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toast
12-03-2011, 07:58 PM
Whats goin on guys, I decided to make a new art thread since I don't like necroposting, even though its my own thread
D:

but yeah, ill just post a few things I've done lately. k
deviantart: http://greensubmarine.deviantart.com/

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/337/d/7/white_noise_by_greensubmarine-d4i2qi8.png
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/304/6/4/derp_by_greensubmarine-d4em8wi.png
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/304/7/4/trouble_trouble_trouble_by_greensubmarine-d4em9n2.png
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/304/0/6/halloweener_by_greensubmarine-d4em8ka.png
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/217/d/8/dead_by_greensubmarine-d45lsc0.png

mostly sketchy stuff, but alas, I have school and lazyness ):

ClockHand
12-03-2011, 08:00 PM
go to msn

toast
12-03-2011, 08:01 PM
man i was about to get on, dont rush me D:

Gedeon
12-03-2011, 08:21 PM
ITS ALIVE!!!!!!
really like them faces....also last and second to last pic............(psychedelically) EPIIIC!

Cloudy
12-03-2011, 10:56 PM
Toassst! <33 love ur art man

Sylux
12-03-2011, 11:12 PM
I like the tessellation on your dA

darkmousysminion
12-04-2011, 01:08 AM
Hey Toast. Art's lookin good, I especially like the last pic. There seems to be a bit of an angry vibe though...ghost bear says "I hate you" ?

Your strong points in the pics you posted are an intriguing use of color (particularly in the last one) and some great experimental perspective. The linework looks like it might be intentionally messy but unfortunately it hasn't quite reached the point of "masterfully sketchy." Rather, it seems rushed or ambiguous, like you might not have been sure where or how to draw a line. The best example of this is the girl's sweater in the 4th pic. I would practice drawing clean, exact lines for maybe some human figures and clothing and then let them flow into a freer, sketchier style. If you can draw it clean first, you can make it as messy or neat as you like while still retaining the general image of whatever you're drawing.

Hope that all makes sense...

toast
12-10-2011, 03:10 PM
No art, but I want to reply to you guys (:
Thankyou you guys!!!! I haven't been able to be really active, since I'm trying to focus more on school and stuff


Hey Toast. Art's lookin good, I especially like the last pic. There seems to be a bit of an angry vibe though...ghost bear says "I hate you" ? Your strong points in the pics you posted are an intriguing use of color (particularly in the last one) and some great experimental perspective.

Hey mousy! long time no see! :D Just wanna say in advanced, thankyou so much for the criticism, I don't really get enough criticism around here xD
The I hate you part in the picture did have a bit of teenage angst, but alas, not too special :P
I'm quite glad my practice with perspective is showing! Thanks!


The linework looks like it might be intentionally messy but unfortunately it hasn't quite reached the point of "masterfully sketchy." Rather, it seems rushed or ambiguous, like you might not have been sure where or how to draw a line. The best example of this is the girl's sweater in the 4th pic. I would practice drawing clean, exact lines for maybe some human figures and clothing and then let them flow into a freer, sketchier style. If you can draw it clean first, you can make it as messy or neat as you like while still retaining the general image of whatever you're drawing.

This is very helpful, and actually since I read this, for the past week I've been practicing quite a bit with lines (nothing special enough to post however). I think this problem comes mostly out of lazyness, a not very steady hand, and the fact that I find line composition confusing a lot of the times (what should be bold, what shouldn't). But I shall try to practice a lot more! Thanks mousy, and sorry for the late reply!

toast
01-16-2012, 01:46 PM
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/008/6/7/chillin_like_wao_by_greensubmarine-d4lry7r.png


drew this probably two weeks ago xD I havent been drawing lately due to exams and what not. enjoy, critic appreciatedddddd

ClockHand
01-16-2012, 08:40 PM
I think you didn't gave enough though to the background.

indescribable
01-17-2012, 12:49 AM
I love this. . _ .

