View Full Version : Kyokatsu's Realm - Hisagi Shuuhei

09-06-2011, 06:08 PM
Hiya everyone. :cat_see:

I've been drawing for the past 2 years (come-and-go), and now I'm more serious in improving my artworks.
Here I'll be putting them up for critiques. Please critique harshly (but reasonably ;P).

Thanks for your time :D

Numero Uno: Brilliance

This image was done in about an hour, with a photo of myself as reference. I realize the wrists are too thin - I guess I overdid it on that lol.:cat_huh:

09-06-2011, 10:04 PM
Stick with one thread.

Wrist to thin (also one is thinner than the other), arms to long, one arm is thinner than the other, the chest is flat, legs are flat and cloth need more ripples on some parts.

09-06-2011, 10:31 PM
Stick with one thread.

Wrist to thin (also one is thinner than the other), arms to long, one arm is thinner than the other, the chest is flat, legs are flat and cloth need more ripples on some parts.

I didn't know how to change the title until I clicked the advanced options >.< My bad. Can the other thread be deleted?
I'll be sure to pay attention more to anatomy and clothes in the near future. Thanks for your critic ClockHand. ;D

09-07-2011, 03:19 PM
Well everything else is quite fine, just remember what lock said and it will be anatomically correct :D

09-07-2011, 05:05 PM
Numero Uno?

Do you speak Spanish or what?

09-07-2011, 05:55 PM
The wrists would be okay if the hand was positioned at another angle (front—we wouldn't see the other fingers that way)
the forearm is way too thin and you didn't "define" the elbow enough—you should have drawn it more clearly and drawn the whole thing in 3D instead of in a flat position.
Maybe the neck is a bit lopsided, I don't know, but it doesn't seem like the position of the face is quite natural.
I hope it helps.

09-17-2011, 02:30 PM
Numero Uno?

Do you speak Spanish or what?

No, it was just something random.

Here's an update of a work in progress.

http://a5.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/310701_10150289121436533_542841532_8199868_1570131 637_n.jpg

09-17-2011, 03:48 PM

Is that referenced? It looks good. Like, really good. The first picture was an easy critique, but I'm struggling to find anything immediately wrong with this one.

. . .

Nope, I'm drawing a blank.

09-17-2011, 03:52 PM
Yes, reference was used. I've noted already that the waist could be a bit thinner, and that the forearm by the waist is a bit longer than the other forearm. The roses can be more accentuated as well.

09-17-2011, 04:40 PM
Ooh, I lovelovelove that first one. Your shading style is super cool.

09-17-2011, 06:15 PM
Ooh, I lovelovelove that first one. Your shading style is super cool.

Thanks Celestial-Fox! ^^ I was trying to get a graphic-y manga feeling.

Here's the finished work:
http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/316008_10150289321851533_542841532_8201364_4817907 34_n.jpg

09-17-2011, 06:28 PM
Ooh, this one turned out fairly nice. He left arm looks a little skinny, though. I like the shading on her outfit and the texture in her braid. The only thing I would suggest overall is to not be afraid of shading the lighter tones, like her skin.

09-17-2011, 07:55 PM
Pretty good, i would only like to point out that you could have put a bit more of a bump in the face. ._. wait that sounds weird.
Im talking about the Facial features of the cheeks and the brows.........well it sounds less weird.......its kinda flat but still ok

09-18-2011, 01:35 PM
Dude your epic.........(in ahh)
keep up da cool stuff

09-24-2011, 04:22 PM
http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/291917_10150297744676533_542841532_8248014_2089198 163_n.jpg

Uchiha Itachi from Naruto. Took about 50 minutes to draw; reference used.

10-15-2011, 11:45 AM
My first attempt at realistic digital painting. Didn't turn out well, I know >.<

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/300086_10150322375406533_542841532_8382162_1082078 982_n.jpg

Critiques welcome.

10-18-2011, 08:24 PM
no critique? ):

10-21-2011, 08:37 PM
Here's another one that is intended to be a self portrait with a Death Note style. Critiques are appreciated.

http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/309585_10150322375516533_542841532_8382163_1387377 911_n.jpg

I notice that one eye is bigger than the other one.

10-21-2011, 11:02 PM
That self portrait is pretty rad :I Me Gusta.

If you're going for realism it's really not a good idea to put a photographic background in the picture. If you have drawn anything less that photo-realism doing so will make anything you put over the top of the background seem obviously artistic and stylized. Basically your viewers will see it as anything but realism.

Also if you want other people to look at your work it helps if you get out there and start critiquing for others and posting a lot. I'm not saying doing so will ALWAYS get you viewers but it helps :3

10-22-2011, 11:58 AM
Ah, thanks for the critiques. They'll help me a lot in the near future! ^^

And I'll be sure to critique others works as well. (Y)


Worked very hard on this one lol. Also took a fairly long time.

Initial drawing by hand: 20 minutes
Digital cellshading: 1.5 hours

I have a LONG way to go, nonetheless, I think it's done pretty well.

Young Hisagi Shuuhei from Bleach

10-24-2011, 06:04 PM

http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/310375_10150332696161533_542841532_8442899_1757658 806_n.jpg

I'm trying to adapt to digital drawing more by experimenting with the different stuff in paint tool sai.

10-25-2011, 11:54 AM
Hey that's me in Elementary school!!! (the one getting hit in the head)

10-27-2011, 09:27 PM
haha :P dodgeball is fun..it should be an official sport with its own olympics and such >.<