Really good! I loved it! But whats bioterrorism? And there was just one part that I would like to mention.
never comforting words, but even less so when I'm the one in danger. they told me that thinking that I'll be at peace knowing because they tested their weapon on me, and forced me into a condition that cannot be cured, the next victim might be spared that mistake. it doesn't matter. I don't want to die; I don't have a choice.
I don't have time to say much right now, so here's something real quick. In the second sentence you say that
twice. there should be no comma after: because they tested their weapons on me. There should be a period after cannot be cured.
Sorry. I'll try to give more later.