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/304/0/6/halloweener_by_greensubmarine-d4em8ka.png
I think it's probably my favourite thing out of everything you have ever drawn. Also the shirt reminds me of the pale man (http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-vf0_cTLKKVI/TkmV-NMr-QI/AAAAAAAAA_w/qEgNL4zha_w/s1600/pans_labyrinth_05_large.jpg). Very cool. ;D

Psy
01-17-2012, 01:40 PM
I like the last one but the top background is fighting me. I like that he has those outlines like hes a 3D picture and it does kinda pull that off compared to the background and you can almost see him poping out against the background. It might be because you have the yellow women on the sides obscuring the background then suddenly nothing at the top except the words and it just seems too empty right there.

toast
01-17-2012, 07:30 PM
Tayla: actually thats what the shirt was inspired by haha! thankyaaaa :D

psy and clock: I see what you guys mean about the background. Luckily I still have the psd file so this weekend I'll try and fix it. Do you think I should kind of crop it at the top also to have less empty space?

andrtaker
01-18-2012, 03:24 AM
you have a very unique style! so i cant really tell whats wrong since i have a very different style of drawing.though i can say that i love the shadings and the faces of your characters! :)

SuperKasey
01-21-2012, 05:24 AM
Toast y u so awesome? >:O

I can't even begin to comprehend where you get the inspiration to draw like this. Just so cool.

Sparky-J
01-21-2012, 08:14 AM
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/008/6/7/chillin_like_wao_by_greensubmarine-d4lry7r.png


drew this probably two weeks ago xD I havent been drawing lately due to exams and what not. enjoy, critic appreciatedddddd

This is too dope! Man, I just love cool art. this is cool, from top to bottom!

toast
03-30-2012, 02:26 AM
thankyou guys!! I've been drawing a lot on paper lately, so updating this thread is really rare lol

but I made something, in which I'm not sure about the background

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/085/f/3/getting_shit_done_by_greensubmarine-d4u1ab5.png

I hate backgrounds =_= critic plz

Joosh
04-02-2012, 06:34 PM
HMM MANG DIS IS TUFF

Well her outlines/shadow make her look 2-dimensional, but you drew 3-dimensional objects that shes leaning on.

Egoslip
04-08-2012, 11:07 PM
Psychedelic @.@...

Hmm.. I think her mask should be a bit more symmetrical.. would cause good contrast with the rest of her and make it pop a bit more :).. especially in comparison to how well the gun was done :3.. groovy stuff!

toast
05-28-2012, 02:13 PM
josh: yeah I see what you mean, the fact that her lineart is thicker than the stuff in the back makes her look quite unnatural.

ego: thanks bro! Yeah, I feel dumb for not taking more time on making sure her mask was symmetrical xD

I'm working on an actual finished piece, but for now, I'm going to dump some random GB stuff here. Uh, WARNING BOOBS:

http://i.imgur.com/nc2zC.png

http://i.imgur.com/k7NWe.png

http://i.imgur.com/Kz2s3.png

http://i.imgur.com/FxT1U.png

http://i.imgur.com/fCcAE.png

Cloudy
05-31-2012, 03:51 AM
yay for boobs, and HEY TOASTEH

Demonfyre
05-31-2012, 07:08 AM
Awesome pictures! Not really got any suggestions for improvement I just wanted to tell you that they are awesome! xD also it's worrying the way that Dolan is staring at the naked pictures... :L

Regantor
05-31-2012, 10:36 AM
Pretty rad anatomy practice man. I like the second mugshot in particular.

The only critique I can really offer is that the arms are perhaps a bit short in the last one, maybe?...

toast
06-03-2012, 02:27 PM
cloudy; <3 hey cloudy! :D
demonfyre; Lol thankyou! goddammit dolan
regantor: thanks dude, yeah I agree with the arms. I'll be more careful with that, they were just quite hard to get right considering the angle :P

Oki I need help u guise. I've been trying to add some green lighting to the blue/green since theres a frickin blue/green massive star behind it (which I'm still trying to make cooler, so pls not too much criticism on that part). How would I do that, because it looks really dumb whenever I try? Should I just leave the lighting? Would that even look right? HALP

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7221/meowmix.png

Also heres a GB drawing I messed around with in corel painter earlier. Just playing with skin tones more. Hair looks like balls though lol

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2810/bananajd.png

Sparky-J
06-03-2012, 10:26 PM
TOAST! You rock so hard.

