finds himself alone most of the time, but that doesn't stop him fro dreaming about something ... More.

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/042/a/4/marcus___profile_by_purplefresca-d4pdkik.png
Marcus has been Ben's friend since Middle School. Back then the two were inseparable, but ever since the begging of High School they'd been drifting apart. Marcus joined marching band and the football team becoming wildly popular halfway through Sophomore year, while Ben just sort of became more and more secluded. They still hang out at times and Marcus, like any good friend, always has an on him.

snowb400
12-29-2011, 11:11 AM
What software did you use to draw this?

Bacon_Barbarian
12-29-2011, 11:22 AM
Manga Studio Debut 4. On to page 2!

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Bacon_Barbarian
01-04-2012, 02:56 PM
So, 1 of 4 Character Profiles done. I also updated the OP with a very vague synopsis.

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/385077_2297303761570_1518408529_31657754_203851966 3_n.jpg
Ben is just another nerd who finds himself entrapped in the cruel part of life we call High School. Bullied from a young age, he finds himself alone most of the time, but that doesn't stop him fro dreaming about something ... More.

Celestial-Fox
01-05-2012, 09:32 PM
Hey, I didn't know you were doing a one-shot. Cool, dude. It seems pretty interesting so far. How many pages are you thinking it'll be?

Cloudy
01-05-2012, 11:05 PM
I like it so far you should do more :)

Bacon_Barbarian
01-06-2012, 12:55 AM
@Seefy: Over 25 at this point... I hope to have 3 and 4 done this weekend. xD
@Cloudy: Yay! I have a fan. Or something. :3

Slurpee
01-06-2012, 08:06 PM
The pages wont load

Bacon_Barbarian
01-07-2012, 01:50 AM
Yeah, I've been messing around with them, and I apologize for that. Everything should be working again soon. :)

shadow_falling
01-08-2012, 03:15 AM
Man, Bacon, I was on this forum when you had just started here, and wow... Already onto making comics and what not. I'm liking what you've got so far, so keep it up.

Cloudy
01-08-2012, 06:00 PM
More please ;3

Bacon_Barbarian
01-09-2012, 09:55 PM
@Shadow: Yay! I'm glad you like it. :)
@Cloudy: Ask and ye shall receive!

This actually took me way longer then it should've. This weekend had 2% productivity. So yeah, Page 3.

http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/e/1/e1b7296812qyN.png

Also, the One Shot version of this fails the Bechdel Test completely, as their isn't a single women in this. Uhmmm... Yeah.

Bacon_Barbarian
01-14-2012, 11:41 PM
Page 4! Maybe since this is a long weekend, I'll finish 5 as well! o.O

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Sylux
01-14-2012, 11:43 PM
Page 3 won't show for me anymore. Any idea what's the cause?

Bacon_Barbarian
01-14-2012, 11:47 PM
No ... I just edited the OP to put in Page 4 though, maybe I messed up the code for Page 3. I typed it back up again. Is it fixed?

Sylux
01-15-2012, 10:23 AM
Yeah

Bacon_Barbarian
01-15-2012, 04:35 PM
Cool. Anyway, somehow I managed to finish Page 5 this weekend as well! Can I do 6? o.O

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Bacon_Barbarian
01-16-2012, 09:12 AM
Due to the fact that this is a 3 Day Weekend and I haven't touched my HW once, much less flat out left my desk, I managed to finish Page 6 this weekend as well. I'm sort of tempted to start work on 7, but I really do need to get started on Moby Dick.

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butternut
01-16-2012, 09:35 AM
you on a roll huh!
you forgot to edit that white outline around ben in the 3rd panel of page 6..

Bacon_Barbarian
01-16-2012, 09:42 AM
Haha, thanks... But no, I did that on purpose. :)

butternut
01-16-2012, 10:31 AM
On purpose? hmm

Evil_Cake
01-27-2012, 07:36 PM
are u still workin on this?

Bacon_Barbarian
01-27-2012, 08:19 PM
I am I've just been incredibly busy. O-O

Sorry.

Bacon_Barbarian
02-09-2012, 10:34 PM
Sorry about this taking forever. I don't even have a good excuse - What I was doing wasn't even hard compared to other pages I've done. I guess my life's been hectic, but w/e, here it.

http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/9/3/93d2b1dab5veg.png

Here's hoping I get back to a more well paced ... well, pace.

Sutari
02-11-2012, 10:32 AM
Woah, i leave manga works for a while and theres new mangas everywhere!

I like the interaction between those two, it seems just like the way friends from school would act. Its something i need to work on.
I hope you keep going with this.

Bacon_Barbarian
02-11-2012, 02:45 PM
Hmmh! :) I'd be lying if I didn't loosely base interactions between characters between those I have with others. Key word there being loosely...

Did the profile page for Marcus. Page 8 Should be coming soon!

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/042/a/4/marcus___profile_by_purplefresca-d4pdkik.png
Marcus has been Ben's friend since Middle School. Back then the two were inseparable, but ever since the begging of High School they'd been drifting apart. Marcus joined marching band and the football team becoming wildly popular halfway through Sophomore year, while Ben just sort of became more and more secluded. They still hang out at times and Marcus, like any good friend, always has an eye on him.

Bacon_Barbarian
04-05-2012, 11:35 PM
This. Took. Way. Too. Fucking. Long. Damn life keeping me busy.

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AlmanacnamedTime
04-06-2012, 12:01 AM
looks good.

Bacon_Barbarian
04-06-2012, 01:09 AM
Oh durn. I just noticed a small mistake. I'll get that in the morning. But thanks. :)

Bacon_Barbarian
04-06-2012, 09:09 PM
Issue fixed.