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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:33 pm 
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Your composition is really weak in both pictures.

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Why is the character at the center of the page? Is there any significant purpose for her being placed there? What are you using to balance the composition?

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It has more balance with the cat in there. Your shading is all the same value.

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Again why is the character the center of the page and you should try avoiding chopping off her legs like you are currently doing.


hmm Nice critiques. but i don't really think its a problem them being placed wrong :P its just sketches, so lets not begin talking about purposes on pictures we don't know anything about, I don't see why that matters here.
However, i agree on the legs part. its not good artistic profit to chop off hard parts.

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This skill level is beyond meny i have seen, your art is amazing, keep up this progress.

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Blackmage wrote:
Your composition is really weak in both pictures.

First one
Why is the character at the center of the page? Is there any significant purpose for her being placed there? What are you using to balance the composition?

The second
It has more balance with the cat in there. Your shading is all the same value.

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The third one

Again why is the character the center of the page and you should try avoiding chopping off her legs like you are currently doing.


hmm Nice critiques. but i don't really think its a problem them being placed wrong :P its just sketches, so lets not begin talking about purposes on pictures we don't know anything about, I don't see why that matters here.

Because to many artist that is the actual purpose of the sketch, to define these things such as purpose and placement, what is the piece suppose to be portraying to the viewer. Sketching is the stage where these thoughts, ideas, and feelings start to take form and shape. If sketching didn't hold this purpose then why would we bother doing it in the first place instead of just jumping into a full blown piece. Now I will emit this may not be the same for everyone, and others may not see it that way, but still... do you see where I am coming from here?

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 10:05 pm 
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I absolutely love your art :D I'm not going to critique it because I'm not that good at drawing myself xD I absolutely lobe it though;all of them

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:47 am 
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Thanks for the support guys ^^.

@Blackmage: I admit that I do have bad composition but I hope to get better on it... eventually... ><

@Brain132: my colouring skills are not that good though...

I tried colouring the female first and experimented with composition and styles. I'm so slow at everything I do though... >< If possible, please give some opinions with support. It really helps me learn about my weaknesses.

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:45 am 
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The Beach background looks really cheesy but I think you did pretty well otherwise

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 10:42 am 
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I agree with narutofox. Although the back ground isn't too bad. And you did good with the female :)


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 11:32 am 
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Lol I meant to say it's a little cheesy but I'm sure if you practice it could turn out well? Idk how Photoshop works so isk if practicig helps with that kinda stuff xD

Edit: the coloring In the middle looks like she's very pale and has gray hair a little :P

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 11:37 am 
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Gotta agree with narutofox180, the bg could need some work. Add some other people and other things to make it more interesting

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@narutofox180: The background was a bit too cheesy for me as well but I couldn't think of any place that is decent that she can wear those. ><

@Son44: I'll try drawing the people maybe when I have time. I just want to start colouring the prince first ^^. Sutari gave me some tips in colouring so I'm going to use it in the next coloured artwork with Photoshop.

I also drew another sketch. This sketch was influenced by watching too much horror films so I had the idea of drawing something that relates to horror. Took alot of time as well but I didn't actually record how much hours it took since I wasn't interest in finishing it at first.

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 12:15 am 
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That's soo cool :D the only thig that's a little off is the necks too long..I think xD

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@narutofox180: To be honest, I'm not sure of the neck myself... ^^'


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ya it seems a little long also her head is wider than her torso

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The background was a bit too cheesy for me as well but I couldn't think of any place that is decent that she can wear those.

It was a good idea for a back ground. We're just saying that the background was poorly done (at least thats what I meant). The girl looked good, and then the back ground didn't have very good graphic. So it looks like a girl in a place that's too fake for her.

Really nice :) Were you watching a horror movie with voodoo?


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:03 am 
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The background was a bit too cheesy for me as well but I couldn't think of any place that is decent that she can wear those.

It was a good idea for a back ground. We're just saying that the background was poorly done (at least thats what I meant). The girl looked good, and then the back ground didn't have very good graphic. So it looks like a girl in a place that's too fake for her.

Really nice :) Were you watching a horror movie with voodoo?



That's what I meant too I guess she took it the wrong way. The beach is a perfect place for somebody to be wearing a swimsuit :)

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@Brain132: I don't exactly remember but what I do remember was that they mostly have scary dolls...

@narutofox180: I misinterpreted it the wrong... sorry ><

Here is the coloured sketch of the prince. It took me almost the whole day to actually thought of how to colour this one and what background to use. Did some changes as well from the original sketch since I find it more attractive without the bandage on the head ^^. Thanks Sutari for the tips it really helped me!

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