Sconethief
06-04-2012, 03:18 AM
That's pretty good toast. I think the GB piece turned out rather well, I really like the style of the coloring.

toast
06-22-2012, 11:05 PM
thanks guys!

Some random shit I've done. First is a crappy doodle I did in gb, next is something else that was on gb but I pimped a bit in sai (feet are reaaally crappy sorry), and the last is a wip. With the wip, pls tell me if the head looks weird because I dont know what I'm doing with that. also, tell me if theres something that looks off with the anatomy. disregard messing coloring also, and wobbly outsides

if you're a little girl and you dont like nudity, beware
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/173/0/5/face_sketch_3_by_greensubmarine-d54g2it.png

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/174/e/e/thats_who_you_gotta_be_by_greensubmarine-d54m8fg.png

http://i.imgur.com/qtLqv.png

JJJorgie
06-22-2012, 11:49 PM
These looks pretty good!!!! On the last one, it seems like her face is a little small. Great job on all three!

ScarletHue
06-23-2012, 07:55 AM
Oh ho! I like how your style is all so crazy. I suppose 'off colour' is the phrase that describes it best. And yet your anatomy and painting skills are so fine tuned and great! A wonderful style.

The only thing I can pick out is that I suggest you practise drawing feet because on the monotone figure, although the rest of her is lovely, her feet aren't drawn very accurately and seem unnatural.

toast
07-05-2012, 02:39 AM
Jjjorgie: Thanks! Yeah the head is screwed up. I haven't gotten around to continuing with it but I'll definately keep that it mind!

Scarlethue: Thankyou (: I agree, the feet are ballsy. I was being quite lazy with it ):

I'm just going to dump all my gb stuff and doodles. None of this is finished or refined lol. <_< So I'll start with something thats almost finished. Plz no critique, except for the first one! I understand the hand on the 5th pic is a blob D:

WARNING MORE NUDITY FOR THE LOVE OF GOD

http://i.imgur.com/UmxBf.png
http://i.imgur.com/QKl4k.png
http://i.imgur.com/vjrT8.png
http://i.imgur.com/rHH66.png
http://i.imgur.com/2gbaZ.png
http://i.imgur.com/yAObi.png
(collab with Linz, mine is on the left)
http://i.imgur.com/FC3Jo.png
http://i.imgur.com/6XWpw.png
http://i.imgur.com/33p4r.png
http://i.imgur.com/lpw6I.png
http://i.imgur.com/vZVVG.png
http://i.imgur.com/kwHvn.png
http://i.imgur.com/uvGm2.png
http://i.imgur.com/5WJrz.png
http://i.imgur.com/1vJRo.png
http://i.imgur.com/sUG6y.png

Gedeon
07-06-2012, 07:26 AM
OAO GOD DAMN TOAST!!! THE SHADING ON THOSE FUCKING PAINTINGS IS PERFECT!!!!! FUCK!!!! WHEN COULD YOU PAINT :P !!!! Really awesome paintings!

toast
07-11-2012, 03:34 AM
OH MY GOD THANKS!!!!

I finished some stuff. The last one is a self potrait that I'll probably come back to later to clean up. I'm just tired of working on it atm:

nudity blah blah nsfw

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/193/b/4/she_sees_through_you_by_greensubmarine-d56xe0b.png

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/192/1/a/movin_to_the_groove_by_greensubmarine-d56x2a0.png

http://i.imgur.com/exGNC.png

http://i.imgur.com/RMESy.png

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/191/3/4/self_potrait_doodle_by_greensubmarine-d56se8e.png

toast
07-13-2012, 04:34 PM
Hey so um, steams summer sale started yesterday and I have no money. SO I'm doing cheap commissions. If anyones interested at all.....................<_>

Finished piece- 6 bucks
Sloppy finished piece- 4.50
Lineart- 3 bucks
Sketch- 2 bucks
Avatar- 50 cents

Lmao. Payment made through paypal, obviously. <_<

ClockHand
07-13-2012, 04:57 PM
Before I was just an average person like you, but ones I tried toast's commissions I have tasted success, money, joy, happiness, marriage and more. Buy toast's commissions and improve your life. Recommended by doctors.

ScarletHue
07-14-2012, 08:14 AM
Holy god! the first one is just insane. If your finished pieces are that quality, I think you could fetch a higher price than 6 bucks which for me is only &#163;4.

toast
07-14-2012, 03:55 PM
Thankyou! I know but most people aren't rich, and I really only want to gather up like 10 bucks to get some games xD

If you're interested, message me ;D

Gedeon
07-14-2012, 05:28 PM
THE SELF-PORTRAIT IS https://encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRgQbttGVTzkj1rGgb0coco3OGChbKHX 1gA5ARIW-VBqVLh8MGdIM NOT EVEN JOKING THE COLORS AREhttps://encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRgQbttGVTzkj1rGgb0coco3OGChbKHX 1gA5ARIW-VBqVLh8MGdAND YOU KNOW IT!!!

toast
07-15-2012, 12:20 AM
THANKS BRO YOU'RE PRETTY https://encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRgQbttGVTzkj1rGgb0coco3OGChbKHX 1gA5ARIW-VBqVLh8MGd AS WELL

Cloudy
07-15-2012, 07:26 AM
toast my god, your realism painting skills are AMAZING! I am in awe

toast
07-17-2012, 05:34 PM
thankyou cloudy!!!

alright im just going to dump some gb stuff

http://i.imgur.com/wpZDk.png
http://i.imgur.com/XSEVK.png
http://i.imgur.com/cCOHE.png
http://i.imgur.com/ayZNu.png
http://i.imgur.com/FdhEk.png
http://i.imgur.com/nN7uV.png
http://i.imgur.com/kSU5A.png

EDIT: I just speedpainted a nipple on gb

http://i.imgur.com/j0KuA.png

EDIT2:

sean said i should add nipple hair so I did

http://i.imgur.com/5lrH8.png

Gedeon
07-17-2012, 06:41 PM
not that i mind....but why are you drawing pierced nipples??/

Also awesome shading...whats wrong with the face....chin to short???

AW fuck...i DO have hair on my nipples.....never noticed that before....THANK YOU TOAST!!!

toast
07-17-2012, 07:16 PM
Hahahaha I dont know xD It was an idea that came up on gb YOU'RE WELCOME

and I think the eyes are too close together :P so it makes him look kinda of goofy. idunno.

quoted for convenience:


thankyou cloudy!!!

alright im just going to dump some gb stuff

http://i.imgur.com/wpZDk.png
http://i.imgur.com/XSEVK.png
http://i.imgur.com/cCOHE.png
http://i.imgur.com/ayZNu.png
http://i.imgur.com/FdhEk.png
http://i.imgur.com/nN7uV.png
http://i.imgur.com/kSU5A.png

EDIT: I just speedpainted a nipple on gb

http://i.imgur.com/j0KuA.png

EDIT2:

sean said i should add nipple hair so I did

http://i.imgur.com/5lrH8.png

Demonfyre
07-20-2012, 02:14 PM
As always I look at you work in awe Toast :D

indescribable
07-20-2012, 02:22 PM
Lol @ the nipple.

These are so cute:
http://i.imgur.com/cCOHE.png
http://i.imgur.com/kSU5A.png

WhenRabbitsAttack
07-28-2012, 03:33 AM
the second guy is really sexy. the shading gives a really nice sense of volume :D

toast
11-03-2012, 11:49 PM
thanks guys!

i'm just going to update my art thread so it doesnt get eaten up:

*warning lots of pictures lolol*
goes from old ---> most recent so skip to the bottom and scroll up if you stalk me on DA and want to see new stuffz
(I edited my self portrait from the last page btw)

