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dbc
12-30-2010, 08:19 PM
looks like this forum still (a bit) dead, eh..? *killed by admin*
well, i just want to show few of my artworks ^^
comment and critique about my improvement please~

sometime i draw in 2 ways : cute and a-bit-realistic (what the...?), usually i draw in cute way
here's some of my art since the first time I submitted my art in Facebook

October 24, 2009
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/9070/95301132757000075126179.jpg
it's deathbycuteness


April 8, 2010
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6930/april8.jpg
my OC - Lunar - Jack of Diamonds

August 21, 2010
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4946/aug21.jpg
it's my OC (Hatter, back) and my friend's OC (Aelice, front)

September 10, 2010 (one day before my birthday XD)
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/1925/sept10.jpg
my friend's request
actually he asked me to draw a old nurse (+-40 years old) but i draw it too young

(continue in #2)

dbc
12-30-2010, 08:20 PM
November 17, 2010
http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9421/nov17.jpg
my OC - The Moon Queen (or The Moon Princess???!)

November 30, 2010
http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/1705/nov30.jpg
actually i want to submit it for a "Search for a New Admin" competition, but i lost my confidence :(

December 30, 2010
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8493/dec30.jpg
for "Black Jack Bunny Brigade" Project in dA, i want to submit it, but i have no scanner, and near my house there's a place to scan pics but the scanner was broken, so... it's an EPIC FAIL

(#3)

dbc
12-30-2010, 08:22 PM
don't mind about this weird and small pic
http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/662/april9.jpg

also about these doodles and sketches
http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/8050/july10.jpg

http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4824/dec304.jpg

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/152/dec303.jpg

(#4)

dbc
12-30-2010, 08:24 PM
or even about this graffiti! :eek:
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/3111/dec302.jpg
(the words in that graffiti isn't "XI - Language Program" but "XI-Bahasa" which written in Indonesia Language and can be translated as "XI - Language Program" in English)



sorry if i post too many pics, but i really feel curious about my improvement :)

Your comments and critiques really help me to improve my drawing ^^
thanks for your attention

NB : sorry for these super big pics, i used Samsung Corby TXT and i don't know how to change the camera resolution :confused:
looks like i have a new record as the the longest post in this forum, oops, just kidding XP

Tsig
12-30-2010, 08:41 PM
From the looks of it, it seems like you've improved a lot in the last year. I love how the people on the page are holding onto the panel, it's so cute! Haha and I love the sinister smile on the bunny one. I can't really see much to critique, since it all looks pretty good to me =)

>.> I'm having a hard time making out the "language program" part of the last picture. It's probably just me though, I've always been bad at seeing stuff like that, like with optical illusions.

dbc
12-30-2010, 08:57 PM
thank you so much >w<o
Is that so? I thought that panel pic was one of the biggest fail in my life XD
That's good that people appreciate it ^^v
I also love that bunny smile, I'll kidnap that bunny if he exist in real world XDD
oh, it's okay, anyway, thanks for your comment ^^



>.> I'm having a hard time making out the "language program" part of the last picture. It's probably just me though, I've always been bad at seeing stuff like that, like with optical illusions.

oops, looks like something wrong. Sorry, sorry, i really a stupid girl... Well, let me make it clear now, the words in that graffiti isn't "XI - Language Program" but "XI-Bahasa" which written in Indonesia Language and can be translated as "XI - Language Program" in English. I'm pretty sorry for this. I'll edit my post. >.<

Tsig
12-30-2010, 09:08 PM
Haha that makes more sense =) I can see it clear now, and it's a sweet design. Lol now I feel stupid for sitting, staring at my screen, trying to figure out if the words were like on top of each other or something.

dbc
12-31-2010, 05:14 AM
yeah XD
thanks so much, but i think i'm still bad in creating graffiti because i ever heard that unreadable graffiti is the best, i really want to make the unreadable one but it's so hard T_T
No, i'm the stupid one because i can't explain it well
Once again i really sorry to make you confused DX

Tanatos
12-31-2010, 10:04 AM
You're good on the "cuteness" business. xD


But on the second pic, aren't those legs too long? o.o They look good, but they are really long xD

I like this one:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8493/dec30.jpg

there's a style :cool:

axion
12-31-2010, 01:13 PM
dude
i. love. your. stuff.
your generally cute anime style is lovely

firstly. i want a coloured pic from you! vibrant colours would look good on your work especially watercolours

in my opinion i think you could make your drawings better by making more use of the folds in the clothes
and learn abit of the facial anatomy to get the faces seem more natural, just try and get the curves in

