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Jake
11-22-2011, 09:00 PM
Been a while since I posted art here, so um here goes.

My new OC Vance
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/326/9/8/vance_by_jacobscottgarner-d4h04fa.jpg

Cloudy-chan's character for Pimp My Art
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/326/8/7/cloudy__s_character_by_jacobscottgarner-d4h04kb.jpg

C&C please!! :cat_shiney:

Maxx_Wellington
11-22-2011, 09:59 PM
Hey there, So here it goes:

Vance: His hand should be the same width as his wrist.... well the thumb come out, but lack of that, they are even. Also the feet seem a little big, like the main character of Kingdom Hearts. I don't know if you wanted this effect or not....

Cloudy-chan: her feet don't seem to be hitting anything. What I mean is that normally this pose is done with the toes suspending the anckles up, so the toe will be flat on the ground...

But your art is really good. Keep it up

Jake
11-22-2011, 10:06 PM
Thanks for the critique! Yeah the big feet are kinda my style, but I'll work on everything else.

Maxx_Wellington
11-22-2011, 11:58 PM
hey, I just wanted to make sure it was your art style... hope to see more art soon