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapv6unX1d1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapv7eqXTE1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapv8dd6Mh1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapvap3cec1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapvewfpZO1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapvfof1nS1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapvgnTXpK1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mapvh6lBee1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mb0x0v44Lc1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbfyiqUpG41rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbna9srsvo1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mc7zhc6W4j1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcxsvs1sjS1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy0t2SVHc1rhsudso2_500.jpg
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy0t2SVHc1rhsudso1_500.jpg
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy29aVCvG1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy2aurdju1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy2hic2MA1rhsudso1_1280.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy2hic2MA1rhsudso2_1280.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcy2hic2MA1rhsudso3_1280.png

Tetsu Yawl
11-03-2012, 11:56 PM
o8o Gawwwwsh Toast what have I missed all this time not seeing your art progress? My lawd now I truly feel the fact I was gone so long D8 I reaaaaally life your life drawings, you also, as before, keep a rough feel to your stuff, but hey thats prolly GB, I dunno, but heck, I love it

One thing I may have noticed is the fact that you often rush when you draw feets, or maybe it's just this page, but no actually you often try to hide em'! And gawsh I love your trippy art :D Makes me upload back my toasty neko noface avatar..Well you know what? I'll do that nao.

toast
11-04-2012, 12:05 AM
tetsu! waddup dude
the rough feel to my art is not purposeful, I'm just very lazy when it comes to cleaning up and almost none of this work is truly finished. I'm definitely trying to work more on that however, but it's quite hard ahaha

as for the feet, yes! I do tend to just scribble them in, because I hate feet. b-but that's not really an excuse. the problem with feet is that I'm alright when I draw them as a separate study, like hands. but when it comes to actually drawing them on a person, it gets complicated because you have to worry about the angle/size when compared to the rest of the person. I really need to pay more attention to stuff like that tho

but thankyou!! I've missed your art too dude, stick around

and oh god that avatar is so old ahahahahahah

Hayashida
11-04-2012, 12:06 AM
that fuckin nipple, toast, what the fuck

Cloudy
11-04-2012, 12:11 AM
woo toast you are so amazing at realistic colouring!

alcoro
11-04-2012, 01:05 AM
nipple!! :D looks like a door handle?? umm maybe an invitiation to cum in?? :p eheh j/k
i see a lot of improvement here!

one thing i have noticed is that in some of your drawings your eyes are drawn really close to each other which makes them look a bit weird..in general they are an eye width apart from each other.
hope it helped! :]

Demonfyre
11-04-2012, 01:08 AM
You are too good O_O i'm scared to suggest anything :P

toast
12-04-2012, 07:13 PM
john: u know u liek dat nipple
cloudy & demon: lol thanks
alcoro: I can see what you mean on a few of my pieces, thanks for pointing that out

alright just going to dump some more stuff:

http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_md2vct8ntw1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mde2zlSCai1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mde30iqn3K1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdnab7ejbt1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdncicqNst1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdo5afRD8n1rhsudso1_500.pnghttp://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdvt2wm8Ri1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_me09wknjTc1rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mehn62c4iJ1rhsudso1_400.png


mostly doodles with quite a few problems

BunnyVoid
12-05-2012, 12:59 AM
wow these are all cool... tho i hope you finish at least one...
i can't really critique on anything cause i feel like you know already your stuff... you just have to try and finish one

Blue_Dragon
12-05-2012, 05:33 AM
Toasty, your art is amazing. You could do album covers for Of Montreal if you wanted :3 http://mindinversion.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/skeletal-lamping.jpg

Celestial-Fox
12-05-2012, 05:58 AM
That self-portrait looks reeeally good.

