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 Post subject: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:09 pm 
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My old artwork since i draw it in Feb..

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new artwork:
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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:26 am 
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Looks good, nice clean lines. I'm not too talented so I can't give many crits. Although how is the kid in the first pic holding the sharp edge of the sword with his hand?

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:29 pm 
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ahh..actually,the sword have the cover...


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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:31 pm 
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I like the way you drew that girl, you should draw more of them. C:

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:52 pm 
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ok..i will post more my artwork..thanx yaa


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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:01 pm 
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last month artwork..plez comment

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:03 pm 
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Redryuga wrote:
ahh..actually,the sword have the cover...


Oh... :oops:

Nice last drawing.

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:35 am 
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another one..

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
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You seem to have front view of faces down, but the profile view is looking a little wonky. Try moving the eyes back on the head and make them a little smaller. Also make the jaw come out further.

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 3:25 pm 
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You seem to have front view of faces down, but the profile view is looking a little wonky. Try moving the eyes back on the head and make them a little smaller. Also make the jaw come out further.


Yea I'm really bad with profiles too. The chin and forehead are much harder to capture from the side for me.

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 Post subject: Re: My artwork-Redryuga
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