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 Post subject: How'd I do?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:08 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:11 pm 
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The boy looks like he's in an uncomfortable position, I really like the lion :) it reminds me of aslan from narnia :P and the boys left leg (our right) isn't placed right

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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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The boy looks like he's in an uncomfortable position, I really like the lion :) it reminds me of aslan from narnia :P and the boys left leg (our right) isn't placed right


Ahh narnia, that brings back some good memories. But now that you mention it his leg does look a little off. Thanks for the input :mrgreen:


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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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The boy looks like he's in an uncomfortable position, I really like the lion :) it reminds me of aslan from narnia :P and the boys left leg (our right) isn't placed right


Ahh narnia, that brings back some good memories. But now that you mention it his leg does look a little off. Thanks for the input :mrgreen:

No problem...I'm glad it brings back some good memories :)

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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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That lion looks really cool. The idea for this is quite awesome, actually.

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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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The guy has a big problem with proportions; fore arms are to large, the legs to short, the feets are to close to the butt, etc.

The face of the lion look ok, but the eyes are weird, and everything outside the face is bad.

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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
PostPosted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 10:14 pm 
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Not bad. Not bad at all. I'd work on the stuff that Error says though.


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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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Yeah, I think what error said explains why it looked so awkward. Thanks for the advice


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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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I know its really huge sorry about that. But anyway decided to draw a family portrait for my dad. As always your criticism is welcome and appreciated :D (Scanner cut off part of mine and my sister's face oops)

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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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Hmm nice contour lines, now work on eliminating the contour lines and define edges with tone and value! :)

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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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Hmm nice contour lines, now work on eliminating the contour lines and define edges with tone and value! :)


"Nice contour lines! now eliminate them..." that made me lol for some reason. I'll definitely try and add tone and value but I've never done so well with that in the past. Time to change that i guess


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 Post subject: Re: How'd I do?
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I quite like your boy+Lion drawing.
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