Haddedam
12-10-2012, 06:57 PM
I really like
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_md2vct8ntw1rhsudso1_500.png
saggy eyes and big feet, it feels really expressive

toast
01-27-2013, 09:27 PM
thanks guys!!
blue_dragon: yay that's flattering! the gay parade is a great album

commissions:

http://i.imgur.com/Ur1xwkU.png
http://i.imgur.com/7fz4tem.png

doodles:

http://i.imgur.com/TGS7mGZ.png
http://i.imgur.com/uWF4jsZ.png
http://i.imgur.com/hWY7XGi.png
http://i.imgur.com/4Ia3gJe.png
http://i.imgur.com/MLqGNuE.png
http://i.imgur.com/GrJStfR.png
http://i.imgur.com/ttB9fiQ.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/Lo3ak13.jpg

edit:
art class shit, please no criticism on these because I know they're all shit lmao, esp the second one
those proportions skldjfsd


http://i.imgur.com/jL8qUetl.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/5nmsH4xl.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/fDeYET5l.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/2OTadyOl.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/umFgqZXl.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/uZP3JP3l.jpg

indescribable
01-28-2013, 01:16 PM
Yaay, art class self-portrait. I actually really love that one. And this version (http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdncicqNst1rhsudso1_500.png). > . > That is all.

toast
05-26-2013, 03:30 AM
i <3 u tayla

hi guys please crit as harsh as you can
one has nudity btw

http://25.media.tumblr.com/302af329a11b9be94ead495895072800/tumblr_mne4q0bgHk1rhsudso1_1280.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/07e560e12bddf30f824af3e0d574c28c/tumblr_mmz4pwYaAv1rhsudso1_1280.png

EDIT:
also please crit these from the artist alley thread!!


WARNING PENIS

http://25.media.tumblr.com/179f98d5bde12dd6083b7296aeff1537/tumblr_mkllxoqUQ11rhsudso1_500.png
http://24.media.tumblr.com/d67140605fa1f59de29554fc4460dc6f/tumblr_mkmbm3P6t11rhsudso1_500.jpg
http://24.media.tumblr.com/2b3bdc34848c7ac52ff57b3d8ccbf498/tumblr_mkmbw6SrJN1rhsudso1_500.jpg
http://24.media.tumblr.com/6312686485abea1415d5721b8dc77502/tumblr_mkmbybfVRh1rhsudso1_500.jpg
http://25.media.tumblr.com/200c57a7da3200dec2d9d8b02c8c8dc8/tumblr_mkmck4cq7s1rhsudso1_500.png
http://25.media.tumblr.com/71ed3ea43e34c68893ca6f2bcef7777a/tumblr_mkuzc6jEfP1rhsudso2_500.png
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doghateburger
05-27-2013, 10:02 AM
I'll be honest here, its a bit hard for me to critique your work. Most of them look really expressive and surreal with fine art implement into it, which is something to truly respect.

The only thing I can really say is try to bring your piece to a more complete stage? As in take a little more time to work on them and truly push it by blending shades in the appropriate areas and try to work out the lighting a bit better.

EDIT:

I notice you usually dont pay much attention to the hands and feet, maybe thats something to work on?

ScarletHue
05-30-2013, 12:26 PM
As DHB said, it's difficult to crit when there is such a fine art element to it. However I do think on the very last one, the hips are far too large for a male. I also get this sense that the arm on the hip is sorta glued onto the torso, just because of the lines at the base of the shoulder and the way you've drawn the armpit.

Blue_Dragon
06-03-2013, 09:00 PM
I agree with the others--it is really hard to critique such fantastic work! (You're stuff is really inspirational :P)

One thing I've noticed on the picture of the man in the forest is that you pay hyper attention to his face--which is extraordinarily well done--but his hair you can still see a bit of the "brush" (it's kinda rounded, if you get what I'm saying) and not quite pointed or tipped like tufts of hair get. Does that make sense? Also, it maybe that you're just not done yet, but around the edges of the body, you can see smudges/blurs. If it's there on purpose, that's cool, but if you aren't done yet, maybe clean that up a wee bit?

One last thing, same image, the trees in the foreground are looking great, but could use a bit more detail in my opinion. But yeah, you're stuff's so awesome I can't really do much more than that (not just brown-nosing.)

Also--hells yeah! Gay Parade is great. I also liked Cherry Peel and Sunlandic Twins a lot :P Actually, I like most their stuff, though the newest album...it's taking me a bit to get used to it. So good to find someone who actually knows them!

Egoslip
06-05-2013, 12:45 PM
Wow Toast, you're getting really good man. Awesome figure drawings! Keep it up!