....yeah that last sentences probably didnt make sense lol

anywayid like to some new eyes from you
to make your males and female characters stand out more from each other
so have a look at abit of bleach manga, just for the eyes

actually screw that last bit
go on da look at an artist you have a similar style to (aswell as someone you look up to as an artist)
and study some of there eye works
http://destinyblue.deviantart.com/art/Anime-eyes-155762134?q=boost&#37;3Apopular+eyes&qo=26
thats just a set of eyes i think you could have a look at

http://xxxshadowsxxx.deviantart.com/art/Eyes-33346086?q=boost%3Apopular+eyes&qo=38
and try having ago at studying the shape of the eyes (not only these eyes ofcourse! they are just an example LOL)

i think your head will open up more by having a look at the different eyes while also trying them out and experimenting
although making a new eye can be hard but mixing around some ideas will do just fine

lastly thicken your main lines :) and spike out some parts, who know it could work towards your stoof

p.s if my critic is utter S*** please do not hunt me down and tie me to a pole and shoot me.

thank you have a nice day :)

oh and you should read this it might brighten your day :)
http://oomizuao.deviantart.com/#/d34j6ab

dbc
12-31-2010, 07:58 PM
You're good on the "cuteness" business. xD


But on the second pic, aren't those legs too long? o.o They look good, but they are really long xD

I like this one:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8493/dec30.jpg

there's a style :cool:

thank you, Tanatos XDD
well, when I draw it i got a "Persona Fever" and I always made every legs long, but now I've repent and change my style XD
and since I repent, I realize her legs was really long, longer than in persona XDD *stupei...*

thank you
honestly i love that picture too :D

p.s : your name really remind me to Persona 3 (don't remind about this note, this is OOT) XD

@ Axion : thanks ^^
honestly, i'm really suck in coloring, i love every color in this world, but me myself can't coloring well T_T
but I'll try, and, I hope i can give at least 1 colored pic this year ^^

good suggestion, I'm still learning about those things now =)
lol, don't worry that still makes sense for me

Well, actually I'm afraid people will think I'm a art thief if I copy somebody's style :confused:

that first link really good! Maybe I can use them as new references
but I'm still afraid O.o

the second one is good too, maybe i can use that to improve my 'seriousness' style XD

thanks for all of those links, I really love you!!! >w<
yeah, I couldn't agree more about that (that last sentence) :D

I'll try that since I have a Staedler pigment liner now ^^

Don't worry I won't do that
I'm not psycho like that crazy bunny *pointing at the Dec 30 picture*

DeviantArt Loves You... LOL, that's really funny for me XDD

axion
01-01-2011, 11:36 AM
no problem

i dont think you need to work on a serious style but but make some really defined characters
and stuff like a "foxy lady" if you get my drift like really seductive and such
you can still keep it in your style while making her seem so dangerous and such


actually having vibrant colours or just ccolours in general are quite inspiring
they can set the atmostphere and everything

further more good luck (Y)

dbc
04-17-2011, 06:07 AM
It's been a really long time I haven't post anything here
I really want to get more and moar critiques, so I reviving this thread with more "awkward" (I mean bad) pics, and still BWK. So please, critique more, moar! :cat_ahahaha:

to the point, here's my pic. Most of them are CHBIIIEEESSSS and still, BWK pics.


http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7686/18008415441305241561261.jpg

The worst one
I drew this (almost) less than 30 mins because my facebook friend challenged me to find out who have the-most-weird-hairstyled OC. This is my Project TE:AP OC, Gabriel. His hair a kinda remind me to Cat's ear or to Master Yoda's ear :cat_ahahaha:


http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/3199/18208215418206664111261.jpg

My chibi training attempt. Don't look at the corner right bottom one. It's CACAD.


http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/5862/18583315719953407591261.jpg

My AiW OCs. From left to right are White Rabbit, Alice, and Mad Hatter. This picture isn't really BWK.


http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5376/21775916325352542191261.jpg

Chibi again. It's Gabriel and Michael. Nothing to say here except "Lots of failures".


http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3356/20702416356703325941261.jpg

This one is also bad. And it's still WIP.


http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/95/19000115935942807191261.jpg

Look at the corner right bottom.
What do you think about this one? I made it with my mouse. it's a kinda interesting to draw with mouse, but it's so hard.


That's all for now. I really appreciate all of your critiques. Especially if you want to show me a link about clothes folding. :cat_muuu: