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Portogas
07-21-2011, 07:11 AM
Hi!

I've been struggling for a while now trying to decide on a main character, :cat_teardrop:
however I think I've finally decided on one! I just need some feed backs on things, or details I can change! ^^

http://www.mangatutorials.com/file/pic/photo/2011/07/Portogas-dls_500.jpg

Furthermore this is just a sketch xD.. sorry

Help appreciated!

trilokcool3
07-21-2011, 08:38 AM
FAULTS:1>>>> left eye's eyebrow(to your left) as compared to the right eye something odd.:(
2>>>>mouth not centered as compared to the nose(mouth is looking a little bit separated 4rm the face or something like that) :( :(
3>>>>pupil of the eye left side looking odd as compared to the right. :(
and everything is alright..:)
RECTIFY IT IT WILL LOOK GOOD BELIVE ME :) :cat_huh::cat_huh::cat_huh:

Tsig
07-21-2011, 02:30 PM
It's looking good, except for the things trilokcool3 touched on. I think that it might look a little off because the left eyebrow is further off from the center than the right one, and his left pupil is also a little high up compared to the right one. Of course, if you flip things around it could just be that the right one isn't matching the left one lol. Anyways, those are just small things, and it's looking great! I really like his eyes =)

Maybe a full-body sketch would give us more to give feedback on?

Fenn
07-21-2011, 04:01 PM
Full body sketch please! And mabye some character info. Just an image of a head is far too little to judge a protagonist.

ram
07-21-2011, 05:25 PM
well i can't find the right words to describe something like this, xD if you wan't my crit then i would say,
-shape of the head on top and make it circularize as you can
-eye brows
-nose make it a little further long to bottom
-pupil

well that's it, but maybe it's just your style though..
so i could be in the wrong

Portogas
07-23-2011, 06:11 AM
Geez... it seems like I've to change a lot of things... I will be drawing a full body sketch soon! Thanks!