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 Post subject: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_O)
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:10 pm 
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Well, I've finally perfected the lead character in my WIP manga. Which means I can draw soulless, bored-looking bishies. Which means that, ladies and gents, this is cause for celebration! :mrgreen: To commemorate this occasion, I am officially starting a thread of my art. I revamped my style and got a Sharpie pen, it's Thanksgiving, I just found out they're making an epic Black Rock Shooter video game, and the world is just so dang peachy right now and I actually don't wish they'd just die. :lol: (Vocaloid fans will get it...) And I'm thinking about making a DeviantArt account, too. Be it known, also, that I've been drawing for just two years, but I've come a LONG way, and it all began with a Google search two years ago that led me here. Thank you, MangaTutorials! *done with speech*

I will increase the number of drawings as time goes on. Fear not~

To start...I've just got one picture. xD My scanner works now, so it'll actually be good quality! (*Note: This is the original picture, not edited on the computer in any way!*)

This is the lead for said WIP manga, which I plan to do later on, after I've built a fanbase. His name's Troy. He's an emotionless, unbeatable cyborg death machine (lol so blunt) so I was going for a bored-meets-paranoid look. I had to scale the image after I scanned it, so I don't know if it got smushied, and the scanner cut off his right shoulder for some random reason...o_O Either way, he wouldn't let himself be drawn correctly before. But yesterday, everything fell into place and I'm so effin' proud of myself! xD
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Moar will come. I appreciate constructive criticism, but (*message to certain people I've seen in my short time here*) there's a difference between constructive criticism and open flaming, and I DON'T DO WELL WITH FLAMING! T-T (No, seriously. I spaz out and think I'm a horrible person and whatnot...blame teh OCD.) So please be merciful, and I'll be nice to you...and give you cookies?...

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 Post subject: Re: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:17 pm 
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Hey, his neck looks a little long and his shoulders are a little skinny.

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 Post subject: Re: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_
PostPosted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:35 pm 
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For some reason I can only see the top of the person's head. The hair looks nice though lol. Looks like you colored in crayons. If thats the case, I'd advise something else like coloring pencils. They leave less white spaces and are actually easier with the sharp points.


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 Post subject: Re: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_
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For some reason I can only see the top of the person's head. The hair looks nice though lol. Looks like you colored in crayons. If thats the case, I'd advise something else like coloring pencils. They leave less white spaces and are actually easier with the sharp points.


o_O I did use colored pencils, though...

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 Post subject: Re: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_
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Yeah, I can finally see the whole thing now. Never mind XD. Yeah, the nick is too long, and the shadowing under the chin could use some lightening. Other than that I think its great :)


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 Post subject: Re: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_
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Yeah, I can finally see the whole thing now. Never mind XD. Yeah, the nick is too long, and the shadowing under the chin could use some lightening. Other than that I think its great :)


Now that I think about it, I probably made it a bit too skinny, too...okay, I'll keep that in mind~

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 Post subject: Re: Titania's Uberly Aweshum Epic Drawings! (Or are they? o_
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Not too bad actually. I quite like it but just as Jaidurn said neck is too long and shoulders are skinny.

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