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What should I try to tackle next?
Color 50%  50%  [ 2 ]
Right silly goose 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Shading 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
A 40-year-old woman 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
Realism 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
Left silly goose 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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Dezardelm
 Post subject: Will's GB Scribbles and Honey Mustard
PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:11 pm 
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These are just a bunch of scribbles done on the GB. If there is anything wrong wih them in general, as in something my drawing needs in all of these pictures, critiques on that'd be appreciated. And sorry for the bad quality, like I said, all done on the tiny GB of the old ages >_>

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My first digital drawing of the school year, and my first drawing up on the new GB. The new GB's a great improvement, it's caught the attention of many of the new members too.

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Matt
 Post subject: Re: Will's GB Scribbles and Honey Mustard
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Whoa. So much spirit in those drawings. They have that "alive" look that everyone wants to get. Really nice.

(I like the second one.)
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Dezardelm
 Post subject: Re: Will's GB Scribbles and Honey Mustard
PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:24 am 
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Thanks a bunch Matt, I try to give my drawings at least a bit of dynamic. Aslo, thanks for posting on here, it's good to have someone finally put up a reply XD

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I like the last piece :D.. Gives out a very calm feeling. Awesome stuff :D.

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Dezardelm
 Post subject: Re: Will's GB Scribbles and Honey Mustard
PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 6:16 pm 
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http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/1420/atechnoslave.jpg
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http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/3738/acarz.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9711/amountainous.jpg
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http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/7488/alazor.jpg
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1748/araptor.jpg

Temporary update till I have time to go resize this crap >_> Sorry bout that, just don't have the time right now, gotta go to scouts, they should be fixed by this time tomorrow though. DA not updated yet either.

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The one with the mountains is cool. Also, so was the one with the milk girl, but her eyes were too close together. That picture alone reminded me a LOT of Sora no Otoshimono.

Sorry I don't take the time to do a real in-depth critique. School eats my time like a starved glutton. (And so does English class, obviously . . . I had comparisons drilled in for three weeks straight.)
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 Post subject: Re: Will's GB Scribbles and Honey Mustard
PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 11:48 pm 
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I really dunno where to begin. What sort of critique do you want, and on which one of them?

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Dezardelm
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:29 pm 
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Oh, a response XD I don't check here that often, sorry. Basically just an overall critique, problems you see reoccuring in all of the pieces.

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